Alright I loved the reviews so im updating fast and ill be adding another 2 main characters:brock an a new girl that goes by shianne mackenzie cant wait ALSO ADDING NEW POKEMON!

I looked up to see Brock he was wearing different clothes thow he wore a red and black casual button up and black cargos with sneakers and a bag."Hey Brock it me Jill ,Dawns little sister'' I said grinning then he rememberd and grinned "yeah im starting a new journey here in umatorie so I can get better at breeding Im guessing ur starting ur journey mind if I tag along" He said in his rough voice.

"really that be awsome " I yelped before jumping into his arms and hugging is ganna be fun after I jumped down we set off .

As I took a look at the area too memorize everything I noticed a girl she looked bored out of her mind she had black curly hair with natural red streaks up in a side poneytail she wore a a tank top botton up black and red shirt that was un bottoned with a black leather tank top under (I added the leather part) with capri shorts that was ripped at the knees with white shoes and a scateboard on her lap.

"god I wish I had a pokemon " I heard her sigh not noticing us.I turned too brock grinning and nodding at her alot tell he gave in and with that we took off into the nearby forest.I searched threw boosh and boosh too notice a pokemon it was a fire type of course .

it looked like a bird but instead of wings it had flames and its eyes were black it matched the girl perfectly! I pulled out the pokedex quickly and searched when the female voice of the pokedex announced "Jaburo the fire bird pokemon it takes pleasure in knowing it did well and is oftenly eating but keep inside when raining for its flame could die out and jaburo could get sick" I grabbed a pokeball and instead of battling wished to the fates.

as if my prayers were answered the succesful ding ran throughout the forest "brock i got one" I said when i noticed him halfway up a palm tree trying to find a pokemon.

he fell down and we were on are way too the girl when we got there she was still sitting there fixing the bolts on her scate board.

I ran up too her grinning and holding out a pokeball she looked up mouth gape eyes wide "me" she said pointing to herself I pulled the pokeball back "yeah I heard you saying about how you wish you had a pokemon and saw how sad you were so we caught you a pokemon and are offering for you to journey with us" I announced

she grinned she had tears in her eyes ""She said in a all to fast tone

"huh" I said confused as ever."i said really oh my god thank you so so much yes ill travel with you but let me tell my aunt" she said in a slower tone chuckling at the end."anyway whats ur names and what is the pokemon you caught me im shianne mckenzie most people call me kenzie" she said lightly

we both nodded "im brock" "and im Jill" we retorted."OH and we caught you a jaburo" I announced in a happy go lucky tone before realesing the pokemon and tossing her the pokeball

ookay short sorry! BUT I UPDATED TWICE SO BE NICE AND SAY THANKS also whatcha think?