Ch2: First Loss

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Naruto listened to the Kyuubi and went off looking for a good training place. As he was jumping toward the more wild areas of Konoha he looked at Kakashi's exercise '... Water Walking... could be useful.' thought Naruto 'better find an area with water. Yes kit that would be good then you will have a source of water for the duration of your training. 'Huh? Wait... I'm not allowed to go back into town!?!' Not till a few days before the Chunin exams finals. 'Awww! Come on!' NO! 'Hump! Bastard fox.' I heard that!!!

Finally Naruto found a suitable training location. It was a large clearing with a river running threw it. There was a large tree on one side of the clearing with low lying branches that would be his temporary 'home'.

'Alright fox! What first!' Do that exercise your sensei gave you to do. 'What then why do I need your help for training then?!' I will help you learn the exercise faster than if you tried to learn it alone and you need to do that exercise to learn a jutsu I'm gonna teach you. SO DO IT! 'Ok Ok... touchy...' And so Naruto began to learn the water walking exercise and after 3 days Naruto mastered it.

'Ok fox... what now?' Alright the jutsu I'm going to teach you will allow you to enter your mind without having a near death experience. 'Why would I want go into my mind and see you? It's bad enough hearing you! Ha ha ha!' You little brat! Just learn the technique! "Ok ok... hahahahahaha... Ok." It took 5 more days but Naruto was finally ready to enter his own mind. He did the hand seals and: Mind Enter Jutsu!!! (I'm so creative).

"What the hell is that smell!" yelled Naruto who still had his eyes closed. Naruto opened his eyes and looked around. "What the FUCK!!!! My mind is a fucking sewer!?" Yes it is... you should ask one of those Yamanakas if they know how to change it... "Yeah I'll remember that..." Just come to my chamber... that's were the thing I wanted you to see is. "Ok fuzzy, but if your just making a perverted joke it's not funny."

Naruto walked through his mind before he walked through an entrance and looked to his left to see Kyuubi in an enormous cage with a paper with a Kanji for seal on it. Look at the wall opposite my cage. Naruto did so and found a closed door was there. That appeared after your first kill. The door seemed very old. It had Kanji going down it that read: I open at first blood. Naruto reached up and opened the door and entered. The room was made from stone bricks and was lit by torches. The opposite side of the room had another door just like the first one. In the center of the room was a plinth that had a scroll on it. The scroll had written on it: Zombie Bunshin. "But I already have that jutsu... whatever lets check out that other door." Naruto said to himself. He went and looked at the door, it read: I open at first loss. 'Hmmm... could that mean losing one of my precious people? I lost Haku... hmmm.' thought Naruto. Naruto reached up and pushed the door open. The next room was the exact same as the last only the scroll was bigger (Toad summon scroll size). Naruto walked over to the scroll and opened it up and (drum roll here!) it was blank. Naruto sweatdroped... but something told him to take this scroll with him. He slung it on his back and walked up to the door. This door had written on it: I open at first love. 'Hmmm' Naruto thought 'Love for my precious people?' Naruto tried to open that door too but found he couldn't. 'Oh well, better go show Kyuubi what I found.'

So, what did you find? "I don't know I was hoping you could tell me." and so Naruto told the fox everything he had seen then at the end of the explanation Naruto showed the Kyuubi the scroll. The Kyuubi's eyes widened at that. Kit... that is a summons scroll! I cannot tell what it summons but I can tell that this is a new summon scroll! "Cool! I can summon!" Not yet you can't. "Why not?" First you need to make an arangement with the boss summon. Then you can summon. "Alright! Then I'll go summon the boss right now! Oh no you won't! You are going to learn the proper way to talk to a boss summon. I don't want my container to lose the ability to summon just because he insulted the boss! "Ok! Teach me!" Hump! Lets get started. For about a days time in his mind Naruto learned the proper way to talk to the boss summon. Alright kit! Do your thing! And with that Naruto opened his eyes to see the sun up high in the sky.

'Hey Kyuubi?... How long was it out here?' A couple hours... why? 'Nothing nothin... Wait! How am I gonna sign the contract if it's in my mind?' Well kit if you looked around you would see that I reproduced the scroll beside you while I was teaching you. Naruto looked and saw the scroll beside him... 'Oh sorry! Haha!' laughed Naruto scratching the back of his head. Just sighn the damn scroll. said the Kyuubi sighing. Naruto simply signed hhis name in blood on the contract. The Words "Kuchiyose no Jutsu!" rang out through the clearing. Naruto poured as much of his chakra as possible into it. As his hand hit the ground and enormous black portal opened up in the ground in front of him. The portal had flames around the edges. Suddenly Naruto saw an enormous paw plant itself on the ground in front of him then another those two paws then pulled up out of the dark void an enormous three headed dog. The dog was all black complete with salivating mouth, piercing red eyes, and a huge spiked collar around it's neck.

Who dares to summon Cerubis! yelled the left head. "Oh great Cerubis, it was I who summoned you!" called out Naruto. HA! And how did you manage to have enough chakra for that!? Pray tell!? asked the great summon's middle head. "My chakra reserver have always been lerger than normal for my age! A side effect to having the Kyuubi no kItsune sealed inside of me!" yelled Naruto. So the Kyuubi is sealed inside of you... very well I will give you permission to summon me and my kin whenever your in need. Said the right head. "Thanks Cerubis-san! I thank you humbly!" Naruto said bowing. Hump! You should try summoning with your other hand. The results might be... interesting to you. said the summon while a huge portal appeared and Cerubis sank into it before it closed.

'Should we try it fur ball-sama?' asked Naruto. Sure kit just hurry up your running out of time. The finals will be here soon. 'Yeah yeah!' "Kuchiyose no Jutsu!" out of the ground then appeared a tomb stone in front of where Naurto was. The tomb was blank and the soil around it for about a meter had become brown and dead looking. Only a few seconds after appearing the soil lashed out and grabbed a large dragonfly and pulled it under the ground. After that the grave sunk back down into the earth. 'Oooookkkk... What the hell was that!?!' Kit try putting some more chakra into the summoning, not enough for a boss though. 'Alright!' "Kuchiyose no Jutsu!" this time there were three graves all lined up in front of him. Naruto watched as the soil hunted it's prey after a few seconds of just sitting. One grave ignored a dragon fly that came into it's range and instead went for the robin that flew through it's range while the other went for the dragon fly and another just seemed to grab something of the ground. As the graves disappeared Naruto noticed that the soil retained it's deathly state. Interesting, it seems you can summon graves that have a limited range move to pull the largest or most powerful living objects into the ground... try summoning the boss. "Ok, here goes, Kuchiyose no Jutsu!" Suddenly Naruto found himself in the center of a large graveyard. No not large huge! It had to be a mile in diameter! It was surrounded by a rickety metal fence with spikes at the top. There where thousands of tomb stones and beside him was the biggest. Behind it was a dead tree. Nothing happened for a few seconds until the carnage began! Not even the trees were spared as The graves found the most powerful living beings and sucked them down. Finally only a deer was left. It didn't stand a chance. The big boss summon was lightning quick and accurate. As the graves started to lower Naruto could only stare at the destruction. Around him was a mile wide circle of pure death.

"Wow" was all he could say. Alright kit lets get to work on learning how to control those graves. Then we can work on your physical training! "Oh come on!" Naruto moaned.


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