This is the second chapter of my no-resource Twilight fiction. Please comment!!! I don't know what I'm doing and I need some help!!

Duncan grabbed the figures and placed them in random areas of the forest. He made a special note to put the vampire that got married in the poisonous jungle. He then muttered the word, "move," and all of the (Temporarily unconscious) vampires teleported to the location he put their figures on. He glanced at the board and noticed one of them was in a tree.*****

"Whazzu?" Emmet said groggily as he woke up. "OOooouuwww? I don't remember my bed being this poky." He sat up, and nearly fell out of the pine tree he was in. "Whoa!!!!! What am I doing here? He asked, looking down at the ground below.*****

"Mmmmmmm?" Rosalie said as she got up from the floor. "What's going on?? Why am I here? What the heck is that?" She said, seeing a figure move in the shadows. She warily walked over and peered over the bushes, and saw….. Jasper. "Hmmmmm?" She said, looking at him, "Who're you?"*****

Jasper woke up and jumped to his feet. "What's going on…" He said to himself. Oh well, he thought, no time for questions. He started walking around, trying to find out where he was, when someone poked her head through the bush. "Who're you?" She asked him, as if she had any right to know.*****

Bella woke up in a clearing, and although she didn't know what she had lost, she felt extremely sad. Without even getting up, she began to cry uncontrollably.*****

Edward woke up to a poisonus scorpion on his face, which he quickly swatted off. "What the hell?" He said to no one in particular. He stood up, and looked around at the purple spotted trees and giant bugs walking around. He grabbed a stick and swatted away at the ones near his feet. He was in the poisonous jungle, but he didn't know how he knew that.*****

Duncan smiled, watching from his cabin at the chaos he had created. He felt he had done a good job for today, and he was tired after using his power, so maybe he would go for a quick nap………

End of chapter two. Hope you like it!!!!