Pokémon: The Altered Origin Chapter 2: The Mysterious Girl Appears.
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I woke up slowly but surely. "Ouchhhhhh, what tackled me?" I said while proceeding to stand up. I blinked my eyes several times to focus them. I saw Bianca staring at me while the other girl wasn't paying attention to me at all. "So you're Bianca, the assistant of Professor Juniper, right?" asked the mysterious girl. "Yes, that's me," Bianca replied while looking away from me and looking at the girl. "So I can get my Starter Pokémon from you too, right?" "Yep," Bianca once again opened the red and white Ball Capsule.
During that little conversation of theirs, I managed to shake of the dizziness. I also got a better look at the mysterious girl. She has an abundance of curves, in the right places too. She has some muscles, probably enough to do handstands, she has a pair of mismatched eyes, the right one is purple and the left is pink. Her lips are thick and luscious, and she has defined cheekbones. She has very defined dimples; her hair is full of ringlets and reaches her hips. In addition, this girl has many colors in her hair; shades of purple, pink, red, blue, blonde and brown. She has an olive toned complexion. Her arms, legs and mid-section were toned, but it was only barely visible, but I could see it. After their talk, I walked over and stood next to the girl. Bianca showed us the Pokéballs again. The middle is an Oshawott and on the left is a Snivy. Bianca explained once more. We silently nodded looked at each other without turning our heads and then we went for the balls, the both of us grasping the middle ball.
"Oh nonononononnoooo, you don't push me over, knock me out and then think that you can steal my Pokémon," I said to the girl giving her a harsh stare. "Well, I don't see your name on it, so this Oshawott is mine." She yelled, then she pulled the ball towards her. I responded by pulling it back. "Well, before you rudely pushed me out of the way, I was going to grab it, so let go of it!" "You said it yourself, you WERE about to grab it, so why didn't you touch it?" I was about to until you came like a FREAKING tauros, bulldozing me out of the way and knocking me out!" "Hey guys, there is still one left." Bianca said awkwardly pointing to the ball with the Snivy.
Then we started repeatedly pulling in the hope that one of us lost grip on it. / Unknown to us all, Hugh was standing by the stairs, silently watching us in amazement and irritation. He face palmed "How can they be so childish?" He walked up to us grabbing the Pokéball and giving me the Oshawott ball, Then, he picked up the other ball and gave it to the girl. "Here now you got a Pokémon too. Happy!?" She stared at Hugh before giving a devilish smile showing her teeth. "Now that I think about it, yes very happy, because now I have the advantage over this guy here," she pointed at me. "My Snivy can easily beat his Oshawott. Thanks." She said while walking down the stairs.
"Grr, the nerve of that girl." "Hehe, now that the quarrel is over, I can present you with your own Pokédex" Bianca showed us three rectangular shaped devices with two screens. "ALMOST FORGOT THAT!" This time I reacted quickly and stepped to the side dodging the girl. "Hey! Can't you watch where you're going, girl?" She went straight for Bianca, grabbing one of the Pokédexes and then walked towards the stairs. "Sheesh, now stealing? This girl has no limits, does she?" I whispered. Then she stopped dead in her tracks. Without turning, she replied venomously, "This is the last time that you call me like that." "Oh no, I'm so scared" I said mockingly. "Artemis" "What" I replied, not paying attention to what she said. She turned to look coldly at me. "My name is Artemis. Remember it well, "cause it's the name of the person that's gonna hand your ass to ya in a battle, Next time we meet." "Pffh," I scoffed "We'll see." She turned and continued on her way. "Just for future reference, the name is Chevano."
"Chevano, eh? I remember it." Half turning her head then turning it again, walking down the rest of the gray stairs down, disappearing out of our sight."Anyways, I`m going to route 19 to catch some more Pokémon," Hugh said grabbing a Pokédex. Later, Bianca and Chevano." Giving the two finger salute and he went down the stairs too. "I`m must be going too, said Bianca. She walked past me, stopping some distance away and turned to face me. "I need to return to professor juniper, Bye Chevano!" Shewaved and then she was gone too. "Well, that wraps things up." I said. I looked down at the Pokéball in my hand. "Ohhh yeah, I have to introduce myself to the little guy, Come out Oshawott!"
The Pokéball burst open and released a white beam that formed into the Oshawott. He looked frantically around "Osha, Osha" he said with each turn. "I'm behind you." He turned towards me. I kneeled down to him "Hey, Oshawott, I'm your new trainer and my name is Chevano." "OSHA," He replied happily, hugging my knee. "Hehe, he likes me already," I picked him up under his arms. "So, how do you like the name Zeth?" He smiled "Osh." "Then that's gonna be your new name" "Osha" I smiled, putting him on my shoulder. "Hold on, we're going to Route 19 to train you. "Oshawott" He gave a big smile with a convenient face. "Alright, let's go!" I yelled, running towards Route 19 under the clear blue sky.
That was chapter 2
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Edit:10/21/2013: Fixed the grammar,Divided paragraphs.