This is the You Have Everything I Ever Wanted challenge.


Palefur. Palefur Palefur Palefur. Everyone loves Palefur. Creamy white fur, a slim body, and a perfect mate and a perfect kit. And then there's me. Flowertail. Nobody cares about Flowertail. Dirty brown fur. Pudgy. A mate from another clan and my kits hate me. Talk about living the life.

I pad over to mother to have another one of those pleasant chats we always have.

"Hi, Mother." I say.

"Who are you again?" Mother says. Yeah. She doesn't know who I am. Nobody knows who I am. Because nobody cares. Everyone cares about Palefur. She's so perfect.

"Mother, it's me. Flowertail." I sigh.

"Oh. You." she says coldly. My mother hates me. Great.

Palefur pads over to me with her kit.

"Hi Flowertail," Palefur says. I can tell she knows that she's better than me. I can hear it in the tone of her voice.

"Say hi to Flowerkit, Flowertail!" she tells me. I flinch at that name. I always do.

"Palefur, rename that kit. Unless you want it to be like me." I sigh.

"No! I want it to be like you! Having everyone like you, and having three kits instead of one-"

"What? Everyone hates me. Including my kits. You do not want that kit to end up like me."

Palefur just stands there in silence. Then she glares at me.

"Stop trying to make me feel better." she growls.

"I'm trying to make you feel better? You're the one naming your only kit after a bum!" I hiss.

"You're not a bum! You're the greatest cat in this clan!" Palefur argues. Sure, she's perfect, but she's too dumb to realize that I'm an outcast.

"Palefur. Listen. To. Me!" I shout. "You have everything I ever wanted!"

Palefur gasps.

"You have the perfect body, the perfect mate and a perfect kit! Are you too dumb to realize that you're absolutely perfect?" I growl. Before she can say anything, I turn and run. I keep on running until I reach Fernclan border. I take a deep breath and cross over into Lilacclan. Almost immediately, a patrol catches me. I ask to join their clan, and they agree. I pad along with them to their camp.

"Why do you want to join Lilacclan?" they ask. I sigh and try to explain the best I can. They nod, gasp and wince. We finally reach camp and we go speak to Maplestar. She agrees on letting me join too. So now, I'm not Flowertail the Bum. I'm Flowertail of Lilacclan.


Poor Flowertail! She has a sucky life! Yeah, this story wasn't very good. I can usually write better.