Oh it's that NOOB ScraftyTrainer again. Yeah it's me with the second chapter of The Battle Subway! Sorry about not updating and thanks for the tips AzaleaLightning! I hopefully will be able to incorporate them into my later stories.
Black's POV:
I slowly stepped through the doorway and White was about to challenge the other trainers without me
"Hey! Wait a minute!" I call out as I fumble to get Scrafty onto the battlefield.
"C'mon Black they already have their pokemon ready!" White says in an annoyed tone.
Scrafty has had enough and does a flip over me to get to the enemy. My eyes finally caught up with him and I saw a Purrlion and a Vullaby being commanded by a police officer and a four year old. Scrafty looked back at me awaiting a command and all I could sputter out was. "Jumpy Kick" Scrafty laughed at that smooth line and jumped high in the air and smashed its knee into the Purrlion's skull. The purrlion reeled back and pounced on Scrafty.
"Vanniluxe Ice Beam!" White called out and a swirl of ice started to form in front of Vanniluxe's mouth and it soon materialized into a light blue beam of ice that struck Purrlion and froze it along with the subway seat.
"Thanks but I'm not paying for damages" I joke as Scrafty slowly pulls himself up.
"Vullaby Aerial Ace!" The pre-schooler yelled. Vullaby charged towards Scrafty and hit him directly in the stomach knocking him out.
"Geez! Scrafty good job!" I recalled Scrafty and sent out Zebstrika. "Finish the job!" I yelled and Zebstrika let off a few crackles of electicity intimidating Vullaby.
"Go get em Garbodor" The police officer screamed. Within seconds the room was filled with a horrible stench filled the room. Everyone held their nose except for the police officer who was snickering at our misfortune.
"V-Vanniluxe Ice Beam again!" White said and pointed at the Garbodor. Once again the light blue beam struck the giant trash heap and instantly knocked it out.
"Nice one. Zebstrika Discharge!" I yelled releasing my nose and Zebstrika let out a electric shock hitting Vullaby with another one hit KO. I jumped up in the air and fist pumped. When I landed I surveyed the damage. A frozen seat a few claw marks and a horrible stench that I will never be able to live down. I've never been that close to a Garbodor and I hope to never be ever again. White gave me a high five and hugged her Vanniluxe who then cooed at Zebstrika. "Well looks like you have a crush buddy" I said while poking Zebstrika in the side of the head.
Everyone then recalled their pokemon and congratulated us. We used the health station at the end of the room and White looked at me for a few seconds.
"Something wrong?" I asked
"No...Just thought I saw something on your face...Ugly" She cheefully said
"Alright princess lets get through the rest of this train" I retort and wave to the other trainers and pull open the door to the next room.
Well hopefully that was a bit better than the last one. I'm not a very gramatical person and I feel like an idiot for not being fluent in it. But you can't change idiocy easily. Thanks for reading and review and criticize and the whole bit.