Hey guys! So I decided to edit the current chapters on this story and Dauntless Cake, so this is just edited, nothing changed! I swear! Anyways, sorry for not posting anything else to this story for a while, ive been going through a lot of shit and its taken time to get through it. I started school at the end of August and also Track and Jazz Band and the teacher just keeps pissing me off (got a new band director, fucking hate her) and im trying not to fuck everything else up so yeah. Anyways, enjoy the edited chapter! ~Clove the Dauntless Gryffindor

Chapter 1: River POV

"Hello Sweetie, its River."
"Who?"
"Really sweetie?"
"Oh, hello River, what is it?"
"I was wondering if you would like to come with me to ancient Egypt." There is a brief silence before he says, "Can the Ponds come along?" "Of course they can Doctor."
"Alright. We'll pick you up. Where are you exactly?"
"Italy, Roman Coliseum. April 3rd, 1988." "Alright River. Bye."
"Bye sweetie"
I hang up on my communicator and sit down on a pillar. Soon, I hear the whirring and wheezing sounds of the TARDIS and stand up. I hear Amy ask, "Can we go now?" I open the door and step inside, unnoticed.
"Just a minute, final checks." The Doctor says.
He looks in a mirror like thing on the control panel, taints his hair, and straightens his bowtie. "Doctor, your hair looks fine!" Amy and I say in a benevolent tone, also at the same time. "River? When did you get here?"
"Mother, I got here 5 minutes ago. Do keep up!" "Oh." I shake my head and chuckle. "Come on you three. Let's go" I say when Rory turns up. I go to turn and run straight into the Doctor.
"Hello River."
"Hello sweetie." I kiss his cheek and walk out of the TARDIS.

As I walk out, my communicator starts beeping as I get a signal from across the globe saying, 'Come to Egypt right now M-'
"River why is your communicator beeping?"
I quickly shut the communicator and immediately start setting up my vortex manipulator.
"I have to go."
"Where and why?"
"Doctor, Doctor, Doctor. Stop being so nosy," I bop him on the nose, "and because people need me in Egypt so you, Amy, and Rory stay here and have a nice little picnic. I'll send you a signal when I need you."
"It doesn't sound safe…"
Ugghhh. Sometimes he's so overprotective I don't know what to say.
"Sweetie. Stop being so overt and overprotective. I'll be fine. Just remember your first rule. The Doctor always-"
"No! I remember it! No need to say it aloud. Why can't we come?"
"Spoilers. Bye mum, bye dad." I give Amy and Rory a hug and kiss the Doctor.
In his ear I whisper, "I'll be fine. I love you." I break away and I look into the doctor's eyes, devoid of every emotion except for worry. When I hit the button on the vortex manipulator, I hear him mutter, "There's nothing wrong with being prudent…"
I sincerely hope he looks in his pockets.

So that is the new and fabulous chapter one! If it looks the same as before, tell me so I can write an angry email to the website. Alright, LOVE YOU ALL! 3 ~Clove the Dauntless Gryffindor