This is a rewrite in Ch 2 and I want to thank for his amazing help on the rewrite, and no, I didn't delete the first story. Plus, the one who made the cowboy will be in the RWBY crossover. And can somebody help me with the RWBY crossover and also the MLP Equestrian Girls 2. I decided to use them but I need help at the beginning.
Chapter 2: Uncle Owen and Raptor Cousins
Val woke up when she heard a ding from the Airplane saying they have landed. She grabs her backpack before going out. She stayed in line seeing many people getting off the airplane and then to a ferry. As she gave her ticket to the guard, she sits near the window with an old man beside her. The old man has slightly wrinkled pale skin, white hair and brown eyes. "Is this your first time?" the old man asked. Val looks at him and nodded. "Are you going to see the dinosaurs?" he asked.
"I'm going to wive thewe with my Uncle, Siw." Val answered politely.
The old man chuckles, "I'm Carl Dale but call me Carl." He said, "Why are you going by yourself? Does your parents allowed it?"
Val looks at her raptor necklaces sadly. She still can't get over her parents' death. "My Mommy and Daddy awe gone."
Carl looks at her sadly, "I'm sorry to hear that."
Valentina smiles kindly, "It is okay. My Mommy and Daddy awe good people and good people go to heaven."
Carl smiles at the little girl's kindness and ruffles her beanie hat. Then he saw something in a distance and smiled. "Oh, look at that." Val followed his gaze and saw the island. The island is called Isla Nublar. The island used to be owned by John Hammond back in 1993 but it was shut down when the dinosaurs escaped and there were many deaths because of the incident. Never play God otherwise bad things happen. Val wonders if she could befriend the dinosaurs there, I mean, all the animals in her home always follow her and would make her laugh. She hopes she could make friends there. "We're here." Carl said with a smile. "By the way what is your name sweetie?"
"My name is Valentina Wosalina Gwady, Mw. Wale but Val fow showt." Val said kindly with a cute smile. Carl smiles as the ferry enters the gate.
Meanwhile in the docks, Owen was there with Barry, holding a sign that said Valentina on it, waiting for his niece. "Why am I the one holding the sign?" Barry asked with a grumpy face.
"Hey, rock beats scissor, so I win." Owen said with a grin. The two of them had rock, paper, and scissor to see who would hold the sign. Barry lost and Owen won. Barry rolled his eyes as the ferry landed and many people came out. Owen and Barry are having a hard time finding Valentina because they didn't know what she looks like.
"Next time Owen, asked the girl, Abigail, to send us the picture of Valentina." Barry said looking for the four in a half year old girl. Owen silently mimics him in a mocking tone as he searches for his niece. Val, on the other hand, was walking out of the ferry with Carl. "Well, I should go now my grandkids are calling me." Carl said as he waves over to his grandkids with their parents as they waved back happily.
Val nodded with a smile, "Okay, bye Mw. Wale, it was vewy nice meeting you." She said kindly. Carl smiles as he went to his grandkids and Valentina was now on the search for her uncle. She had a hard time finding him since she was small and many people walked pasted her. And another problem, she doesn't even know what he even looks like. Val was getting nervous until she notices a black man, who was frowning, with a sign that has her name on it and another man that was looking for someone. Val walks over to him and tugs his pants. "Um excuse me?" Val asked politely.
The white man turns around but saw no one behind him. "Down hewe," Val said.
The man looks down at her. "Oh uh are you Valentina?" he asked, kneeling down.
Val nodded, "Yes, I'm Valentina."
The man smiles, "Well, you probably know who I am. I'm your Uncle Owen."
Val nodded then she notices a black man, "Who's he?" Val tilts her head.
Owen looks at him, "Oh that's Barry my friend."
"Oh, it's nice to meet you Mw. Bawwy." Val smiled politely.
Barry chuckles as he outstretches his hand, "Call me Barry or Bawwy." He said jokingly to the last part.
Val shakes his hand, "Okay."
Owen looks at her raptor necklace, "That's a nice necklace you got there."
Val looks at her necklace, "Wosh said that my daddy was supposed to give it to me on my biwthday," she said sadly.
Owen and Barry looks at her sadly, "Well, we should get your things." Owen said. Val nodded as she follows them and Owen and Barry carried her bags. They got in the jeep and Owen was driving the jeep while Barry was in the front seat. Val was in the back seat with a baby chair. She looks at her raptor necklace sadly. She wished that her parents are here and also will Barry and Owen accept her if she shows her powers to them. Owen looks at Val. "So…do you like dinosaurs?" Owen asked breaking the silence.
Val looks up and answered politely, "Yes, Uncle Owen, I always dweamed of meeting one."
Owen nodded, "What's your favorite of all dinosaurs?" he asked.
"Velociwaptows," Val answered. The corrected word was Velociraptors. Owen stops the jeep all of a sudden. Luckily, Val was wearing her seatbelt if not she would have fallen off. Owen and Barry looks at her eyes widen in shock.
"Did you say Velociraptors?" Barry asked in shock.
Val nodded her head slowly, fearing she said something wrong.
"Why?" Owen asked.
Val gulps, "B-because they'we very smawt, they h-hunt togethew and also they're v-vewy mystewious." She stuttered scared, she should be careful otherwise her powers might go...boom. Owen and Barry look at her as she buried her face in her mother's scarf. Owen and Barry looks away and the jeep started move again. Val looks at her necklace sadly, believing that she angered her uncle and Barry but she didn't hear to their whispers.
"I told you so it's going to be easy." Owen whispers with a triumph grin.
Barry looks at him blankly, "Yeah, for now." He whispers back. Owen shrugs as he continues driving to his bungalow. It took them until noon but they finally reach their destination. It was a simple bungalow, kinda messy, but simple. There was a big lake for swimming, a big field for running around, a tree with a tree house and tire swing and also a small flower garden. As the three got off, Barry and Owen carried her things before entering.
"Here we are," Owen said putting down a pink suitcase, "Your new home. I know it isn't fancy but… hey! Home sweet home right?" Val nodded as she follows her uncle and Barry. "Here's your room." Owen opens the door. Val's room was simple. There was a blue bed in the middle, a pink carpet, with stuff dinosaur toys, a desk with a mini bookshelf, and closet for her clothes. Her room was painted blue with a window with green curtains.
"This will be your room." Owen said, "The bathroom is down the hall next to mine and you need anything just ask, okay?"
Val nodded still believing that her uncle is still mad at her. Owen notices her sad expression and knells down at her height. "Is there something wrong?" he asked gently.
Val looks at him, "I thought you and Bawwy wewe angry at me because I answered about Velociwaptows." She said.
Owen and Barry looks at each other before looking at Val, "We weren't mad just shock to hear that you like Velociraptors." Owen said.
"Why?"
"Well, most kids wanted to see T. Rex, Triceratops, or Pteranodon." Barry said as he looks at Valentina's blue eyes, "But you, you wanted to see the most dangerous of all dinosaurs and yet you're not afraid of them."
"Well, because they'we vewy smart and they take cawe of each othew." Valentina answered.
Owen looks at his niece before smiling, "You and I are gonna get along just fine Val." He said.
"Why's that?" Val asked innocently.
"Because I like Velociraptors too," He smiles. "So does Barry." Barry nodded with a smile. Val smiles and nodded then the three's stomach growls. "Well, I'm hungry." Owen said, standing up, "What do you want for dinner?"
"Well, evewy Fwiday, Mommy would always make pizza." Val said.
Owen grins, "Today is Friday so let's have pizza!" he said. Barry rolled his eyes with a smile as they went to the kitchen. Owen took out a frozen pizza and put it in the microwave and it started heating. Barry and Val set the table. Then there was ding means the pizza was ready as Owen took it out and puts it on the table. The three started eating while Barry and Owen told her funny story on how they met, making her laugh. After they ate, Barry went home saying goodnight to the two Gradys. Val washes herself and puts on a blue big shirt with a bunny picture on the middle and shorts. She went to bed as she puts her whistle, necklace, scarf and beanie hat on the table while Owen places a nightlight.
"Goodnight Val." Owen said.
Yawning, Val slowly closes her eyes while she hugs her yellow stuff Velociraptor toy, name Honey, "Nighty-night Uncle Owen." She yawns before going to sleep. Owen smiles as he close the light then the door.
Next day, Val woke up early in the morning, usually her parents would wake up first but they're gone, she got off of her bed and walked to the kitchen while dragging Honey. As she got to the kitchen she puts Honey on the chair and she took out a cook book on how to make pancakes. She's a smart little girl but sometimes she gets into little trouble when her curiosity gets the better of her. One time when she was three, she somehow got inside a gorilla's cage and played with the female Gorilla name Ashley. Her parents and zookeepers were able to get her and her parents made sure that she doesn't lever their sight ever again. That was to most terrifying day that her parents ever experience.
As she took out the ingredients, she started cooking. It was easy for her as she finished she stacks the pancakes and placing butter and syrup also putting a glass of orange juice for Owen and milk for her. As she sits down, she heard her Uncle Owen's yawn. He enters wearing his blue boxers with no shirt on. Owen rubs his eyes and then they became wide to see a plate full of delicious pancakes with maple syrup and butter.
"Val, did you cook this?" he asked sitting down. He was about to make some bacon and egg but seeing his four in a half year old niece making breakfast was amazing!
Val nodded, "Yup! It's weally easy to make." She took a bite on her pancake. Owen looks at her before taking a bit. A satisfied sound came from him as he continues eating. As they finished they put their plates in the sink. They got dress. Val wears a blue sleeveless t-shirt, brown boots, and brown pants. She puts on her whistle, necklaces, scarf and beanie hat. Her dark brown hair was tied into a ponytail. Owen was wearing his usual clothes. They went outside as Owen helps Val to get inside the jeep. Val sits on the front with Honey close to her side, Owen said. "Alright, Val, wanna see where your Uncle works?" Owen said with a grin. Val nodded as Owen started driving his jeep. Val wonders what her uncle's job is
As they drive through the jungle, they reach to a paddock that is very big and Val could sense danger. Once they got there, Barry was waiting for Owen and his niece, Val. Barry saw Owen's jeep. As Owen parks his jeep, he got off while helping Val to get out and placed her down before walking towards the paddock. "Owen, you're early." Barry jokes walking over to them.
Owen shrugs, "Well, someone woke up before me and started cooking breakfast." He looks at Val with a smile.
Barry saw that and spoke, "A little girl cooks your breakfast?"
"Yup!" Owen said popping the p. "Are the girls out?"
"Yes, we're ready for the Pig Chase."
"Well, I should introduce Val to the girls."
Barry looks at him, "Is it a good idea letting the girls see your niece?"
Owen waved it off, "Come on, they'll like her." Owen walks up to the stairs followed by Val, she takes one step at a time in the stairs since she was short.
Barry shook his head, "Yeah, they'll like her alright, for lunch." He mutters. The three went to a catwalk and Owen went in front and was standing tall with Val behind him. There were some guards and men close by. Owen turns to Val, "Watch your uncle works." He said with grin before looking at the jungle inside, "Barry! Release the Pig!" Barry pressed the button to bring out the big. The Pig runs off. The pig was out squealing in fear. Then there were heavy footsteps chasing the pig. Val couldn't see inside the jungle but she did hear roars. Once the pig got out from the undergrowth, he scurried over to its cage as it closes behind. Then something came out from the undergrowth, it was a raptor!
Val gasps in awe seeing her favorite dinosaur up close and personal. She hides behind her uncle's legs as three more came. "Hold!" Owen ordered making the raptors stop. Owen called them "Hey!" The Velociraptors looked up. Owen started using his clicker, "Okay! Eyes on me, Blue?" Owen looks at the blue colored raptor, who was not listening. "Blue!" Owen used his clicker. The raptor named Blue looked up at him, "Watch it. Charlie. Hey!" The raptor named Charlie was snapping her jaws, "Don't give me that shit! Delta!" Delta the raptor just bared her fangs, "Lock it up! Good! And we're moving!"
Owen walks over to the other side with Val still hiding on his back. The raptors followed while snapping at each other. When they stopped Owen looks at Val, "Sorry you had to hear the S word."
Val smiled. "It's okay Uncle Owen." She heard many bad words from her dad sometimes Josh. Her mom told her not to say it because she was too young and would scold Oscar and Josh to say those words in front of Val.
Owen smiles as he looks at his raptors. "Hold!" The raptors stopped but they continued to glare at him, "That's good. That is damn good. Very good!" he said while using a clicker. He took a chunk of meat from a bucket, "See, Charlie, that's what you get!" he throws the meat at Charlie. Charlie snaps at it before eating it. "Echo, there you go!" the scar raptor ate her meat, "Delta!" then he took out a big rat, "Blue?" Blue looks at him and the rat, "This one's for you." He gave the rat to Blue, which she ate. As the Velociraptors had their fill, Owen spoke, "Alright! I wanna meet your foster cousin!" He looks at Val, "Go on, say hello." He encouraged.
Val nodded and came out from her Uncle's back and looks at the Velociraptor pack. "Hi." Valentina waves with a small smile. The pack was surprised. They never saw a human child before. They didn't growl at her or even gave her the hungry eyes instead they looked at her curiously.
"Alright!" Owen yelled, "I know you girls never seen my niece but I don't want any hungry eyes on her or…"
The Raptors weren't listening to Owen's rules instead they looked at Val curiously. They can smell a weird aroma on her, like she was one of them. Val looks at them in the eye. Her sapphire blue eyes locked at their amber eyes. Val tilted her head on the right and they copied. She then opens her mouth and they followed. Owen stops talking as he looks at his Raptor Squad in confusion.
"Why the hell are they opening their mouths?" he mutters in confusion then he notices Val with her mouth open then realized they were copying her. Owen watches them carefully as Val stick out her tongue. Owen then looks at his Squad who were doing the same. He tried his best not to laugh as Val smiles, showing her teeth, while his Squad copied, they didn't smile but they revealed their sharp teeth.
Val stops and looks at her Uncle, who was shaking in laughter, trying his best not to laugh, "Awe you okay, Uncle Owen?"
Owen looks at her with a smile, "I'm fine. It's just cute that my Squad is copying you."
Val nodded and looks at the Raptors, "What awe theiw names?"
Owen pointed the youngest with green stripes, "That's Charlie." He then pointed a Raptor with gecko like eyes, "That's Delta." He pointed a Raptor with bronze scaled and a scar, "That's Echo." He pointed the last one with blue marking, "And that's Blue my best girl."
Val looks at the Raptors, looked at Echo she saw the scar on her right side on the jaw. "Uncle Owen?"
"Yes Val?"
"Why does Echo have that scaw on hew snout?" Val asked.
"Echo got that scar from Blue. They had a fight between each other." Owen explains.
"What fow?"
"Echo wanted to be the beta before but she lost the fight so Blue won and then she became the beta and that's when Blue given the scar on Echo."
Val looks at Blue, "If she's the Beta and that means…" she looks at Owen with wide eyes, "You'we theiw Alpha?" she asked.
Owen smiles as he ruffles his niece's beanie hat, "Yup." Owen then looks at his Squad who were watching them, "Alright, girls, this is my niece, Val, so don't even think about biting her." The Raptors didn't growl. They just looked at Val until Owen ordered to look up and go. As they run off and the men cheered, Barry came and the two male did a manly high –five, "You finally did it, man."
Val looks at her uncle in awe, "How did you do that?"
Owen smiles at his four in a half year old niece, "It's a relationship it's base on mutual respect." He said.
Val was about to asked another question until a man came. "Owen!" he called with a grin, "I was starting to think I hired the wrong guy but damn, you got them eating out of your palm." Val hides behind her uncle as the man came close.
The man was name Victor Hoskins aka Vic. He's the leader of Jurassic World's private security force. Under his leadership, InGen developed advanced security measures that helped to protect the visitors from the dinosaurs and could also be used in wars but that's never going to happen. "You came on a good day." Owen answered. "It's not usually a happy ending."
"Is that why you're not sending in your reports?" Vic asked.
"We've been busy." Barry steps in.
"Not too busy to cash your paychecks." Vic jokes at the two men.
"No," Owen rolled his eyes, "We were busy with her." He moves a side so Vic can see Val. Vic's eyes widen in shock to see the little girl.
"Who's the kid?"
"This is Valentina Rosalina Grady aka my niece." Owen answered narrowing his eyes at Vic before looking at his niece, "Val, this is Victor Hoskins or you can call him Vic." Val just nodded as she hides behind her uncle.
"I didn't know you have a niece," Vic said, looking at Val, hiding on Owen's back.
"What do you need, buddy?" Owen asked annoyed as Val holds his hand in fear.
Vic looks at Owen and Barry before saying, "A field test." Owen and Barry rolled their eyes at Vic before Owen guided Val away from Vic. Vic follows the two while Barry went to help the man in the reports.
"Hey, I've just seen they can respond to commands. We need to take the research and get it on its feet." Vic catches up to the two.
"These are wild animals, Hoskins. Trust me; you don't want them in the field." Owen said, leading Val away from Vic.
"I just saw a bond," Vic came in front at the Gradys, "A real bond between man and beast."
Owen and Val looks at him while Owen looks at him annoyed, Val looks at Vic in fear. She could tell he really wants to use the raptors as war weapons. "You're in my way." Owen said annoyed, "And you're scaring my niece." He looks at his scared niece.
"Come on." Vic sighs, "We're the same. We're dogs of war. We know that the military needs to reduce casualties. Some people think that robots are the future."
Owen rolled his eyes as he walked past him with Val still holding his hand, "Look, nature gave us the most effective killing machines 75 million years ago. And now we know they can take orders."
Barry came to the three. "We finally make progress and that's the first thing he says?" Barry looks at Vic in annoyance, "Make a weapon?"
"Shit," Vic mutters as they walked to the catwalk, "Come on, gents and lady." Vic said, "It's grown-up time. Drones can't search tunnels and caves and they're hackable. The minute a real war breaks out, all that fancy tech is gonna go dark." Vic said.
"But that tech's not gonna eat them if they forget to feed it." Owen said before looking at his niece, "Am I right Val?" Val nodded in agreement. It is always important to feed deadly carnivores otherwise they will eat you but not Val because she's too sweet and cute!
"Look at these creatures." Vic gestured the raptors. They all looked at them and Blue was looking at Val only, not on Owen, Barry or Vic, "They've got millions of years of instinct in their cells, instinct that we can program." He explains, "Their loyalty cannot be bought. These guys are gonna run straight into the enemy's teeth and eat them, belt buckle and all."
Val looks at him in fear before hugging her uncle's leg. Owen pats Val's head gently. Vic shouldn't say those things in front of a little girl. "What if they decide they wanna be in control?" Barry asked Vic.
"Well, then we remind them who is. We terminate the rogues. Promote only loyal bloodlines." Vic said. Owen and Barry looked at each other before Barry stared chuckling as he walks away. Owen let out an awkward whistle as Vic watches Barry leave. "What? What's so funny?"
"I don't know." Owen grins, "You come here and you don't learn anything about these animals except what you want to know. You made them, and now you think you own them."
"We do own them." Vic looks at Owen, "Extinct animals have no rights."
"They're not extinct anymore, Hoskins." Owen said.
"Exactly," Vic said, "We're sitting on a goldmine and Masrani is using it to stock a petting zoo."
A man came and gives Owen the bucket and walks off, "He just wants to teach people some humility." Owen said, "He doesn't make weapons." Owe looks at Val, "Val why don't you watch the raptors okay? I'll catch up to you later." Val nodded and let go of her uncle's hand and went to the catwalk. She looks at the raptors curiously. Her uncle was busy talking to Vic, saying raptors are not weapons but wild animals.
"You think that the eighth richest man in the world is only into oil, telecom, and family fun parks?" Vic asked a bit loudly, "He's so diversified; he doesn't even know what he owns."
"How long has InGen been practicing this pitch?" Owen asked as he went down followed by Vic.
"Since the day we hired you out of the Navy. You knew the end game. These animals can replace thousands of boots on the ground." Owen enters a cage and closes the gates and locked it.
"How many lives would that save?" Vic said from the other side of the gates, "War is part of nature." Owen looks at him blankly, before walking away as Vic continues talking, "Look around, Owen. Every living thing in this jungle is trying to murder the other, Mother Nature's way of testing her creations, refining the pecking order. War is a struggle. Struggle breeds greatness. Without that, we end up with places like this, charge seven bucks a soda."
"Do you hear yourself when you talk?" Owen asked sarcastically.
Vic sighs, "This is gonna happen, with or without you boys. Progress always wins, man. "
"Maybe progress should lose for once."
Then they hear, "Pig loose! Pig loose!" the feeder yelled out. They turn to see the feeder was ruining at the cat walk with a control pole. Somehow the pig that was used for training managed to escape its pen. Val was next to the young feeder. She was stepping on the third bars of the rails because she was short and she couldn't see the raptors. She watched as he attempts to save the pig but Echo grabbed it. The action made the young male fall as well as Val.
"Val!" Owen panic.
The two screamed and landed on the ground hard. Well, the feeder was but Val landed on him before she rolled off of him. She stops when she bumped into something. Looking up, Val saw Blue was looking at her curiously along with her sisters. They completely ignore the feeder. She sits up and tilts her head and the raptors mimic her. The guards saw this and pointed their guns at the raptors.
"No, hold your fire! Hold your fire." Owen ordered as he opens the gate, "Do not fire. Put 12 amps in these animals, they're never gonna trust me again and I will never have a niece again!" The guards back off but still pointed their guns at the Raptors. Owen stands still as he watched the Raptors stalking around Val, like they were observing her. Barry came in while Vic stays outside. They were looking at them fearfully.
"What are they doing?" Vic asked.
"They're observing her." Owen said looking at his Squad and his niece. He carefully enters the paddock.
"Why?"
"To know if she's friend or… food." Barry said the last part gravely.
Blue and Delta sniffs at Val while Charlie and Echo looks at her. Owen carefully guides the feeder to the gate and Barry helps him in. Owen couldn't get his niece because his raptors are dangerously close to her. Blue then smells something. She sniffs at Val's pocket before nudging it. Val took out a pack of Oreo cookies that she put for a snack. The Raptors were curious, they never seen that kind of food before. Val opens it and took one cookie before showing it to the pack. "Want one?" she asked politely.
The Raptors tilted their heads in curiously as Blue sniffs at it. She then took it with her mouth then chewed it and swallowed. She licks her muzzle while she purrs happily. Her sisters also wanted a treat and barks at Val gently. Val smiles as she throws them each of her Oreo cookies which they ate. The Val opens her scarf to revile her necklace and whistle. She put her whistle in her mouth and blows at it gently. The Raptors were startled when they heard the whistle. Then she started to make weird sound in her whistle. The Raptors recognized that sound she was using in her whistle, she was speaking Raptors. As she stops, Blue made hissing and growling sounds. Val nodded and started to make more sounds in her whistle.
"What is she doing?" Vic asked.
"I think she's communicating with them." Barry said in shock.
"She's speaking Raptors." Owen whispers in amazement.
As Val finished communicating with the raptors, letting her whistle hang down on her neck, Blue lowered her head and sniffed at Val's face that caused the guards, on the catwalk, to point their guns at them. They were about to shoot at the Raptors. But stopped when Blue stopped sniffing at Val and suddenly she nuzzled her head on Valentina's cheek, like she was her hatchling. Everyone, minus her sisters, eyes widen in shock to see Blue the Beta nuzzling a little girl! Val giggles as she hugs Blue's head, gently stroking her head making Blue purr. Owen, Barry, Vic and the feeder were shock to see that.
"Blue didn't attack her." Barry said in shock.
Vic was shock as well, "Why didn't she attack?"
It was Owen's turn to answer, "She thinks that Val is a baby raptor."
While Val and Blue are still hugging each other, Charlie came up to them. Charlie lowered her head and she gently nudges on Valentina's side and made a barking sound to get Val's attention. Val felt the gentle nudge from Charlie. She lets go of Blue's head and she turned her attention to Charlie. Val smiled at the youngest raptor. She realized that Charlie also wanted a hug from her just like Blue did. Smiling, Val hugs Charlie's head, making Charlie purr happily. While Val and Charlie are hugging, the two last raptors of the Raptor Squad, Delta and Echo, came up to Val, Blue and Charlie, as Val lets go of Charlie's head, she turned her attention to Delta and Echo, she smiled at the two raptors, then Delta and Echo lowered their heads. Delta and Echo nuzzled their heads on both of Val's cheeks that made her laugh happily because she's very ticklish. Then Val gives a hug to Delta's head, after that she lets go of Delta's head, Val turned to the last raptor and she hugs Echo's head. Everyone was in shock to see the most vicious dinosaurs, the Velociraptors, are being so kind and caring for a little girl.
"Well I'll be damn." Vic mutters with a grin. Barry was shocked to see Val is being cuddled and nuzzled by the Raptors.
Owen just smiled. His Raptors took a liking on his niece, "Val!" Val looks at Owen along with the Raptors, "Come on! I'm gonna show you around in the park." Owen smile.
"Okay!" Val cheers. She looks at the Raptors and puts her whistle in her mouth before blowing it telling the Raptors to go. The Raptors did it while they bark saying See ya!
Smiling, Val gets up and skips back to the gate. She got it and Barry closes it and then going out. As she did, she saw Owen, Vic, and Barry looking at her. Owen picks her up, "Val, don't ever go in the paddock without my permission." He said.
Val nodded, "Sowwy Uncle Owen, I pwomise." She said innocently.
Owen smiles before looking at Barry, "I'm gonna show her around the park so take my place, Barry." He said. Barry nodded before going up the stairs. Owen carries Val to his jeep. Val looks back at the paddock to see the Raptor Squad looking at her. She smiles as she waves at them. They waved back using their claws. Val smiles as she hugs her uncle's neck but she didn't notice that Vic was grinning at them. He believes that Val can tame Raptors because they were easily took a liking on her and he thinks that they are ready to be weapons use in war. She'll be use in great projects for InGen. He grins as he looks at Val, who was getting the jeep, leaving with Owen.
There! Happy? I fixed it and I will do the same in chapter three!