Hi everyone. Here's Chapter 1, and thank you for all the comments/reviews and alerts.
Disclaimer: I don't know Naruto.
"Kyuubi speaking."
'Naruto thinking.'
"Minato speaking."
"Jutsu shouting."
-x-
Six years later
Sarutobi Hiruzen was currently rubbing his temples. He could not help but think how the secret of Naruto and Kyuubi got out to the rest of the town. He had been observing Danzo with his special crystal ball, but he could not find anything that Danzo did to leak out the information regarding the Kyuubi's sealing.
"Minato…what would you do now? Your son is hated by the village you died fighting for. I wish for you to rest in peace." The old timer sighed.
Meanwhile in a different part of the village, a young blonde boy was currently being chased by two Chuunin and three Genin, who were told by a Jounin that if they slay the 'monster' they'll be seen as heroes within Konoha and would be rewarded greatly. Sadly, it would not be the same for Naruto, since if he wanted to live, he'd probably have to take the lives of the five ninja that were chasing him, and if not, he dies.
Running away swiftly as his attackers descended upon him from all angles, he turned abruptly and headed towards an empty alleyway. Chasing him into the alleyway, the five Shinobi got into an attack formation and all took out kunai, throwing them at Naruto hoping that they could just quickly kill him and get then get the rewards they desired, but their hope was misplaced. Naruto dodged every kunai that they threw at them with experience, since he had been attacked for an unknown reason.
"Damn it! Stay still you demon brat! Let us kill you and we shall be known as the heroes of Konoha!" The Chuunin said and started doing a series of hand seals. "Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu!" and a large fireball suddenly erupted from the Chuunin's mouth and started heading towards Naruto, burning his left arm and leg slightly because Naruto had dodged a second too late.
"Hold still you demon! Why can't you just die like everyone wants you too!?" One of the Genin said and threw multiple kunai and shuriken at Naruto, which cut his arms and legs, but didn't get embedded into his flesh.
"Why? Why does everyone hate me? Oji-san doesn't hate me. Why does everyone want me to die? I've done nothing wrong." Naruto cried out, softly sobbing.
"Everyone hates you because you're a demon! Now just die! Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu!" The other Chuunin said and another fireball which was roughly equivalent to the fireball that was launched at him before.
Naruto froze at the Chuunin's comment. 'Am I really just a demon like everyone else says? Should I just die so these five can be heroes of Konoha?' Suddenly, everything turned black.
'What? Where am I? What happened to that big fireball that the Chuunin spat out of his mouth that was heading towards me? What about-…' Naruto was cut off when two big eyes suddenly appeared in the darkness, eyes that had a total of four concentrated circles around the pupil.
"You are in your own mind; you have awakened the Transcendent Bloodline, the Rinnegan, which is the two eyes that you see now."The voice answered.
"You can read my mind? How?" Naruto asked
"Our minds were intertwined at birth. This is how I can read your mind."
"What do I do now then? I'm about to get killed in reality by a giant fireball if you haven't noticed!"
"No need to worry. No time has past in the real world." The voice answered. "You will die if you don't do something soon."
"Wait! You said I awakened a Transcendent Bloodline? Which are the two eyes that I see now? What do I do with them?" Naruto asked
"The Rinnegan is an extremely powerful bloodline if you use it properly, but it will be very challenging. However, what you see now is the final form of the Rinnegan; this is shown by having a total of four concentrated circles around the pupil. You will only have one circle around yours, but that will be enough to protect you against those ninja that are trying to kill you." The voice said. "Let me warn you before you wake up, you need to act carefully. The Rinnegan is sentient and during its first stage, it might force you to kill needlessly."
"I don't mind killing anyone that tries to kill me first. I hold no more love for this village besides a handful of people. Do you know why most of the people hate me so much?" Naruto said.
"I am sorry, but you'll need to find out yourself. Now go! The fireball is getting closer and closer!"
"I thought you said no time passes in my mind?" Naruto asked.
"No. If you stay in your mind long enough, time passes in the real world. But it's miniscule unless you stay in your mind for a long time. Now get out!" And with a shout, a wave of compressed chakra came from the eyes and forced Naruto back into reality, where he last saw a burst of red and blue and blacked out.
-x-
Kakashi, or Inu as his Anbu codename, had just finished an A-Rank assassination mission, killing an A-Rank missing-nin from Suna. He had just been on his way towards the Hokage's tower, when he saw that there was two Chuunin and three Genin chasing after a six year old boy. But that boy wasn't like any other kid; he had the Kyuubi sealed within him, meaning he probably had the most potential out of the entire village, but that doesn't mean that the people of Konoha would actually like him.
Kakashi had heard in the Anbu lounge that Uzumaki Naruto had the demon Kyuubi sealed within him at birth. Kakashi had always thought that even though the 4th Hokage was possibly the strongest ninja in the world at his prime, but he still thought that it was nearly impossible for someone to defeat the strongest of all Bijuu.
He decided to follow Naruto secretly, and just incase that he might die. He was not as shallow as the other villagers or ninja, and saw Naruto for who he really was – a six year old boy that was being punished for something he didn't do.
Kakashi saw that Naruto ran into an empty alleyway that was a dead-end from the Anbu's point of view, but Naruto didn't know that. He saw that the five assailants where throwing multiple kunai at Naruto, which he dodged with an unknown skill. 'He must be used to dodging dangerous weapons hurled at him from experience. Poor kid.' Kakashi thought and watched as a Chuunin fired a medium sized fireball at Naruto, which made his blood boil.
He then saw the second fireball that was headed towards Naruto. This time, Naruto was just frozen there, and as the fireball got closer and closer, Kakashi could see that Naruto's eyes had changed. A concentrated circle had suddenly popped out of both his pupils and surrounded his pupils. The Anbu Captain then saw Naruto proceeded to dodge the fireball with great speed and picking up a kunai on the ground and sprinted towards his attackers.
Kakashi widened his eyes in surprise and quickly Shunshin-ed down with a kunai drawn, in-order to protect Naruto from the horrors of killing at such a young age. 'Please let me make it in time. I don't know why I waited to observe what Naruto would; instead of just protect him from the start.' Unfortunately, Kakashi was too late, as Naruto had caught one of the Chuunin by surprise and slit his throat, spraying blood over Naruto's chest and face. The young Jinchuuriki then turned towards the other Chuunin and Genin, who were scared out of their wits at the six year old radiating killing intent.
As Naruto ran towards the remaining four Shinobi, Kakashi suddenly appeared behind him and gave Naruto a swift chop on the back of the neck, knocking Naruto out and disappearing all in one motion. The last thing the four attackers heard was the words that put fear into their souls. "You four can spend the rest of your lives…in Ibiki's interrogation room!" Kakashi said as he headed towards the Hokage's Tower.
In the meantime, Sarutobi Hiruzen, known as the 'God of Shinobi' was being defeated by paperwork. 'If only I could find a way to beat paperwork. It'll be the cause of my death if I don't appoint another successor soon.' Sarutobi thought as he sighed, and repeatedly signed, read over or discarded paperwork.
Suddenly, Kakashi appeared and Sarutobi felt relieved that he could take his eyes off paperwork for at least a while.
"Hokage-sama, it has gotten worse. I just witnessed two Chuunin and three Genin trying to kill Uzumaki Naruto, because they were told that they would be the 'heroes' of Konoha and would be rewarded." Inu said.
"What?! Is Naruto hurt? What is the extent of his injuries?" Sarutobi sighed. "I fear that I cannot do anything about Danzo and his Root Anbu. He is very cunning and smart, and I do not have solid proof that he and his supporters have been telling the town that the Kyuubi is sealed in Naruto."
"Also, I believe Naruto has a Bloodline in the form of a Doujutsu." Kakashi said.
"No. It shouldn't be possible. Both Minato and Kushina didn't have any kind of Bloodline what-so-ever." Sarutobi said.
"Are you sure Hokage-sama? I saw his eyes; they grew a concentrated circle around both his pupils. Even I have never heard or seen of a Doujutsu like that." The Anbu Captain said and could see that the Sandaime was a little bit distressed.
"No…it couldn't be." Sarutobi said
"What is it Hokage-sama? Do you know of it?"
"Yes. It is called the Rinnegan, which was only heard of in myths. It is rumoured that the Ridoku Sennin, creator of the ninja world had the Rinnegan as well. It is a Transcendent Bloodline which manifests in random people that are destined to do great things." Hiruzen said.
"Incredible…Do you know what its powers are?"
"No. Not even I do not know much about the legendary Rinnegan. But when I was in my prime, I heard rumours that it possessed incredible power and was able to manipulative all six elements." The third Hokage said.
"Impossible. I thought there were only five elemental manipulations: wind, water, fire, lightning and earth." Kakashi replied
"No. There are six. Adding to the five elemental manipulations that you said; there is indeed a sixth – gravity. I guess it has something to do with changing the force of gravity within a certain range."
"That's extraordinary. He could make the gravity around him constantly weighing him down in-order to increase his normal speed." Kakashi said and a yawn broke their conversation.
"Hey Oji-san, how did I get here? Last thing I remember was talking to two huge eyes." Naruto stretched. "Wait, what happened to those five ninja's chasing me. And why am I sprayed with blood? Oh hey Inu."
"Don't you remember what happened in that alleyway Naruto?" Kakashi asked, surprised that Naruto couldn't remember slitting the Chuunin's throat.
"No. All I remember was that I kind of blacked out after the second fireball that the Chuunin's spat out of their mouth. Could you tell my why I have blood on my clothes and face? And what's the Rinnegan? A voice in my mind told me I awakened it." Naruto said, his face remaining neutral and speaking with a monotone.
"Well, just as the second ball of fire was going to hit you, you moved with get haste and…slit the attacker's throat, that's how you got the blood on yourself. I then knocked you out and brought you here, but I did threaten the remaining four that they would be in Ibiki's torture cell for eternity." Kakashi said
"As for your second question Naruto-kun, the Rinnegan is a Transcendent Bloodline, which only manifests in people who are destined to do great things, whether those things are good or bad. To my knowledge, the Rinnegan's power is measured by the amount of concentrated circles around your pupils. You have one circle at the moment." Sarutobi said. "Also, the Rinnegan allows the user to manipulate all six elements, which are fire, lightning, wind, water, earth and gravity. I'm sure there is more to the Rinnegan than what I have just stated, but it will probably come with practise using it."
"Thanks Oji-san and Anbu-san." Naruto sighed. "Oji-san, why does everyone hate me? Did I do something wrong?"
"No Naruto-kun. I can't tell you now, maybe when you're older. But some people in this village hold grudges because their loved ones are no longer with them." The Sandaime said.
"So I killed their loved ones or something? I've never killed someone besides today, and I couldn't even remember what happened today. Isn't there a law against harming citizens of Konoha?!" Naruto cried out.
"Forgive me Naruto-kun, but…" Sarutobi trailed off.
"But what old man? But what? Oji-san, I no longer hold anymore love for this village. I want to explore the world." Naruto said, crossing his arms.
"But…Naruto, you're only six. You couldn't possibly defend yourself against bandits or even rogue ninjas." Kakashi said.
"How about we make a deal Naruto-kun." Hiruzen said, clearly saddened at Naruto's actions, but it wasn't Naruto's fault. "When you reach the rank of Chuunin, I will grant you a pass that will allow you to travel the world, whilst staying at least somewhat loyal towards Konoha, so Konoha will not be able to make you a missing-nin or send Hunter-nin after you. When this happens, you'll be granted Sannin-level travel rights, but nothing else. Also, you must promise that you won't do anything to hurt Konoha as a whole. Deal?" Sarutobi said, each word breaking his heart even more.
"Hmm…fine Oji-san, you've got a deal. However, as long as the Hokage remains a precious person of mine, I will not hurt Konoha. However, if any Konoha shinobi try and attack me during my travels, I will not hesitate to retaliate." Naruto said
"That's acceptable Naruto. Now how about we go to that ramen store that you like so much?" The Sandaime said, and Naruto's eyes showed a little bit of happiness. "But let's get you some new clothes first."
-x- Uchiha Compound
"Hey nii-san! You promised to teach me a jutsu today!" A chibi Sasuke said.
Poking Sasuke's forehead with his index and middle finger Itachi said: "Forgive me Sasuke, not today. I have a meeting with some Jounin today, and I can't be late."
"You always have some sort of excuse. Hmph." Sasuke pouted.
"Maybe another time Sasuke. Why don't you ask father if he can show you the seals for the Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu? I think you're ready to learn it. You do have enough chakra for it." Itachi said, cheering up his otouto.
"Okay aniki!" Sasuke said and ran into his father's study, intent on learning a new jutsu. "Father," Sasuke walked into the room. "Itachi-nii-san said that I'm ready to learn the Goukakyuu no Jutsu and said that you'll show it to me. Can you father? I really want to learn it."
"Hmm…I see that you have enough chakra to perform the jutsu. Very well, come with me to the river." Fugaku said and Sasuke followed obediently.
At the river, Fugaku proceeded to show Sasuke the necessary seals for the technique that will allow him to wear the clan symbol of a red and white paper fan proudly. "Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu." Fugaku yelled and a large fireball erupted out of his mouth and created shockwaves on the surface of the water, clearly impressing Sasuke.
"Now you try Sasuke." Fugaku said as he stepped back and allowed Sasuke to step forward and prove his worth.
Sasuke walked towards the riverside and stopped. He breathed calmly. In. Out. In. Out. Performing the correct hand seals, Fugaku heard a cry of "Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu!" and a small ball of fire barely escaped Sasuke's mouth before the jutsu ended, resulting in Sasuke doubling over to catch his breath.
"I see. So that's how it is. Maybe both Itachi and I were wrong about you." Sasuke's father said coldly, turning his back on his youngest son and walking back into the house.
'Damn it! My one chance at showing him that I'm worthy of the Uchiha clan symbol, and I screw it up! Maybe if I keep practising, he'll notice!' Sasuke thought and started the hand seals all over again, and if someone looked at the river near Sasuke's house, they could see a small boy blowing out from tiny balls of fire to streams of flames that came out of his mouth.
Meanwhile, Itachi was currently gazing out the window whilst preparing for his meeting. 'It seems I was correct to choose you, otouto. You will measure my capacity!' Itachi thought and Shunshin-ed away, heading towards the Jounin lounge at the Hokage's tower.
-x-
The Sandaime was currently at Ichiraku Ramen Stand, which happened to be Naruto's favourite ramen shop, and they loved it when Naruto came. Also, it was one of the few places that could make Naruto a little bit happier and the owners of the shop didn't discriminate against Naruto.
"Oji-san! Another bowl please!" Naruto said with a grin and immediately another bowl was placed in front of him.
"You know Naruto-kun, I've been think it over." Sarutobi said as he took out two scrolls out of his Hokage robes. "I'm terribly sorry for what the people in Konoha have done to you, so here are some scrolls on chakra control and 'The hand seals for all ninja' which I wrote myself."
"Thanks Oji-san! I really appreciate what your doing!" Naruto said, although the next sentence was spoken with hatred and malice. "However, I don't think you should apologize for idiots."
'Oh Minato, what would you do if you found out Naruto hated 90% of Konoha?' Sarutobi thought.
-x- Back at the Uchiha river
"Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu!" Sasuke yelled and another ball of fire was blown out of his mouth and caused some mild shockwaves on the surface of the river.
'I think I've got the hang of it. One more time!' "Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu!" and a significantly larger fireball was launched at the river, this time the fireball reached about halfway across the river. After the last execution of the Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu, Sasuke passed out from chakra exhaustion, and lay by the riverside.
Unknown to Sasuke, his father was watching from a window and saw Sasuke's accomplishment, in only one day! 'You truly are my son.' And with that thought, Fugaku made his way towards Sasuke and carried him back home, dropping him on his bed to recover his chakra.
"If something happens to Itachi, you will certainly make a great heir if you keep this up." Fugaku said as he exited Sasuke's room.
-x- Random Woods
Naruto had finished eating ramen, and made his way to an area of trees where he could practise his chakra control like the scroll said.
The first step in chakra control is tree climbing. During this exercise, you will have to walk vertically up a tree using chakra to stick your feet onto the tree's bark. Be warned that using too much chakra will crush the bark and using too little chakra will cause you to fall off.
"Tree climbing huh? Sounds like fun." Naruto said as he walked towards the closest tree and gathered his chakra at the soles of his feet. Feeling the chakra there, Naruto placed one foot on the tree trunk. Thinking it was stable, he carefully placed his other foot on the tree trunk as well. Thunk. Naruto fell.
Naruto stood up and tried again. This time, he stored up more chakra and slowly put a foot on the tree. Feeling it was safe, he put his other foot on the tree and he didn't fall. 'One step. Two steps. Three…' Thunk. Naruto fell again.
'Hmm…maybe if I continuously send chakra to the soles of my feet instead of just building up a lot of chakra there, then this might be easier.' Naruto thought and immediately put his new idea to work.
'One step. Two steps. Three steps. Four steps. Five steps. Yes! It worked…' Thunk. "Damn it! I need to maintain my concentration whilst doing this for it to work."
Repeatedly, Naruto kept trying to walk up the tree. 'One step. Two steps…Twenty steps…I can already feel my control improving. It feels a little bit easier to focus chakra to the soles of my feet.'
"One more time!" Naruto shouted and focused chakra to his feet for the last time that day.
-x-
End!EDIT: A Reader told me the Rinnegan was permanent, so Naruto is going to have it always activated.
Also, could anyone tell me how old Sasuke was when Itachi massacred the Uchiha clan? If he was six, then I'm going to make it like eight or nine.