Sigh. Here's a really, really short chapter. Please read the note at the end. Please Review. I do not own anything except the plot and OC characters.
Chapter 1: Surprise!
Wind blew softly over the barren planet. It was covered mostly by sand with little to no water in sight. It seemed a quiet and peaceful place when a white light appeared in the sky. It grew bigger and bigger until it blocked even the sun. It vanished only to be replaced by a misshapen figure. If one were to look closely, it was obviously to see that it wasn't just one figure. It was a ship with Sonic and his friends. They all plummeted to the ground screaming as they fell to the planet.
"We could have at least teleported us on the planet itself," said Kunckles.
"Incoming!" shouted Sonic just before crashing into the sand.
Sand and dust flew everywhere at the impact. Everyone and the Blue Typhoon were buried under the sand. The hedgehog's head popped out and he spat out the sand he swallowed.
"Is everyone okay?" asked Sonic as he looked for any signs of them.
"Yeah," replied Tails as his head popped up as well.
Everyone else began to pop out of the sand. Soon, they were able to get themselves out and shake the remaining sand off.
"Looks like the blue Typhoon would need fixing," spoke Chris as he stared at the partly buried ship.
"We should see what's working," said Starlight as they walked to the ship.
The hedgehog was about to go in when he heard something move. He turned around, but saw nothing except for sand. Sonic shrugged his arms and followed everyone else. When they were all inside, the sand shifted to reveal a pair of eyes.
"Sis! Did you see that?" asked one of the eyes.
"Yes. It's Sonic," answered the other.
"The master will be most pleased when we deliver him with everything else," spoke the first one.
"I've got an idea. Let's go," said the second one.
Both eyes vanished underneath the sand.
Just letting you know that I have a poll on my profile. Some of you may have seen it and may think it weird, but I'm going through an emotional drop. School has been tough with all the classes and worrying about college. Also, I've been getting feedback on my stories OUTSIDE of and they haven't been all that nice. They all ranged from there doesn't seem to be anything pushing the story to you can't write properly. It's really disheartening especially when I read other people's fanficts and the fact I really get nothing from . I feel that my stories can't even compare to some of them. I will for sure finish this story, but I don't know if I want to continue. The only reason I've been able to keep writing is a certain cool individaul: DRKSuperSonic. Thanks for supporting me through my first three stories. I don't know what I could do without you. Sorry for the rant, but I had to let it out. Please do the poll if you're not going to review. Thank you.