Bella seduces Edward
Disclaimer: the characters and all recognizable situations belong to Stephenie Meyer's Twilight - this is a work of fan fiction and my first attempt at all this so please be kind. R&R, thanks.
As my first fan fiction I wanted to write a seduction scene which would come right after the part in the series where Bella wants to make love to Edward before she is turned and he says "No"
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It's like fire and ice all at once. My body burning from his assault, his cool hands leaving ice trails wherever they touch, cooling my skin, and the whole process is repeated over and over again until my legs turn to jelly. Edwards lips seem to be everywhere all at once and heading toward one destination…south. He nudges me backwards towards the bed and I succeed in taking blind steps backwards, not seeing where I'm going, not caring where I land, just wanting to make sure the onslaught of pleasure keeps going.
The back of my knees hit something, the bed I think, and that's the last coherent thought I had. Edward pushes my shoulders gently backwards and I fall on the bed, immediately reaching for him. His body slowly covers mine as he continuous kissing my neck. His lips, 'oh those sinful lips' trail down my collarbone to my breasts. Edwards hand reaches one nipple and strokes it to its' peak, the mound turning hard, aching for his attention. His lips and tongue do the same to the other. Edwards nudges my legs apart with his knee and they open willingly, welcoming him into my precious core. Heat and ice make a combusting combination as his coolness and my fire meet head on. This sensual assault is making me crazy. My hands reach for Edward's head as he continuous his sensual exploration of my body, my fingers intertwined in his hair as his cool lips kiss and lick my stomach, my belly button, until he reaches the crest between my legs. I hold my breath as I am uncertain of what he will do next. The sensation that hits me next is indescribable. I gasp for air at the same time as my hips buck towards his cold lips, as he gently laps at my now soaking wet vagina. I am lost in this moment, lost in this sensation, at this pleasure that is unparalleled. Edward then adjusts the pressure of his lips and tongue on my clitoris and my whole body tenses. There is something coming, I don't know what but I can't seem to hold back any more. As I let go I am gripped by the strongest, most mind bending orgasm anyone can imagine. All my strength is gone and my body feels like it's floating on air.
As I come back to reality I notice Edward has left the nest between my legs and is now lying beside me, with a huge smile on his face. "Bella" he says staring directly at my eyes, "there is more than one way of making love to you, and ensuring that I won't hurt you, that I won't break you" . I flush at his comment, reliving the most pleasurable moment of my short human life….
So, should I keep going with this story? Please read and rate and give me your advice if I should keep going. Thanks for reading…