First of all I would like to thank Lisbon69 for her review, Sophie Fatale for her author alert, MissNitaGirl for her story alert, and a triple thank you Jisbon-Sessed for her review, and adding me as favorite author, and favorite stories and all her time walking me through this. Thank you all so much for your support. It is appreciated!! :0) A triple double deaker thanks goes to Jisbon-Sessed, I love you, you rock, your awsome and everything in between!!!!! This chapter is dedicated to her :0) I hope I didn't forgot anyone, if I did thank you so much!! And it wasn't on purpose, I'm just not use to getting reviews, or author alerts or things like that:0)
They all piled in the van, and they were on there way. Grace had sent them directions. It wasn't very long ride. With the exception of Teresa and Patrick arguing over the radio station they wanted to listen to. "Oh come on, you got to be kidding me!!" Exclaimed Teresa. "What, it's good for your soul." Said Patrick calmly. I have only had four hours of sleep, I'm not in the mood for soul full, I want something with a little beat to it, not to loud though, I need to kept awake, not put to sleep." He kept turning the station until he found The Spice Girls. Then he started singing Two Become One. Making Teresa blush quite boldly. He was looking at her while he was singing. "What?" She asked him."Hmmm, oh nothing, just thinking." "Well stop it, thinking is dangerous, especially for you." She was trying to calm herself down. He was still staring, not helping her in any way. All she wanted was for this ride to be over, and fast. "Boss, where coming up on it." Said Rigsby. "Okay, where all prepared just in case we need to be?" Everything we need boss." Said Cho. "Everything looks pretty calm." She thought to herself. "To calm." Replied Patrick. "How did you know I was thinking that, uh, never mind." He smiled brightly. "Okay guys lets go." Rigsby and Cho went around to the back of the house. Because everything seemed normal at first. They wanted to check to make sure nothing suspicious was going on in that area. When Teresa and Patrick got to the house they were in for a surprise. Mitchell Cambell was holding Robin Thorns, Connor Thorns, hostage. "Mr. Cambell, put the gun down slowly, we can talk about this." "No we can't, I didn't shoot him on purpose, it was an accident!!" At that point Patrick chimed in. "Okay, that was an accident, but this won't be." "If you shoot her you will go to prison for a long time, I know you don't want that do you?" Teresa watched in horror as Mitchell kept aiming his gun at Robin her and then Patrick. She already had her hand on her gun ready to draw it at any point that would be safe for them. She was always amazed by Patrick, he was always so calm in situations like these. "Come on, put the gun down." He had his hands up to show that he was unarmed. "Stop messing with my head!!" Exclaimed Mitchell. "Sir just calm down, no one is going to hurt you." Said Teresa, trying to remain calm. " I said stop it!!" He exclaimed. Everything happened in slow motion, four shots were fired, and one lay one the ground, not moving.
Well what do you think?? Let me know. My first story and I leave you in a cliffy!! LoL Well it took me long enough didn't it but
I promise it's worth it... You let me know if it's any good :0)
Crystal:0)