A/n: hey I don't own Danny phantom but I really wish they would put it back on :hey just 4 fun if they made a movie for Danny phantom with real people who do you think would be a better sam: Kristen Stewart or Elizabeth gillies ( jade from victorious)

So here is the next installment of my revision

Chapter 2: The hunt 4 the drummer

Anyway on with the story

Embers pov

My story starts in May 1997, like I said im in a band, all we need is a drummer. So that day we held auditions for our drummer. We normally practice at Johnny's parents club, but that day they were fumigating. So we got stuck with, Johnny's basement. It was cold and dirty in there. Spider's adorned the place, worst of all Johnny's family lived on a street nearly impossible to find.

Like the old saying says the show must go on, so we got all our equipment. Everyone had to wake up extra early, and hangovers and early don't mix. It was weird Most of us almost regretting that rave, the night before, almost. It was the life of a rock star, carpe diem seize the day. When you have an opportunity, to do something do it.

That was our motto, the adults would say think before you act, or todays actions have tomorrows consequences. To that I say "sew it on a pillow granny"! In this empty hand is the fucks I give. Our lifestyle was a wild one, but it's all we knew.

It was who we were, and it was who we were meant to be, you never truly have nothing, until you conform, to society's idea, of how you should be. Physically we had nothing; all of us lived in the same trailer park. We were part of the same egg, barely had a penny to our name.

All we had was us, and we'd be damned if we let society conform every opportunity we had, we seized it we lived life. Even in our naiveties, we knew never land wouldn't last forever.

But I'm getting ahead of myself, where was I, oh yeah after we packed the truck full of our equipment, we headed for Johnny's place. We pulled a hot box, and did a few lines of coke, so we'd be nice and high by the time, the destination came into view. Our high had somewhat simmered down, by the time we got to Johnny's.

You see Johnny used to live in the same trailer park, the rest of us did. it just so turned out that, Johnny's dad saved the life of a millionaire, but pushing him out of the way, of a moving car. The man felt he owed pops, something so he gave him 200,000 dollars.

They say all a poor man really needs, is a rich man's investment and well it's true. After that things started looking up, for all of us. Spooky vines Trailer Park finally got a piece of the pie. As you've probably guessed, Johnny's pops used the money to start, the club.

It gave the community a place to go, for cheap fun me and my band a place to perform, and Johnny finally got his first piece of luck, in the form of a motor bike. Naturally they moved, to what us "rags" called, the other side of the tracks. It's where all the rich kids lived.

This was the last good luck, Johnny would ever have. Eventually we reached ultra-posh poultry heights, or the right side of the track. You see there's a big railroad track that goes through the middle of Amity Park. It just so happens, to precisely divide the rich from the poor.

As we pulled into the driveway, all of us dragged our tired bodied out of the van, as we begin to unload our equipment. Once we set up shop, our auditions could finally begin.

Let me tell ya, there were some serious dipsticks, baby pops, and just some strait up loony tunes. I mean you would've thought it was a conspiracy for every untalented person, in amity to show up at our auditions.

Somehow though, I and the band suffered through. We all agreed that whoever we picked, it would have to be unanimous. It seemed like weren't gonna, get a drummer today, we all agreed, that we'd look at three more acts.

Then we'd be done, and have to pick another day, for auditions. Then he walked in, he was wearing a leather jacket, a kiss shirt and jeans, with some serious rips in them. I wasn't complaining. His hair was a dirty blond, and he was completely ripped... his name was jj. (John junior) Baxter

Dialogue

Jj. hey im here, to audition for the band. You say u need a drummer

Saei: yeah show us, what u got. im Saei. this is ember McLain, this is Scarla micks, and Reggie McLain, and Greg sakes.

JJ: cool, I john, john junior Baxter, but call me jj, just jj.

Scarla: so ya ready, the drums are right there and the sticks are...

JJ: I brought my own sticks.

Ember: alright, fine so so us whatcha got.

Ember's pov

Then he did he did a killer drum solo, it was something I've never heard before. Words can't describe it, it was just absolutely amazing. It stared at me the whole, and I felt him his music. It was so much anger, and rage, I knew right then and there, that he definitely had a story.

He was so mysterious, it was confusing. I had never heard the song he played, but the look in his eyes when he played it, told me it spoke to him. There are people who listen to music, but they don't really here it. I suppose it's like how you can, see a painting but be blind to it. It's something you're born with I guess, it's like a gift you can't learn it, you can't earn it. You just have it, and if you don't, well you don't. Music always, had this ability to tell a story, and it wasn't a defined one, it could be changed. The song could be interpreted differently; it could mean one thing, and then something completely different.

That's what I like about it, that's it's not set in stone. You can change it, you can see it differently, it can be different better happier. It's all yours, and it's beautiful. His music spoke to me, even though it had no words, I could sing it.

It was something to be remembered, it was something I'd never forget. I couldn't, it was original, on of a kind.

Dialogue

Ember: whoa was that an original!

Jj: yep it need a few tweaks, and stuff but…

Saei: whoa I got to it admit, that was very good. I'm normally the biggest critic, but I have nothing.

Reggie: just let us discuss has a group, we have to be completely unanimous. If there's even one ill vote, he's gone; it's the only fair way.

Scarla: what does u think em?

Ember: he was, memoreable, everything we need

Greg: i say yeah

Reggie: i say yeah

Saei: yep

Ember: mos def

Saei: you're in

Jj: righteous

Ember: so were all gonna go, 2 the nasty burger, you wanna come with. Since youre part of the group and all.

Jj: what is that code, for something!

Greg: no its a ironically named restaurant, but the foods good, I promise.

Scarla: your obviously, not from around here.

JJ: how do u know?

Ember: well smart guy, everyone around here knows, about the nasty burger. It's like a landmark, they only exist in amity, and it's ours.

JJ: well you caught me, there I moved out here to follow my kid's mother. Were from Michigan, Talia moved to keep from getting a daily earful, from her bitch of a mother. I followed her, so I could keep up with my kid dash.

Ember: oh, so Talia your girlfriend.

Jj: hell no, far from well briefly, but she's very boring, to goody you ya know.

Ember: yea I totally get what you're saying, total dipsticks.

Scarla: you guys coming, or not we've been here all day, and need to eat, like now.

Ember: no I'll stick; don't hold up on my account.

JJ: so do you want to, go somewhere?

Ember: you asking me out.

JJ: depends, what would you say if I did?

Ember: well I'd say, you better impress me. Because I don't have time to waste.

JJ: cocky much

Ember: somewhat, so u gonna chicken out, or ya gonna walk on the wild side, and take a rocker chick out.

JJ: I take the wild side, for 200 Alex

Ember: I go by ember, on weekends thank u very much.

JJ: alright here's my truck here.

Ember: holy shit, how that one doesn't come out, until next year. How the fuck, did you get it!

Jj: my rents are rich, no big. They get me shit, like this all the time. Anything to keep me out of the media.

Ember: well it's nice.

Jj: hey what's your, natural hair color

Ember: if I tell you I have to kill u

Jj: well what if I guess, would u kind of, through me out the car.

Ember: 3 guesses, you're never gonna get it.

Jj: 20 questions

Ember: dipstick, how did you get from 3 to 20.

Jj: you said impress you, so I have to know you first. So spill, 20 questions.

Ember: trust me, it will take years, to crack my mystery.

Jj: come 20 questions

Ember: 19

Jj: but

Ember: hey rules, are for suckers 19, or nothing baby pop.

Jj: you drive, a hard bargain.

Ember:(smirk) times running out…

Jj: alright, first question whats your favorite food?

Ember: special brownies

Jj: nice

Ember: thanks, okay how did you end up, with a son.

Jj: the normal way

Ember: ha ha, you have to answer. I mean like did you plan it, or…

Jj: it just happened, next question, what's your home life like?

Ember: gambling addicted mom, sex addicted dad, you've meet Reggie my only family. member who actually gives a damn about me. All I do is return the favor. Kitty and Johnny are the closest thing, i have 2 family aside from Reggie, last but not least my guitar, it was handmaid by my grandma, back in the 20s.

I see it has, part of my family it helps me thru a lot. Okay now, how old is your son?

Jj: 2 alright now ,so who's kitty and Johnny?

Ember: kitty and Johnny are my best friends, since preschool Johnny is also kitty's boyfriend. Do you think I'm attractive?

JJ: yes, how old are you?

Ember: 15, I'll be sixteen in two months. Okay how about, what's the most outrageous thing you have done.

JJ: got a girl pregnant, so when did you realize, you wanted to sing

Ember: im not sure, I guess I was around 6. Umm okay, who's you're musical inspiration?

Jj: ohhh, probably my music instructor, who's your favorite band?

Ember: kiss no doubt, but bon jovi is a close second. Okay, who's your first love?

Jj: you're gonna laugh, her name was Penelope tarpces, she hated her last name. She told all the kids to call her Mrs. Spectra. She was our elementary schools guidance consoler. So do you think im cute?

Ember: yes, hmm how old was spectra.

Jj: I don't know her exact age, but I do remember, she quit her job after she got famous. Apparently she created some kind of youth serum, with her assistant, Bertrand. do you have any other hobbies, besides singing.

Ember: partying last question, mine is was spectra a scientist or something, because I thought she was just a, guidance consoler.

Jj: I really don't know, but she was kind of odd, I guess that's what I liked about her. Okay my last question is, were here, do you want to go in. the go cart park, there a catch though, there closed, so were gonna have to climb the fence. What do you say.

Ember: I would love to, just so you know. Im gonna whoop your ass in this race.

Jj: getting cocky again huh

Ember: Hey it's my thing.

Over looker's pov

With that Ember and JJ, went and climbed the fence and hot jacked the go carts so they could race. It was no problem for them; both parties had climbed their fair share of fences, and hi jacked numerous cars.

There's a fact about fun, most fun is just a part of a facade. It's part of a never ending mascaraed. You must hide behind this mask, if you will to survive in a world that has gone awry. If not you will, simply snap or loose you're will to live.

It's possible to be trapped in such a façade, that you don't know the difference that, that and reality. This is a mascaraed of sub consciousness, simply meaning you have no clue that, you're wearing it.

In laments terms you're confusing your face, with the mask. Another fact is that in life there are no happy moments, there are just breathes of fresh air in-between, the breath clouding smoke.

However there is fun that can exist without a façade, although rare it does exist. It is only possible, when you're in love. Sometimes love realizes itself before you do. Now it doesn't have to be relationship love.

It can be friendship love, family love, any type of love that is true, the façade will melt away, in loves presence, and you will experience, real pure fun. JJ and ember were in love, despite popular belief.

The truth is the young boy didn't know how to love, and the girl was pushed over the edge, by the bad news forced upon her. This prompted her to make the decisions she did. People have a false belief that stories that involve true love always have a happy ending.

Those people would be correct… however there is an exception to every rule. That's what ember was about; she was one of a kind. She never wanted to be, that's just who she was. So she went with it, and in this she became the exception.

She represented freedom, rebellion, individuality, pain, sorrow, brokenness, and through it all the will, that went beyond the grave, to be remembered. This is the story, of the roads she took, the actions that led to her untimely demise and man responsible for it all.

They raced for hours; it was about 3:00 when they finally decided to call it a night. They had talked, as they each began to unwrap each other's memories. Ember had found out that jj's parents, were absorbed with their money.

It was, to the point where they were uncaring to him. This shocked the young rocker; she had always believed that money solved, all problems. This was the first time, she ever questioned that logic.

Could it be possible that, there was no wrong side of the tracks? That maybe they both suffered, just differently.

He explained the reasons why, it didn't work out with Talia. He didn't really go into much detail, as he was still very guarded. I guess breaking down walls took time, like all things.

The young drummer, told her of the fact that, he'd do anything for his son Dash. Ember told him more personal things, like how her dad forgot to pick her up from school. She even let him see here tears. This should've been a warning, for the girl she had shared everything with him, and he had gave her nothing.

But naivety and youth go hand in hand, and besides it was the way her pattern was met to fall. This was the way; her life was met to unfold. She also told jj of the fact that her dad, use to hit her. All in all they had a lot in common.

a/n: okay I think my writing has improved now after this chapter is the non revamped version so until I update it will be the non revamped version, so until I update bye