Yes! I finally got this posted! I had difficulty attempting to upload this for the past... two days or so. So, as you can imagine, I am extremely pleased that this has uploaded. Amen!
Now, on to the next two poems I have revised. Enjoy!
Ode to the Peak of Mt. Aleph
Dying light and fractured souls
Have met their fate upon this peak.
Hoping, searching, for the right,
Praying never to be weak.
Souls were killed here, a wonder time
Continued through this tragedy.
Blood of Sol's and Luna's tears,
To seal away the alchemy.
The barely hid their twin Light daughters,
Before led away by whom thought friends.
They followed like a lamb to slaughter,
Perfidy is how this sad tale ends.
Luna cried over his state and the life
That was to be extinguished: Sol, his wife.
Ode to Mercury Lighthouse
The ancient house of water
Built by those of long ago,
Gives power to the seasons,
Strengthens water, ice and snow.
Traveler, standing here in awe
Trembling underneath water's might.
If you survive to tell this tale,
You may deem worthy in our sight.
Frozen water and flowing streams,
Colder than ice for shattered dreams,
All meant to stop you on your way,
And hoping you will rue this day.
You shall die your death in water's tower,
Lulled in by the beauty of this power.
Well, what do you think? R&R please! I'll post the rest as soon as I revise those as well. I've started on the Venus Lighthouse poem, but I haven't finished it, so you'll probably see that one in the next batch. Later!