- Spoken Word
- 'Thoughts/Emphasis'
- DEOMON TALKING/YELLING
I DO NOT OWN NARUTO! It belongs to Masashi Kishimoto
'Darkness, nothing for the eye to see, rushing darkness.' These were the thoughts that ran through Naruto's mind as he traveled, where ever he was going. Even though the fragmented analysis of his surroundings did not make sense (A/N: I mean really, how can you tell that the darkness is rushing by you if it is too dark to see?), Naruto continued to soar towards his unknown destination in his trance-like state(A/N: again, he doesn't even question how is flying right now. If it was me I would be freaking out or totally be amazed that I was flying and instantly thinking how I could use my new found powers for pure EV- … I mean using them for good. Anyhow…). All along the way, he continued to hear the whispers in his head, urging him to continue onwards, offering him sweet nothings once he reached his destination.
After what seemed like hours the scenery around Naruto changed to a gentle red glow, slightly illuminating large stalactites and stalagmites. Occasionally, Naruto would catch glimpses of things traveling alongside of him, only to lose sight of whatever they were to dart out of his line of sight. They seemed to be guiding him, yet he wasn't too sure. 'They could be enemies, yet they haven't made any move to attack me yet. I guess there would be no harm in them following me, I mean it's not like I even know where I'm going' thought Naruto.
As Naruto continued his journey his surroundings began to light up, yet not in the gradual way one might expect when moving closer to a light source. The amount of light seemed to increase whenever he flew over great chasms that seemed to separate various portions of land. So far he had come across 5 different sections. The land after the first chasm had been very dark, but what he could see were gigantic razor sharp spikes sticking up. After going over the second chasm he saw what appeared to be a frozen wasteland, Naruto thought he saw the outlines of people, but they weren't moving at all…. almost like they were frozen in place.(A/N: I'm pretty sure you are starting to think that Naruto is a total unfocused idiot, well he's not. You gotta remember that he is dealing with basically experiencing being high while dealing with a voice talking to him in his head that isn't him. Yeah I know, "I have a voice in my head that talks to me too, are you calling me crazy?" Yes, yes I am. Getting back to my point – Naruto doesn't really stop to think 'Hmmm, I'm in a frozen wasteland, they might actually be FROZEN…' Anyhow...) The next three sections were a plain of lava, a plain of fire and then a plain of fuzzy bunnies. (A/N: Yes, fear the bunnies and their cuteness! Mwahahahahahaha!)
As Naruto approached the next plain he saw a few things that peaked his interest after the terrible sight of the bunnies; this plain was connected to the next one by a bridge, the plain appeared to be a giant city, this plain, and he supposed the others, was circular, surrounding the center plane making up 7 planes altogether, and finally there was a spectacular palace in the center of it all. As he passed over the sixth plain he noticed people going about their business, that is until they noticed him. After sighting him, the people caused an uproar, notifying everybody else about him. With all eyes on him Naruto continued forwards to the seventh plain, the people following him continuing their rabbling about the flying boy.
As Naruto's feet came to rest on the steps of the palace the whispers in his head suddenly stopped. Finally free of their torment Naruto looked at the crowd gathered at the base of the steps. There he saw people of all ages, there were a few civilians, but most appeared to be shinobi and kunoichi. A few caught Naruto's eyes, people that he had only seen in text books and a few he personally knew; the Shodaime, Nidaime, Sandaime, Yondaime kages of all the hidden villages, Zabuza Momochi, Haku, and a woman with beautiful flowing red hair, and a figure with horns coming out of his head a glowing blue ringed eyes who gave him a smile and a wave. Then after Naruto had taken in his settings, the Yondaime Hokage walked towards him and said "My son, what are you doing here of all places? It is not your time to join your mother and me, we saw you defeat the Uchiha, and then you disappeared."
Before Naruto could ponder the words of his idol, he felt a pain like he had never felt before explode out of his navel. His shirt was incinerated in an instant allowing him to see a red light shooting out of his seal. The last sight he saw before everything went black was a shocked looking crowd except for the figure with the ringed eyes, who was bowing to Naruto, as if hailing a ruler.
A/N: Well there is the second chapter, a little short, but I decided that it seemed like a good ending point. So after all the stories I have read over the past few years, I'm pretty sure this story so far falls into the basic 'Goin to hell' start, but I assure you, my storyline and plot will be taking a way that has not been touched on. Like last time, I have the next chapter ready to go, but I would love to get some feedback on what I could do to improve the story. Also, Im not there yet, but will be putting up an ad for beta's eventually once I get the reviews and whatnot. If you're interested, shoot me a message. I won't be looking for qualifications really, how about give me a little background, fav story, your best story (If you have any stories out), and if you have been a beta before. See ya!