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Chapter 1

Pinekit walked around the nursery, he was bored and his littermates were asleep. Stonekit, Featherkit and Windkit were playing, but he didn't wanted to join them.

The tom thought for a while and finally came up with an idea. He walked back to the nest. He tried to wake Poppykit and Shadowkit up but Sweetbriar saw him.

"Don't wake them up, Pinekit" She meowed. "But im bored" Replied Pinekit. "You can play with Stonekit, Featherkit and Windkit" Meowed the she-cat. "I prefer Poppykit and Shadowkit" He replied. Poppykit flicked her ears and opened her eyes and blinked sleepy.

"Finally your awake" Meowed Pinekit, loud enough to wake Shadowkit up."Come on, let's go and play" Meowed Pinekit. "I dont want to play" Poppykit meowed. "Why" Asked Pinekit. "Don't you remember what day is today" Meowed Shadowkit. Pinekit shook his head. Poppykit was about to reply but Sweetbriar was faster "Today is your apprentice ceremony.""I totally forgot" Meowed Pinekit. "The ceremony is at sunhigh" Meowed Shadowkit. "And now is?" Asked Pinekit. "Its just before sunhigh" Said Poppykit. "Well luckly my pelt is groomed" Meowed Pinekit. Sweetbriar started grooming Poppykit, after few heartbeats Poppykit's pelt was groomed. Then it was Shadowkit's turn. "My pelt is fine" Protested Shadowkit. Sweetbriar didn't answered. "There we go, now your pelt looks better" Meowed the queen. "Whatever" Replied Shadowkit. Pinekit was staring at the leader's den, wondering when Oakstar is going to appear. After few moments a dark brown figure appeared from the den and leaped on the highrock. "All cats old enough to catch their own prey gather below the highrock for a Clan meeting.". Pinekit's heart skipped a beat, it was time for him and his siblings to become warriors. When the cats came out of the dens, Oakstar continued "Pinekit, Poppykit and Shadowkit step foward!". The three kits did so. "Gorseclaw! You will mentor Pinepaw. You did amazing job with Deerdapple and im sure you will pass your skill on Pinepaw just like you did to Deerdapple". Gorseclaw padded foward and touched noses with Pinepaw.

Gorseclaw went back to crowd, Pinepaw following."Deerdapple! You did good job at mentoring Nettlefoot, im sure you will pass your skill on Poppypaw". After the she-cats went back in the crowd, Oakstar started speaking again.

"Shadowpaw! Your mentor will be Beetail". Pinepaw was shocked and by the looks of it, Shadowpaw was also shocked. Pinepaw could't help it but feel jealouse. He wanted Beetail to be his mentor, not Gorseclaw. He knew that Gorseclaw is one of the best warriors in the Clan, even though he is not as old as Beetail or Oakstar, but he wanted the deputy to be his mentor, not a senior warrior. Whatever thought Pinepaw. The yowls of his clanmates snapped him out of his thoughts. "Come on i want to show you the territory" Meowed Gorseclaw. Pinepaw nodded and followed Gorseclaw out of the camp.

They first went to Tallpines. Gorseclaw showed him the old SkyClan border, now the Twolegplace border. Then they went back to the ravine, and went to the Great Sycamore and Snakerocks. Gorseclaw told Pinepaw to never go alone to Snakerocks and also told him that Frecklewish, Oakstar's daughter was bitten by an adder there and then died. After that Gorseclaw showed him the Thunderpath and the ShadowClan border. Gorseclaw told Pinepaw a story about Nettlefoot's sister, she went on the Thunderpath and got hit by a monster. Her name was Cherrypaw and she was a golden tabby. After that Gorseclaw showled him Fourtrees, The WindClan border, The Owl Tree, Sunninrocks, the RiverClan border and the Sandy Hollow. When they got back Pinepaw went straight to the apprentice den and fell asleep.

That's it for this chapter. I hope you liked it!