Wow, only a day and I got votes, and the winner is ... (sorry that i forgot to mention that there was only a 1 day window for the vote *laughs weakly while rubbing back of head)

Louise (if you are dissatisfied with the results, if upon enough requests I will make a secondary story about Luffy being summoned by said Mage, not limited to only Tiffania.)

Actually the main reason I had trouble deciding because I kind of wanted Luffy and Saito to interact and also Luffy would end up walking into a lot of awkward moments, and would help Louise act a little less bitchy.

Well on with the story!


Louise Françoise le Blanc de la Vallière a petite girl appearing around 13 (actually 16) with long pink hair has red eyes, her attire, much like most of the surrounding females, She wore a white button-up blouse with a black skirt, black thigh-high socks, black shoes, and a matching black cloak clasped by a large golden clasp that had a pentagram on it (AN: -_-) Clutched in her right hand was a stick awand, was horribly nervous as she stood in the clearing, and was beginning to show. Simply saying that she had rather high expectations for herself was a horrible understatement.

This is kind of her last chance to prove that she was truly nobility, that she could perform magic. All she had to do was something pretty much any mage could do, just summon a familiar, she was the only one yet to go and this was going to change her life for the better. If she failed at this she would be sent home in shame and married off as though she was a tool for the family to gain power, basically making her a trophy wife for some jackass.

The incantation began.

"I beg of you...

My servant that exists somewhere in this vast universe...

My divine, beautiful, wise, powerful servant...

Heed my call, I wish from very bottom of my heart...

Answer to my guidance and appear!"

around 30 seconds had passed with virtually nothing happening, Louise was getting horribly anxious and was mentally begging for something, ANYTHING, to show up. Someone in the surrounding crowd, a blonde boy, Guiche who had rather frilly clothing and carried a rose, and also had a similar black cape like Louise was wearing (The attire mostly set himself as either a playboy, a stereotypical gay man, or both). However as soon has he opened his mouth a rather large explosion happened covering everyone in a dust cloud.

"This is her biggest explosion yet!" a voice shouted in the dust cloud, followed by laughter. Only to stop when a new voice no one recognized popped up "Hey, what's so funny?... Why'd everyone stop?"


(in portal about 30 seconds ago)

Luffy was falling back for a little while when he re-heard the same voice saying something that just confused him 'servant? who's she talking about?'

In a matter of seconds a portal like the one that he first jumped into, except this one was a bright white light, appeared quite a distance away. "Another mystery light eh?" a smirk found its way to Luffy's face. Soon his dissent slowed and soon came to a halt, untill he shot toward it, constantly speeding up toward the dubbed 'mystery light'.

when he finally passed through it there was he there was nothing but laughing, smoke, and dust surrounding him "Hey, what's so funny?" when he spoke everyone suddenly shut up "Why'd everyone stop?"


As the dust and smoke cleared everyone was baffled. Where a familiar was meant to appear was standing a person who had raven colored hair, had a stitched up scar under one of his eyes and a huge X-shaped scar on his chest. The stranger was wearing a strawhat, a red open shirt, thus showing his large scar, and had a pair of shorts with sandals.

"Well done Miss Vallière, it seems you've summoned your familiar without much trouble."

"-Snicker- I never would have thought you'd summon a lowly commoner! -Snicker-" Kirche was the first to speak. She was a tall, tanned girl. She had long red hair that covered her right eye and two long bangs that framed her breasts. She wore a variation of the uniform that everyone else wore; a bronze ringlets around her neck, her shirt was opened so as to show off some cleavage, and instead of the thigh-high socks and dress shoes, wore thigh-high, heeled leather shoes.

After this everyone was shouting similar comments and laughing, some even suggesting that he was just someone who she hired to play as her familiar. "I... I just made a little mistake! That's all!" Louise stuttered, completely flustered about the accusations and taunting. "Mr. Colbert!" "Ms. Vallière, re-attempting the summoning ritual would spit upon everything sacred about the tradition! Now complete the contract!" Shouted the man dubbed as Mr. Colbert, he was a balding man wearing glasses, a purple robe, and carried a staff.

Louise, walked up to the raven haired stranger, who was supposed to be her familiar, grumbling, she looked up to his eyes and said "You should consider yourself lucky that a commoner would get this from a noble"


Luffy was absolutely shocked, and tried going over what lead up to this. 'okay, I was just walking around bored, found some mystery portal, walked through, fell, ended up here, and now I'm being kissed by a Noble, the horrible people who considered themselves above everyone else for almost nothing!' All this thinking was making his head hurt. The attention to his headache was however short-lived as he felt a burning sensation writhing through his body, as though a branding iron was shoved onto him.

He dropped to his knees clutching the spot the burned the most, holding back a small scream. Unfortunately accidentally releasing a wave of Haki.* rendering almost everyone unconscious. All but 3 people that were struggling to recover from the onslaught onto their senses.


The only conscious people left were Colbert, who was staggering and heaving for air, Louise, who was on the ground struggling to stay awake, and a small girl, with blue hair, a similar outfit to Louise, had a small pair of glasses, and a Shepard's crook that she was using as a support since she was shaking like a leaf, named Tabitha.

All 3 of them were thinking practically the same thought 'what was that?'


Chapter done, review, give me your thoughts, and I am willing to accept ideas

* since Luffy has only recently gained control of his Haki he will have some trouble having total control, so under extreme conditions he may accidentally release it

Also I wasn't specific about where the runes would show up because I can't see Luffy as Gandalfr, I mean he doesn't use any weapons and I think he's strong enough as it is, so should I make an original rune, stick with Gandalfr, or choose Tiffania's rune, God's heart, Lifdrasil(I can't remember what it does, did they even explain it? if you know please tell me)