Don't Jump

by Crimson Rekrin

Sakura's been rejected by Sasuke for the last time. A song-fic for Tokio Hotel's 'Don't Jump'. Implied gaaraXsakura, mentioned character death. Yeah. Read it. Review it. It's good. Yeah.... Got nothing else to say.

2. Everyone, please read this

Okay, listen up. I've been getting a few review saying a bunch of crap about how I 'don't put enough detail, going over-dramatic, making no sense' and blah blah blah. I don't give a fuck about your 'constructive criticism'! I write stories in my OWN style, and if you don't like it, then fuck off! I don't need constructive criticism. If you didn't like it, simply say "I don't like it." If you like it, tell me! I don't want people telling me how I should and shouldn't write! And unless you haven't seen, at the very top of the fucking page, it says ' unleash your imagination'. I'll write how I want, and I don't need anyone telling me what I should do! Here's some of the main points people have been talking about that I'm going to go over now.

1) People are saying my story lacks a lot.

2) People are saying I need in-character characters.

3) People are saying I made Sakura too weak.

4) People are saying I made Sakura too dark.

5) People are saying I didn't make it creative enough.

6) People are saying I didn't give it that 'real life tone'.

7) People are saying I made Gaara to different (over-dramatic, full of emotion, etc.).

8) People are saying I should have said that it wasn't in the ninja-world.

Here are my responses.

1) I don't give a fuck. If it lacks, it lacks. Don't like it, don't keep reading.

2) I don't need in-character characters. 'Unleash your imagination.'

3) So? It's my fic, I'll make it how I want.

4) So? Again, it's my fic, I'll write it however I want to. Don't like? Then don't read.

5) I'll be as creative as I want.

6) It's not supposed to have a real life tone! It's called 'fan fiction'! Not 'fan non-fiction'!

7) So? Maybe in most people's eyes, it's better that way. Don't like that part? Pretend he's someone else then.

8) Oh fucking well. If you were smart, you'd see that I said 'police', not 'anbu'. If it were in the ninja world, the Anbu Black-Ops would have gotten her down almost instantly. The police are a different story. Learn how to fucking read and interpret.

Again. Don't like the story? Tell me or don't read. That simple. Get over it and stop being a pussy.

On a brighter side…

Everyone else, who actually liked this fic, thanks for telling me, and thanks for not giving me all that 'constructive criticism' crap. I've gotten a lot of hits on this story, and thanks for not giving me a bunch of crap about it! 

Thanks for your time!