HIII! Sorry I haven't posted in forever, but you know how it is. So here's the first chapter and I'd really appreciate it if people would review my story.
Thank you, Bubbles52 for reviewing.
without further ado
Revilation
Now I had to move and I had to move fast if I wanted this to work. If Edward found out what I was planning to do . . . well he defiantly wouldn't let me, that's for sure. Even though this was the only solution to saving my family I saw, I still couldn't help but feel guilty for leaving them, especially leaving Renesmee. She's so little. Well, anyway, if I don't do this now, I'll lose my nerve. So as my newly expanded brain began to work out the details, I started acting.
"Edward, I'm going take Renesmee for a walk to the cottage. I need to clear my head and she looks so tired." I said, hoping he couldn't see what I was planning to do (and hoping that having Renesmee with me would keep me out of Alice's line of "vision" as well).
"Yeah. That's a good idea. Do you want me to come?" he asked half-heartedly as he was still talking to the remaining members of his family.
"No. You should stay here and figure out what you guys are going to do." I was relived to hear my voice stay even, even though if I had been human my heart would have been beating at least three thousand miles a minute (yet another perk to being a vampire).
"Okay. I'll meet you at the house in an hour or two." He said, still not looking at me. If it hadn't been for the facts that I was a vampire, and that Alice had just left, and that the Volturi were coming, Edward might have actually looked and saw the sadness in my eyes (I mean, I am a new vampire, I can't hide my emotions (at least not well). So I did what my, working overtime brain, said was the next step.
"Okay, Edward, take all the time you need. I love you. See you when we can." I said, wanting longingly for all this to be a dream, wanting to wake up in our bed and look up and see his beautiful golden eyes dazzling me in the mid-morning light. The only downside to that delusion . . . vampires don't sleep, so I knew, no matter how much I wanted it to be a dream, it was all real.
"I love you, too. See you later." That was all he said. I guess even vampire minds have limits. If this had been the Edward of three months ago, he would have known right away what I was doing. I guess he was to full of thought, contemplating his next move, that it just didn't register. The rest of his family, my family, was too stricken with grief to even pay the slightest attention to what I looked like at that very moment. Poor Esme, she had just lost two children, now I'm taking away one more. But, I guess, if I go they'll come back. The Volutri won't be coming anymore. That was the only thing that kept me on the track I was headed. I chanced one last glimpse of the man I loved so dearly, imprinting it into every corner of my mind, before I walked to the door and said good bye to the life I had just said hello to.
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-BRITT