hey this is my first fanfic but i hope like it p.s. please comment but only if you either have something positive or construct critism k?
now time to start
'this is thought'
this is speech
THIS IS SAKURA/TSUNADE YELLING!!!!!!!
Meanings: Konoha-Village Hidden in The Leaves baka-idiot
Chapter one: The Beginning
crush!!!!!! 'there it was again!' thought Jim as he ran through the forest 'I must get away! I cant let them catch me!' boom!!!!! his eyes darted to his
left where there stood a man in gray. His stare alone made Jims skin curl 'it cant be! i-i-it-its hitomo! the leader of oraganazation Z!!!!' thought Jim
his mind racing ' I must find somewhere to hide!' he thought are you going to come back peacfully? asked Hitomo. Heck no! ill never go back there again!
replied Jim. tuh.... i guess ill have to bring you back the hard way then! said Hitomo crunch! thats all Jim heard when his ribs crushed from Hitomo unsighted
attack. The last thing he saw before he passed out was another eplosion and the colors of black, orange, and pink.
Jim quickly sat upright in bed breathing loudly. He looked around the room it was a hospital room nothing special about it except for the bars on the window
and door. he looked over and the door was opening and through it came some people in there mid teens and some older adults. There was three teenagers and
three adults one of the adults had blond hair and was a female. One adult had gray hair he was wearing a blue mask while the last adult had white hair and
wore a red and white robe. The teens all looked the same age right around 16 years old. One was a girl and was wearing a pink outfit and had pink hair
while the others were guys. one was wearing a black outfit and had raven hair while the other one wore a orange outfit and had blond hair and had strange
lines down his face that looked like whiskers. Jim's mind was racing with questions like where was this and why he was here but before he could
say anything the blond boy said, what the heck took you so long to wake up!? There the girl whith pink hair punched the blonde boy and yelled
NARUTO YOU BAKA!!! DONT GO YELLING HIM FOR GETTING PROPER REST!!! YOU PROBABLY SCARED HIM HALF TO DEATH!!!!!!! then the lady with blonde hair
addressed the pink haired girl Sakura dont yell at Naruto your probably scaring him too. 'Wait what is going on here????' thought Jim but once again before he
could ask he was interupted by someone, this time being the ravin haired boy who walked up to him said so whats your name???? J-Jim Jim Urichi and who are you replied
Jim. Im Sasuke, this is Naruto pointing at the blonde, this is sakura pointing at the pink haired girl, and these three are Kakashi, Jiriya and tsunade pionting at the three adults.
we are members of Kono... said Sasuke and then there was darkness.....