So here's chapter two
Luffy
"Uh damn that shitty caption "sanji said siting up in the bunker looking around to see everyone inside but luffy.
"I'm going to kill him nami growled sitting up rubbing the not on her head
"What happen chopper ask sitting up on top of zero who was still snoring
"That wasn't any super fun luffy bro" franky said sitting up dropping ussop on the floor
"Yeah luffy are you trying to kill us ussop growled than stop when he realize luffy wasn't in the bunker at all.
"Maybe he made cause we were ignoring him robin said picking up her book
"I'm going to kick his ass zero shot up (knocking chopper across the room)pulling all three swards out and stop just a few inches away from broke who was still sleeping.
"He not in hear ussop said walking to the door and push it wouldn't budge."
"Can't you get the door nami asked crossing her arms.
"Nope it won't budge ussop said
"Don't worry nami chawn I'll get it sanji said nocking ussop out of the way and pushed with all his might and it wouldn't budge.
"What wrong shitty cook door too strong for you zero said mockingly
"What did you say moss head sanji growled
Just like that they begin to fight meanwhile 1500 miles away the aftershock of the hurricane came through…..
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"oi ben bring me something for my headache the caption of the pirate ship called
"yes caption just before he went a strong gust came through and a big thump crashed into the middle of their deck cracking basically all the deck foundation and in the middle of that huge hole was a man with raven black hair and was covered in blood from head to toe he was facing down and not moving.
"Who the hell is he yassoup ask getting closer look at him"
"I don't know but go get the doctor ben yelled
Before any one could say anything yassoup screamed "it's luffy he said turning to see his caption who shot up knocking him away from him.
"What the hell happen to him the caption said freaking out "where's his hat he asked looking around."
"It's not here." you don't thing he was pulled up in that hurricane do you caption? Ben asked
"If he was then where is his crew and hat? you he pointed to the group go look for a straw hat in the ocean don't come back till you find it your group he pointed at bens men go fine his ship and crew make sure there ok then the caption threw them a pic..
"Caption I'm here Lola said with her medical bag she bend down to give him a basic check
"Talked to me Lola the caption growled he was angry to fine his hope the future in this state
"He had multiple stabbed wounded and a collapse lung he need searcher now if he going to survive she said getting up followed by the caption and they both ran to the operating room.
3 hours of treating the collapse lung she had finally got him stabled though he was strapped to a bunch a wires he could at lease breath by himself but she kept the masked on just in case.
"will he be ok the caption asked shaking he was furious what was his crew thinking going into a storm like that they could have been killed or worse luffy could have drowned.
"I don't know Lola said but I'll get more beds around just in case there just is bad.
"I'm going out to fine them shank said turning away he couldn't look at him anymore he was just too angry.
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Three hours later on the thousand sunny shanks crawled aboard to see the damage done but stop when he saw luffy straw hat sitting on the deck he bent down to grabbed it than he heard voices yelling at each other. He Walked down the stairs stepping over and moving stuff in his way and stop at the massive hole than he head voice to his left he turn to stare at all the blood around the door and beside the door.
"oi come on luffy let us out we know we were ignoring you but we learn are lesson a whiny voice called out shanks blink twice before it clicked he had saved his crew who hadn't lesion to him it made him a little mad.
"What are you saying I'm going to kick that rubbery ass caption to next week another voice growled
That was it shanks had had it he bent down pulled out the bloody nails inside the door threw the door aside and a foot came out kicking. Shanks grabbed it with his one good arm and threw him out of the ship into the ocean.
"Who the hell are you a man in green hair yelled at shanks sliding three swards out
"Stop zero a woman with dark black hair stopped him
"Why robin a red head woman asked
"That red hair shanks robin had responded
"The one who gave luffy that ridicules hat he never take off nami ask still angry with luffy
"Ridicules shank growled ha do you even know where your caption is shanks spat at her
"no nor do we care he use haki on us that locked us up for 6 hours cause we ignored him when he said something was wrong when there wasn't it hasn't been for 6 months nami said.
"Oh really than tell me why is it your caption on my ship half dead shanks said angrily
"What a raccoon dog screamed"
"What are you talking about ussop asked?"
"Well why your dumb asses where ignoring him a hurricane hit and he decided to save his stupid ass crew instead of letting you face the punishment for ignoring your caption. Shanks said coldly
"What's all these blood the man in the suite was looking down"
"Well that would be luffy blood shanks anger lacing his tone said"
"What are you talking about the man stopped looked around "it looks like a hurricane hit these place the man said
"Wow aren't you the smart dumb ass shanks said laughing angrily "well know matter your fine that's good that s all luffy need to know if he wakes up. Anyway so I'm taking luffy with me find a new caption shanks said turning around and left
"What the whole crew said running after him shanks stopped turn and smiled "this is your punishment I can't kill you he would be mad but this is perfect cause you don't deserved him than he released all his haki and knock all the crew down.
"Make sure they don't fine us shanks said to the man In black
"As you wish caption he said laughing walking towards the ship wheel.
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So I tried to make shanks seem mean but I didn't know how cause he usually a fun guy so hope you liked it if I get another review I might add another chapter if not ok I know my spelling bad so try to over looked that. Oh bye the way broke is still out cold.