Summery-What if chiro wasn't born on shugazoom but on earth instead and what if chiro has more power than people think? What if he wasn't really chiro the human from shugazoom but something else?
Baylee1100- HI this is my first story and I hope you like it
Chiro- Baylee1100 does not own super robot monkey team hyper force if she did she would have made a pilot episode.
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CAPTER 1- The nine strange teens
The day started like any other day on shugazoom, nothing was out of the ordinary or so they thought until they look closer and hear the sound of metal being torn apart and oil being spilled everywhere. Ok I'm getting ahead of myself lets rewind to three days prior.
It was a nice sunny day on shugazoom and everything was normal except for one person who had been abnormally happy since the news about a shuttle bringing people from earth to shugazoom and who is this person you ask well it's none other than chiro the young 14 year old leader of the hyper force.
Upon noticing chiro's strange behavior the team secretly followed him to the shuttle arrival when the shuttle got there they saw a rather interesting group of teenagers. The oldest of the group was a boy around 18 years old with gray hair and orange eyes carrying a wooden sword and wherein a school uniform that consisted of black dress pants, a white button down shirt(which was un tucked),black dress shoes, and dark/blood red jacket(which was unbuttoned) with a strange embrium on the pocket, the next in the group was a girl who also looked about 18 years old and carrying a wooden sword as well she had a slender athletic build with a small bust, her build was surrounded by her long dark/blood red hair that reached mid-back and was the same color as the boys blazer along with dark blue eyes a few shades darker than chiro's own this girl was also wherein a uniform the girls though consisted of a long checkered red and black skirt, black knee socks, brown mid knee high boots, and a black zip up tight shirt with a dark/blood red stripe going down the front and sleeves all ending with a chain that had a red flame charm on it at the collar of the shirt. As soon as the two sword wilding teens stepped off the shuttle an argument broke out.
"hey flat chest" said the boy with gray hair as he got off the shuttle which got him a punch in the face while the girl with red hair who punched him said "don't call me flat chest dummy" this led both the teens to draw their swords they were about to fight when the heard a calm male voice say
"Calm down Emmy you too Yugi theirs no reason to fight" followed by two very similar "yeah yeah's" coming from behind them.
The voices turned out to be three other teens a year or two younger than the red haired girl and gray haired boy. The calm voice turned out to be a young African American boy about 17 years old with short curly black hair and green eyes wherein the exact same uniform as the first boy whose name was apparently Yugi except his shirt was tucked in and his jacket was buttoned up. Behind him were two very similar looking girls 16 year old girls both of the girls had shoulder length hair and amber eyes but one girl had brown hair with her bangs parted to the right and the other had blond hair with her bangs parted to the left, the girls were wherein a uniform similar to the red haired girl Emmy's uniform except the skirt is knee length and they both have yellow belts, instead of boots both the girls have black Mary janes and the charm on the chains is of an orange tornado for the brown haired girl and a yellow tornado for the blond haired girl. At the moment all three were looking at Emmy and Yugi with a mix of amusement and embarrassment.
"There is so a reason to fight Sea she called me a dummy" said Yugi
"Only because you made fun of her first" said the African Boy Sea behind him you could hear the two girls giggling quietly.
"Ya-Ya, Zi-Zi this is no reason to laugh he made fun of me "said Emmy
"But you made….." started the blond girl Ya-Ya
"…..fun of him too" finished the brunet girl Zi-Zi
"Why I …" Emmy was cut off by a flash of dark and light blue crashing into her.
"owwww" the flashes said which turned out to be two more teens the same age as Ya-Ya and Zi-Zi the dark blue was a girl around 16 years old with dark blue elbow length straight hair wherein the same uniform as the other girls but her skirt was knee length and plane dark/blood red with a black stripe running down the middle and her charm was a light blue bubble the same color as her eyes. The light blue was a boy about 16 years old with light blue hair that went till about his ears with the same eyes as the girl and wherein the same uniform as the other boys except instead of the button up shirt he was wherein a dark blue T-shirt and he was wherein a blue earing like the other two boys who wore a red and green one.
"Jeez Rinny can't you walk like a normal person instead of plowing over them with your skateboard "said a very furious Emmy.
"She's right sis you should watch out next time" snickered the light blue haired boy to the girl apparently named Rinny.
"You're just as guilty as me Hunt and you know it" shouted an enraged Rinny making the boy apparently named Hunt cower in fear.
"Ara Ara" said a soft sweet voice like an angels
"You guys are creating a commotion if you keep this up will never find Chi Chi" said a cool low voice
The voices came from the last two children who had been silent thus far. The cool voice came from a very strange looking boy with medium length dark purple hair (tied in a braid) and red/crimson eyes that looked about the same age as Chiro wherein the exact same outfit as Yugi but he was wearing a black tie that went well with his tanned skin and he was wearing a purple earing he seemed upset but he had a bemused smile on his face showing that he was amused despite what he said.
It was the girl next to him who caught most of the attention, she was the most beautiful girl anyone had ever seen she had skin that was a mix between porcelain and snow white like she had never been outside that contrasted greatly with her long knee length ebony hair that was tied up in to waist length low ponytails with blood/dark red ribbons, she was also wearing a uniform like the other girls but her skirt was a deep dark/blood red with black lace at the bottom that ended at mid thie leaving just a strip of her super pale skin visible before going into thie high black stockings and knee high black boots and her charm was a beautiful white snowflake and unlike the other girls she had three earrings in each ear that were black and lavender-crimson that matched her eyes and her build was small and fragile like a dolls with a larger than average bust and she looked about a year younger than the tan boy.
"Karin-sempie, Hunter –kun can you please stop fighting" said the doll like girl said with a soft angel like voice with a soft warm smile on her face.
"Absolutely Rea-Rea and were not creating a disturbance Cro-Cro" said Rinny o he two children now identified as Rea-Rea and Cro-Cro.
Before another fight could break out Chiro chose the time to enter and make his presence know which immediately got the nine teens attention.
"Chi-kun!" gasped Rea-Rea as she launched herself at him in a hug
"Nice to see you again Rea-Chan" said Chiro as he spun her around in his arms
"Hey Chi-Chi" said Cro-Cro as he gave Chiro a manly one arm hug and while returning it Chiro returns the greeting "hey Crow".
While everyone was greeting each other the monkey team came out of their hiding places and finally after a few minutes of the teens talking decided to make themselves known.
"Chiro" said Antauri
"h-h-hi Tauri when did you guys get here?" stuttered Chiro
"Just now so would you kindly introduce us to your friends?" asked Antauri
"Oh these are my friends from when I used to live on earth and ill let them introduce themselves" said Chiro.
"I'm Yugi Moto and I'm 18 years old and people call me Yug" said Yugi
"I'm Emily Hayes and I'm 18 years old too and people call me Emmy" said Emily
"I'm Seaweed Studs and I'm 17 years old and people call me Sea" said Seaweed
"Hi hi I'm Yakko Eric and I'm 16 years old and people call me Ya-Ya" said Yakko
"Hi hi I'm Zinon Elric and I'm 16 years old too and people call me Zi-Zi" said Zinon
"Hey I'm Karin Garcia and I'm 16 years old and people call me Rinny" said Karin
"Yo! I'm Hunter Garcia and I'm 15 years old and people call me Hunt" said Hunter
"Yo I'm Crow O'Neil and I'm 14 years old and people call me Cro" said Crow
"Ohiyo I'm Raven Roth and people calls me Rea please take care of me" said Raven
"Team these are my childhood friends and their going to be vacationing here on shugazoom" said chiro
So how was that for a first chapter I would really really love your opinion so please review!
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Chiro-Baylee1100 does not own super robot monkey team hyper force but she does own the nine strange teens from the first chapter.
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Chapter 2- Living with teens from earth
Previously on the real story of chiro
"I'm Yugi Moto and I'm 18 years old and people call me Yug" said Yugi
"I'm Emily Hayes and I'm 18 years old too and people call me Emmy" said Emily
"I'm Seaweed Studs and I'm 17 years old and people call me Sea" said Seaweed
"Hi hi I'm Yakko Eric and I'm 16 years old and people call me Ya-Ya" said Yakko
"Hi hi I'm Zinon Elric and I'm 16 years old too and people call me Zi-Zi" said Zinon
"Hey I'm Karin Garcia and I'm 16 years old and people call me Rinny" said Karin
"Yo! I'm Hunter Garcia and I'm 15 years old and people call me Hunt" said Hunter
"Yo I'm Crow O'Neil and I'm 14 years old and people call me Cro" said Crow
"Ohiyo I'm Raven Roth I'm 13 years old and people calls me Rea please take care of me" said Raven
"Team these are my childhood friends and their going to be vacationing here on shugazoom" said chiro
ON WITH THE STORY
The monkey just kept starring at the teens thinking close to the same thing …well most of them
'Chiro's from earth?' thought Nova
'There are no records stating that chiro's from earth' thought Gibson
'If the kid's from earth how come he never told us about it or about these supposed childhood friends' thought Sparx
'If these children are his friends why come visit now instead of years ago' thought Antauri
'I wonder if any of chiro's friends have anything to eat' thought Otto
After a few minutes of wondering the team finally decided to ask chiro and his friends about their visit …. Well most of them.
"Hey kid why are you here now all of the sudden?" an angry Sparx asked Crow
While Otto asked Raven a completely different question "Do you have any food?"
After both of the questions were asked they both go surprised looks till Crow and Raven asked chiro a question no one had ever asked except chiro.
"Chi-Chi why and how is the monkey yelling/talking to me" asked a questionable Crow only to followed by a very confused Japanese speaking Raven.
"Chi-kun monkey –san talku" asked a very confused Raven while trying to say the question in English correctly.
"Yes Rea-Chan the monkey talked and Cro I think you made him angry for whatever reason" said a not so surprised Chiro
"You can understand us and if yes what are you thinking" asked Otto
"Hai and kawiii" said Raven while enveloping Otto in a soft warm hug
"What did she say" asked an interested Gibson
"She said "yes" and "cute" because she thinks Otto is cute" explained Chiro
"Chi-kun who are they" asked Raven in accented English
"They're my family Rea-Can" answered Chiro
"Father" Chiro said while pointing to Antauri, which Raven repeated with "otou-sama"
"Yep and Mother" nodded Chiro while pointing to Nova and was repeated with "okaa-sama"
"And brother's" said Chiro and he got three different answers for Gibson, Sparx, And Otto in that order "Onii-sama, Nii-san, And Nii-Chan"
"Yep Rea-Chan, so why don't we go back to the robot" asked Chiro
"Ok/Hai" came the responses from the teens
With that the teens and Chiro went to the robot with the monkey team following /watching behind them. The kids were from what they observed very comfortable with each other, most of the girls were chatting with each other, the guys doing the same thing while Chiro was talking to Crow in the front of the group with Raven hugging/holding his arm. All in all they looked comfortable with each other like they were like that naturally.
Upon their arrival at the robot at around lunch time the teens spread out around the living room area, with the exception of Raven, Crow, and Chiro who went to the kitchen to start lunch for everyone.
Without Chiro in the room with them the team and teens went into a lapse of silence until Karin pulled out an MP3 player which she plugged in to the main computer that made music come out of the speakers and got her and the other teens to show the team their dance moves. Karin and her brother Hunter were doing what they called hip-hop which was really fast and complicated which ended with Hunter and Karin spinning on their heads. The next to preform were Ya-Ya and Crow (who had just emerged from the kitchen after cleaning the table ) who were doing the salsa which in opinion on the team was fast and precise. The second to last to perform were Sea and Zi-Zi doing something you would have done at a sock hop during the 60's. The finale ones to dance were the Chiro and Raven who had just emerged from the kitchen after a while of convincing the teen's chiro and raven did something that seemed like a combination between ballet and hip-hop, which turned out to be graceful yet energetic at the same time you could call it a masterpiece. After all the dancing and complements were done Raven informed everyone that lunch was ready.
The teen went into the kitchen to have a simple yet delicious lunch, after lunch the teens cleaned the kitchen and stayed out of the teams way while they worked on a plan to get rid of skeleton king which ended just in time for dinner which Raven had been preparing it consisted of buttered and salted rice, miso soup, and grilled fish it in everyone's opinion was delicious. After washing the dishes the teens went to sleep in some of the spear rooms in the robot except for Raven and Crow who for some reason slept in Chiro's room before the team could question them which they figured they would do in the morning.
It was the middle of the night when the team heard singing coming from the sleeping corters the teens were staying in, the team followed the singing till they could only hear one verse….
Careful what you do...
Because god is watching you're ever move…
Hold my hand in the dark street for if you do I know that I'll be safe...
Even if you're far away and alone I know that you will take me there this I know…
Then suddenly the singing stops and when the team opens the door to their leaders room where the singing was coming from they see…..
Oh, a cliffhanger I hope this is to your liking reviewers please review and tell me what I can fix if you don't thank you!
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