So, i was inspired into making Whipped into a more than one shot, but with different couples and what not... (THANK YOU, sweetthings8). This is my first NejiTen guys, don't be too harsh on me… but be harsh and tell me what you do and do not like, and my mistakes and stuff, so I can improve, you know?
Because even the Mighty Neji must fall to someone...
Regular, thoughts, INNER'S THOUGHTS/ DIALOGUE
And remember, dear and faithful reviewers, Crowlady doesn't own anything but her name and the plot!
He opened the door to the fridge and sighed in content. Nothing like an early morning jog- WITH TENTEN- to get the blood pumping. SURE… OR YOU WANTED TO SEE TENTEN RUN IN THAT SPORTS BRA AND WIFE BEATER.
Tenten walked into the kitchen and shot him a smile before bumping him out of her way with her hip. Neji could feel his body temperature heat up by 100 degrees. She grabbed a Power-C Vitamin Water and an Apple, and jumped onto the island in the middle of the kitchen. He grabbed an XXX [AN: lol} and leaned on the counter across from her.
"Hn." She rolled her eyes and continued eating. STUPID YOU'RE NOT GONNA GET ANY LIKE THAT! LET ME. No!
"Hn, Tenten?" she looked up at his concerned, yet quizzical tone and raised a brow.
"Are you…feeling…okay?" she swallowed her bite.
"Yes…why?" came her guarded response. Stop! Idiot! YOU JUST CALLED YOURSELF AN IDIOT. DUMBASS…
"Well, you were a bit slow this morning. Did you hurt yourself training with the girls, or eat too much with them afterward?" Immediately the room crackled with tension, Tenten narrowed her eyes, and put down her Power-C.
"What are you trying to say, Neji? That I'm getting fat?" she spat. I hate you. YOU'RE WELCOME.
"No, I just noticed-"she lunged at him and had him pinned on the floor within twenty seconds, her favorite knife hovering above him…area.
"Repeat that, Honey." She bit. He switched their positions and threw her knife across the room.
"Hn, just kidding." He sounded calm and collected on the outside but on the inside he was shaking like a leaf. Shock still written on her face, she was angry and he was hot, their breath fanning each other's faces, only a centimeter apart, he did what any man in his situation would do… he ran. Tenten wasn't just beautiful she was dangerous, especially when provoked (something his stupid inner had been doing for the last five minutes or so). He heard her scream in anger, and knew her shock had worn off. Neji booked it to the closest best friend's house, Sasuke's.
Tenten caught him when he got to their yard and dragged him home... kicking, screaming, and begging for mercy.
Damn, I'm never gonna hear the end of this…
Hey! Again! So how was it? Review please! And just in case you didn't know, the one provoking Tenten is Neji's inner. So, anyway… please review and tell me how it was, it's my first NejiTen. You really should review though… and again i would just like to thank sweetthings8 for inducing my epiphany... YOU ROCK!
Love,
Crowlady