Ok so two things. One: thank you for the responses and follows and favs and yeah. Two: like I keep saying in every story I write, they are out of character. I know this but someone always corrects me...so yes, they will not be in character because if they were then it would not suit the stories I make. So thank you for telling me that I should look up their personalities, but writing with them out of character gives me more freedom to create stories. Sorry for this mini-rant, but it annoys me when I clearly state something but am still corrected. So here is chapter 2.


*Sollux's Pov*

"He's dead."

"Eridan Ampora is dead."

Well, at least I thought that when he fell over, gashes all over his arms. But before he could hit the ground, I caught him, ever so grateful he was still breathing. Wasting no time, I carried him the distance to the hospital, thinking over the current situation. You see, I am flushed for Eridan. (a/n I keep breaking that stupid third wall but I am too lazy to go back and fix it :/ ) However, I made the mistake of telling Feferi, also explaining to her how I was planning to make him my matesprit today. Look how well that worked out? Instead, I get what is basically a suicide note from Eridan, that had told me his feelings for me. So, from what I've gathered, it's all Feferi's fault. I know she's flushed for me, but I never thought she was the type who scares, or in this case kills, others off in a "If I can't have you, no one can!" sense. Back to Eridan. While I've been mentally catching up, he has been taken into surgery or whatever, and I've been sitting here for about 10 minutes in the waiting room.

Oh look, speak of the devil, and she shall appear. That's right, it's Feferi. And of course she can't just shut up.

"Oh you poor thing! I know how hard this must be for you! Maybe I can...comfort you?" And of course, she had to add a wink.

"What the fuck do you want Feferi?" Clearly, she can't take a hint.

"What do you mean Sollux? I just want to help...ease your pain." Great, now she's batting her eyes and touching my arm...Barf!

"We both know it'th your fault to begin with, tho why not thut the hell up, and go away!" Now she's pouting.

"But- but- Sollux!"

"NO! You tried to hurt the only thing I care about! Now leave before I call thecurity!" She huffed and stomped her foot.

"Fine! But this isn't over!" Damn girl knows how to screech.

"Thut up you're hurting my earth!" Oh good she's walking, well more like stomping, away.

I sigh and leaned back. Why is this chair so uncomfortable? Right...I'm in the hospital waiting for Eridan.

"For Mr. Ampora?" At that I immediately leapt up, and pretty ran to the doctor.

"How ith he? Ith he ok?"


So that was chapter two...I have never been in a hospital waiting room before so this may or may not be accurate...yeah...again i am asking for at least one comment before i post chapter three, which is the very cheesy last chapter. The format always carries over weirdly because I copy and paste but it still hates me...so yeah I hope you enjoyed!