My grandma died in november, then my mom and dad got a devorce and this big custite case and now that its finally over i can't finish this story. I personally think its too goody-too-shoes and makes kagome sound like a goddess or something when she's only around nine years old.Yeah, I'm a really bad writter. I also criticize my work and I really don't like this story. I can either rewrite it (hopefully) or let it be adopted. If your interested in either choice please review for me. and if i do rewrite it, i warn you kagome might die.