Yay! I got two reviews which is fine by me. I just wanted some feedback on what ya'll thought.
Disclaimer: I don't own Max or any of her flock or the flyboys. I do own Devin and his flock though. –huggles Devin-
Max Pov:
"So you guys gonna fight with us or what?" I asked the other flock.
Devin looked around at his flock and nodded. "What else is there to do?" He muttered jumping up into the air, the other five following him.
"Alright guys you know what to do" I yelled launching myself into the air and taking out the first fly boy I saw.
The things out numbered us, but they still flew horrible. I took a few seconds to survey my surroundings and half smiled watching the Gasman, and Angel swing their boards around like big baseball bats. Total was on the ground growling and jumping up trying to get his little wings to work.
"Max watch out!" Fang yelled.
I turned around and was met with a punch to the gut and dropped a few feet trying to regain my normal beat. I was about to plant a nice kick to the things spine when suddenly a piercing scream rang out shattering every Fly-boy into a million pieces, and making all of us bird kids cover are ears trying to block out the horrible sound.
Nudge Pov:
So there I was fighting a stupid little machine I hadn't seen in years, when suddenly another fly-boy bit me! IT BIT ME! And boy did it hurt! So I screamed. But it wasn't a normal scream, it was a huge scream and it was really loud and stuff! I don't think I have ever screamed that loud in all the 17 years in my life.
So when I finally stopped screaming I looked around and all the fly-boys were gone, and everyone looked like they had a major headache, especially Iggy. And I felt really bad because he is blind and everything so he has super good hearing and that scream probably hurt his ears really bad.
"Nudge how did you do that?" Max asked me looking somewhat amazed.
"Um well that eraser thing bit me and it hurt really really badly so I screamed really loudly, like as loud as I could, and I guess it was loud"
"Ya think?" that one kid Devin said shaking his head to get the sand out of his hair.
Now that I think about it if Fang doesn't tell Max he likes her soon Devin and Max would be a cute couple. But I doubt Max would like him because of the whole guys should be leaders and girls shouldn't. But hey weirder things have happened.
Devin Pov:
Okay that girl Nudge can scream really freaking loud. I swear I thought my eardrums were going to explode. But at least it took care of the Fly-boys.
"You guys okay?"
Parker, my best friend and second in command, rolled her eyes and nodded. "We fought for like point five seconds. How could we not be ok?"
She had a point. That was probably the shortest fight we've ever been in.
Max turned and looked at me and I noticed she was really hot. "Now what was I about to do before those Fly-boys attacked us? Oh yeah this"
Sorry it's kind of short! I just didn't know what else to add.
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