So heres the next part of my story. I hope you guys liked it as I had a few people who set Never Reject A Demon as there favourite. It would be nice if I could get some review aswell please guys. Anyway, this parts from Edwards point of view. Enjoy!
I was sat in the front of my volvo, driving fast. Now that Bella was a vampire everything was so much easier, she could run and hunt with me! I didn't have to be so careful with her and best of all, she would let me drive fast... REALLY fast! I looked behind me to renesmee, my beautiful daughter.
"EDWARD, watch the road!" Bella shouted. Well, it couldn't all be perfect. Anyway, back to renesmee. After about 200 years of our forever, we are comeing back to Forks High school. Emmett, Rosalie, Alice and Jasper are comeing back with us to. Renesmee, fully grown and looking about 16, is undercover as Bellas younger cousin from New Jersey. I dont think we would get away with bella being Renesmees mother, as she was turned into a vampire at 19.
Renesmee was like a typical teenager, she had back combed her red hair and wore it over her face. She had earphones listening to 'a lot of noise' as Esme, my mother calls it. "I heard theres a new girl comeing to the school today, Nessy" Bella mentioned looking around to our little girl "Maybe you could be freinds, the two new girls".
"AW!" she pulled one earphone out and sat up strait "But you said I could come and sit with you guys. Your like the cool outsiders at this school, why cant I be part of your gang?".
"But you should-"
"Dont worry Renesmee" I interupted Bella "You can do whatever you want as long as you are happy".
"Thanks daddy!" Nessy smiled and slumped back down into the car seat, she replaced the earphone and answerd a text she had recieved.
Bella gave me a frown across the car so I held her hand and and mouthed 'sorry.
"Whos that from?" I asked Nessie, like I didn't know.
"Jacob" she grinned, her and Jacob had been getting alot more seriously recently, becasue Jacob didn't leave the pack he has been able to stay alive, and with Renesmee. I decided to not say anything else as we drove to school. All we could hear was the light buzz of Renesmees music comeing form her earphones.
In Hell
"Your a worthless, vile, bloodthirsty creature thats no use to anyone" shouted the beautiful angel as he threw the girl across the room.
"I love you Marco! Stop it!" she screamed protecting her face and head from the glass shattered on the floor.
"Well you should of thought of that when you killed my family" and he kicked her in the stomach leaving her gasping for breath.
"But I loved you..."
He looked away from her "... Well I never loved you".
At that point she cried a deafining scream and ripped him apart limb from limb. She pulled out his insides and found his heart.
"Now I have your heart, you will allways be mine" and she cradled the lifeless organ.
Down her face trickled red tears.
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