A Tale Told Twice

by Prince Silvertongue

So... Yeah. I made some poetry... I'm pretty confident of the first, but the other one was a little harder to share (because seriously... I've got self-esteem issues). But don't let anything stop you from reviewing and criticizing my work though. I was kinda confused on where to post it, but I decided I'd put it under the Avengers movie. So... Read on and tell me what you think? :)

2. Fragile Sanity

A Tale Told Twice: Fragile Sanity

Do you hear his whispers? Have you seen his eyes?
He tells you his secrets, yet you claim that they're lies.
Suffering in silence, the shadow of the day…
Slithering in darkness, only demons hear him pray.
An innocent, once tainted, can never be the same.
Envy, vengeance, love and hate… Emotions bring him shame.
So he built walls around his heart, a hard exterior shell,
Insanity consumed him… and he made his own hell.
Yet still he hopes for chances, redemption that can save.
And he rose to the challenge! And his all, he gave.
But what he did was not enough; all he does is fail…
And as a price he had to pay, his own mind, made a jail.
A small white lie destroyed him, turned his world around.
And only in his chaos, good company, he found!
So let this serve a lesson, for choices that you make…
Cause' though they seem invincible… Even monsters break.