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Percy POV

It was going great. I had found two of my old friends, Charles Beckendorf and Silena Bearuguard. They were so excited to come. They wanted to go to camp again.

Now I had a plan, I had told beckendorf and silena. It is bold but dangerous. I had to go out and past elysium. To the river Styx where I wish to find Achilles.

'Percy, are you sure its a good idea?' asked silena

'I like the sound of bringing Achilles back.' Beckendorf added

'Well, hopefully it will work.'

Beckendorf had builded us a transportation device. We used it to get to the end of elysium. I saw the river styx, It was soo close. I was getting excited about the plan until Hades guard dag Cerberus appeared with a bunch of nasty looking hellhounds. It barked at us, I think it was trying to tell us to go back.

'Me and Charles will take the dogs, silena, you go and see you can find achilles to aid us' i said

They nodded.

'You're not rusty are you?' I asked with a grin on my face

'Nothing could get me rusty, not even death' Beckendorf replied. We both laughed at that. Then we charged the dogs.

The hellhounds came first. I went to left and Beckendorf to the right. I almost forgot how good Beckendorf was. There we a dozen hellhounds, They turned to dust rather quickly. We were on a roll, preparing to charge cerberus until hades appeared.

'Perseus Jackson what are you doing dead, what was your plan about!' he roared.

'Lord Hades, I am sorry for attacking, but I have to get to Achilles' I said

Hades looked at me, I felt his presence in my mind, He was reading my mind, i thought.

'Jackson, this is a dangerous plan, it may not be possible. Very well I will aid you in every way I can' He said, as he dissapeared. I was dazed, then charles said

'Come on Perce, Lets go!'

'Right sorry' I said as we ran up to silena.

She was talking to a soldier, the soldier recognized me. It was Achilles.

You, demigod, I remembered your last visit.'

'yes Achilles'

'You have survived your challenge,and now a greater one awaits you.'

'Yes'

' I will come on your quest, I wish to see Chiron again'

I remembered Chiron was Achilles teacher.

'thank you, now if you will, follow us to continue the search.',

Achilles grinned 'what are we waiting for then, lets go.'


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