Darkness Rising
Beginning Commentary (please note that you don't have to read the commentary if you don't want to)
Ash: Alright, chapter 2!
Celebi: Thank you for the reviews we got for chapter 1
Cody: *appears out of nowhere again*
Ash: creepy...
Garnet: at least he's not like a certain prissy rich boy I know...
Cody: you know I'm still here right?
Nathan: yep
Nick: Garnet was referring to Jewels, Rose's obsessive weird cousin
Cody: I know that I was talking to Ash
Celebi: ^^;
Ash: you just appeared out of nowhere so it was creepy. Also, is the ending or beginning commentary?
Nathan: -_-"
Jewels: can I kill the ruffian?
Nick: ...
Celebi: beginning
Cody: who do you mean?
Ash: ah, ok, just making sure
Dark: *appears out of nowhere right behind Cody* you popping out of nowhere reminded her of Jewels, Topaz's stalker, and me, the ninja
Jewels: I'm not a stalker!
Misty: there's another guy like Cody here?
Serena: Topaz has a stalker? How Cute!
Dark: Is the eye color changing girl talking about me?
Hannah: Dark, that girl is Misty
Garnet, Nathan, & Moon: yes she does
Garnet & Nathan: and it's not cute
Garnet: He's annoying!
Misty: yes!
Serena: Yes it is; and for Garnet, cute jealousy
Dark: ...
Garnet: cute jealousy?
Topaz: O.O me confused
Serena: Do you want me to explain Topaz?
Topaz: yes please!
Serena: I'll explain it in parts: I think it's cute that Jewels stalks you since he likes you. Do you get it so far?
Topaz: Yes, it's kind of obvious he likes me. He's always grabbing my hand and saying fancy words to me.
Serena: Good you know, and I think it's cute that Garnet it jealous of Jewels because he likes you
Topaz: GARNET LIKES ME?
Nathan: =.=" geez, aren't you loud?
Karrie: eek! *jumps a bit*
Serena: yes, yes
Misty: I think I'm temporarily deaf
Topaz: He LIKES ME? ARE YOU SURE? POSITIVE?
Karrie: eek! *hides behind Zenya*
Hannah: ugh…good thing I'm used to loud noises
Nick: *puts headphones on* I'm glad I always bring these with me!
Garnet: -_-" *blushes a bit*
Nathan: T.T you're more oblivious than Ash!
Ash: Hey!
Misty: What?
Cody: Can we take advantage of this and start the chapter?
Serena: I'm positive
Laurie: Karrie gets very startled and scared by loud noises that are unexpected
Nathan: Why not?
Topaz: I know that he likes me as a friend, but are you POSITIVE that he likes me more than a friend?
Moon: Yay! She's not screaming anymore!
Serena: More than a friend
Topaz: WHAT?
Garnet: ... *blushes*
Nathan: QUIT YELLING!
Karrie: _
Misty: what's going on?
Serena: *sighs*
Nick: I've got duck tape
Topaz: But he tells me that I'm the most annoying girl he ever met!
Moon: oh boy *sighs*
Nathan: can we duck tape her mouth shut for now?
Ash: Karrie *waves hand in front of her face* you there?
Serena: please
Cronosa: Karrie?
Karrie: I'm okay, I'm okay, I wasn't scared, I was just startled...
Nathan: Hey, Hannah, Nick, Garnet, could you hold her back while I duck tape her mouth?
Cronos: didn't seem that way to me
Cody: Can we start this chapter?
Ash: Cody's right
Topaz: mmm, mmm! mph! *has duck tape on her mouth*
Karrie: shush!
Celebi: how will we do the disclaimer?
Ash: we could have Cody say it
Celebi: with Misty?
Ash: perfect =D
Celebi: okay ^^
Misty& Cody: pokelover0ash and celegal1 do not own pokemon
End of beginning commentary
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Chapter 2
"Unova's Challenge?" Amber asked after she finished reading a letter.
"You got one two?" Blake asked walking into the lab.
"Yeah," Amber answered as someone requested video chat," I wonder who that could be?"
"Hi guys!" Marissa said her image appearing on the screen.
"Hey Marissa did you get invited the Unova's challenge," Amber asked waving her letter.
"No, I'm a ranger now and lots of people know it," Marissa answered.
"Ok."
"Okay see you guys later, but first if you guys plan on going you might want to board a boat soon," Marissa said logging out of the video chat.
"She's right! Let's go!" Amber and Blake exclaimed running out the door and towards the pier.
~with Topaz and Garnet in Kanto~
"Moon! Help me!" shouted Garnet while being dragged by Topaz.
"I wish I could Garnet." Moon replied.
"NATHAN! COME OUT BEFORE I FIND YOU AND BEAT YOU UP!" shouted Topaz.
"Must you always threaten me?" Nathan asked as he emerged from some vegetation.
"Nah, but its fun," replied Topaz.
"Alright, let's go to Vermillion." said Moon as she held a map out.
"Moon, you're holding the map upside down." replied Nathan. Moon looked at the map and noticed that it was indeed upside down.
"No wonder it looked confusing." said Moon. Nathan then took the map from her and started to walk ahead.
"Tell me why we can't just fly to Vermillion," said Garnet.
"Moon doesn't have a flying pokemon." replied Nathan.
"Can't she ride with you?" asked Garnet.
"The only flying type you have is Heracross anyways," replied Nathan. "Unless you got a new pokemon."
"Why do we always argue?" asked Moon.
"Topaz, my dear! Would you accept a ride to Vermillion City upon my dear Salamance's back?" asked Jewels after popping up out of nowhere.
"Alright, that's it!" said Garnet before letting out a Flygon. "We're all flying!" Garnet grabbed Topaz and got her on his Flygon before Jewels got her on his Salamance. Nathan sighed and then let out his Skarmory before offering Moon a ride.
"Garnet? Since when did you?" Topaz started to ask.
"I raised it from a Trapinch, I've had it for a while now." replied Garnet.
~with Hannah in Kanto~
"Teleport, works like a charm." said Hannah after her Gardevoir and Nick's Gallade teleported her, Sarah, Nick, Rose, Soul, Silver, and all of their stuff to Vermillion City. "Thank you Gardevoir!" Her Gardevoir nodded and Hannah recalled it to its pokeball while Nick rewarded his Gallade and returned it to its respective pokeball.
"Well, that made up for the time we wasted packing." said Rose.
"Looks like we have company." said Silver while looking up at three flying figures.
"That must be Nathan, Garnet, and Jewels." said Nick.
"Topaz and Moon are probably with them." added Sarah. The three flying pokemon landed by them and they were Salamance, Flygon, and Skarmory. Jewels, Garnet, Nathan, Moon, and Topaz got off their rides and waved.
"Sarah! Soul!" exclaimed Topaz.
"It's good to see all of you!" said Moon as the boys returned their pokemon.
"All aboard for the Unova's Challenge!" said a sailor on a big cruise ship.
"Alright! Let's go!" exclaimed Topaz before dragging Garnet and Moon onto the boat.
"Wait for me my dear!" said Jewels only to be stopped by his cousin.
"I'm keeping my eye on you." said Rose.
"Fine." replied Jewels.
"I guess I better at least attempt to save Garnet and Moon from Topaz." said Nathan before going onto the ship.
"Let's go!" said Sarah as she grabbed her stuff and Hannah and Nick as well. Soul, Silver, Rose, and Jewels ran on after them.
~With Misty, José, and Serena~
"Are we almost there?" Serena asked while playing cards with José.
"Yeah, It'll only take a Chestnut a few minutes to get to the pier," Misty said standing on chestnut's back.
"Remind me why we didn't take your Staraptor?" José asked looking up from the cards in his hands.
"It went missing and I have no clue where it is," Misty said scratching Chestnut's neck, and pulled out her loose feathers.
~With Cody~
"Turns out Misty was right, Staraptor is her fastest bird pokemon," Cody said holding onto Staraptor's neck, "I'll be at the pier in no time!"
~With Amber and Blake at the pier~
"We made it!" Amber said in between coughs.
"Yeah," Blake said as Chestnut landed with Misty, José, and Serena on its back.
"Hey sis!" Misty exclaimed returning Chestnut, her Pidgeot, back into her pokeball.
"Hey Misty," Amber said while Cody landed with Misty's Staraptor, "Isn't that your Staraptor Misty?"
"Let me check," Misty said taking out Staraptor's pokeball and tried to put him back in it, "It sure is!"
"Ok before this fight gets any bigger can we get onto the boat?" Blake, Serena, and José said at the same time.
"Okay," Cody said walking up to the boat.
End of chapter
Ending Commentary
Misty: I wonder what's going to happen at Unova's Challenge
Moon: me too
Karrie: too bad Ash won't tell us
Hannah: it's going to interesting though
Misty: I know right? *eyes turn teal*
Topaz: This is going to be the best ever! I'm super excited!
Sarah: I wonder if the island will have shops and cafes
Serena: I hope so
Sarah: Nick, I want to go shopping for some new dresses when we get there
Nick: T.T you seriously need to get a boyfriend so you can drag him along instead
Cronos: I tell my sister that too
Cronosa: ;P
Nathan: I'm glad I don't have siblings
Karrie: If I told my brother I wanted to go buy some dresses, he'd take me to the nearest hospital and demand that my head get examined
Cronosa: *stifles laughter*
Amber: Same here
Hannah: Sarah and Soul drag me along on shopping trips sometimes. Most of the time I manage to escape
Moon: shopping isn't that bad
Topaz: I love shopping! Unlike my sister...
Marissa: It isn't but Amber here hates it
Cronosa: I wish I could escape being danger prone
Karrie: one time Rhythmi dragged me into a shop full of frilly fluffy pastel colored dresses...I still have nightmares about it *shivers*
Hannah: It's all part of who you are, Cronosa
Cronosa: I know, and Karrie you might consider me lucky since I've never worn a dress before
Karrie: LUCKY! I've been forced into so many dresses especially when I was little and the few times Rhythmi has managed to get me into one!
Cronosa: wow
Karrie: yep
Zenya: Rhythmi's pretty scary once she's determined to do something or really, really mad
Marissa: same for my sister
Umbre: I heard that!
Nick: you know who else is REALLY scary when she gets mad? Hannah. And she's REALLY SCARY when she's REALLY mad
Dark: at least it doesn't seem like your sister is a complete hothead
Midnight: Hey!
Marissa: thanks
Drake: I know your pain Dark
Nick & Dark: you're welcome
Hannah: Nick, I don't think she was thanking you
Nick: =(
Dark: nice to know I've got someone to relate to when it comes to sisters
Serena: hey I'm not that bad!
Midnight: Don't compare me to Serena, please
Rose: you're right, I doubt that Serena would get on Hannah's and Dark's nerves enough to make them double team on you and chase you around
Serena: =P
Midnight: *leaves the room*
Garnet: hey, Rose, do you think you could get Jewels to just leave the room like that?
Amber: I hope so
Jewels: Hey!
Rose: I could but he'll just come back anyways
Serena: How annoying
Garnet, Nathan, Moon, & Rose: yes, it is VERY annoying
Serena: Wow we finally agree on something
Hannah: the only person who be against calling Jewels annoying would be Jewels himself
Topaz: yep
José: That reminds me of three people
Sarah: who?
José: I'll only dive you the first letter of their names B,M, and S
Sarah: Blake, Marissa, and Serena?
José: The first two: no; the third: yes
Serena: hey!
Moon: wait a second...B and M...Blue and...HEY!
Serena: can we kill him?
Moon: we could kill him or we can tell Blue and plan revenge
Serena: we could get blue and get her to help us kill him
Moon: true. I just thought of something, would you like to see José's baby pictures and some embarrassing pictures of him when he was little? I think I have a few of him in a pink dress with me
Serena: *laughs* I'd love to see them
José: I will KILL you Moon if you show anyone those
Moon: *laughs* not the first time you have threatened me! Remember Cream's Teeter Dance or Blueberry's Ice Beam? *sends out her Totodile and Spinda* Serena come here, I've got the pictures right here *shows a picture of José in a pink dress*
Serena: *laughs uncontrollably*
José: *sends out his Ludicolo* Yes it isn't but I've never threatened you with Ludicolo
Moon: And here is a picture of when he was two *turns to José with a pokeball in hand* I'm not scared of that thing. Besides, you should know how much Blueberry and Cream love to dance.
Celebi: Can I see one of those?
Serena: *turning red with laughter*
José: *growls*
Moon: Sure! *hands Celebi some pictures* And José, would you like to become a target for Blueberry and Cupcake to use to practice their ice attacks?
Nathan: I've never seen her act so evil
Garnet: *shrugs* She's Blue's sister, what did you expect?
Celebi: *laughs*
José: I've seen her act exactly like Blue once
Moon: *laughs* and here is José with his teddy bear, that thing went with him everywhere but the bathtub, although he has tried. He still has that bear too!
Nathan: O.O
Garnet: *starts laughing so hard that he starts to cry*
Topaz: *laughing so hard that she's on the floor*
Misty: *flies in on Chestnut with an unconscious Cody on Chestnut's back* What's going on and Why is Joe red?
Serena: *laughs harder*
José: Can I borrow Chestnut ?
Moon: I'm showing them José's baby pictures! Oh, and don't give him Chestnut, please
Karrie: why is Cody unconscious?
Misty: *giggles* okay, and let's just say don't steal my pokemon
Nathan: okay, any other girl who I thought was pretty harmless want to reveal that they're just the opposite?
Nick: I don't get why you're afraid of such little pokemon
Misty: That'd be my sister and Marissa
José: who are you talking about?
Nathan: okay, note taken
Nick: I'm talking about you José
Hannah: *sighs*
José: I'm not! I'm furious at my sister!
Sarah: Since we seem to be on the topic of teasing brothers, anybody want to see Nick's baby pictures?
Nick: NO!
Nathan: maybe you shouldn't have opened your big mouth about José not using his Ludicolo against Moon's Totodile and Spinda
Serena: I'd love to see them!
José: He's right
Nick: No!
Hannah: *holds Nick back* Go ahead Sarah, I've already seen them before
Topaz: aw, I wish I had a brother to tease!
Sarah: Anybody want to Nick dressed as a shepherdess?
Serena: ME!
Cronosa: Should I tease my brother?
Sarah: here it is! *shows her the picture*
Nick: *blushes* she, Soul, and Platinum forced me into it
Hannah: *laughs* I was busy with something at the time but I got to see the end results!
Cronos: I don't think that's a good idea
Karrie: should I tease Kellyn even though he's not here?
Serena: I wonder should we all tease our brothers?
Cronosa: If you think it's such a bad idea I'll do it!
Karrie: I think I have a few of Kellyn's baby pictures... *checks her pockets* yep! I even have a few prank pictures!
Hannah: I don't have any baby pictures of Silver...the two of us got separated when we were toddlers
Sakura: I don't have a brother...I've got 2 older sisters
Sarah: I'm all for it!
Serena: And i have some pictures of Drake
Nathan: this is why I'm glad I don't have siblings
Garnet: O.O I'm really glad all have is a brother and that my brother is Red
Nick: if you want, I'll loan you my sister
Drake: Serena
Serena: What? I'm just having fun ;P
Sarah: Nick, you'll regret saying that *finds two embarrassing pictures of Nick* behold! Nick wearing makeup and lil' Nick wearing a Teddiursa costume!
Hannah: aw, he makes such a cute Teddiursa!
Nick: *blushes*
Drake: T.T
Serena: *finds an embarrassing picture of Drake* and here's Drake in dressed as a Skitty
Topaz: so cute!
Moon: aw!
Umbre: even I have to admit that's cute!
Drake: *blushes*
Serena: Moon, have you stopped teasing Joe?
José: It's José
Moon: I could but it's fun to tease him. How about I give you a few pictures?
Serena: That'd be perfect!
José: No!
Moon: *hands Serena a handful of pictures* if you want more, don't be afraid to ask me or Blue!
Nathan: I miss the nice Moon...
Serena: Cute! And Cute Lover Boy misses the nice version of his girlfriend
José: *sighs*
Nathan: WHAT? *blushes* She's not my girlfriend!
Serena: then why are you blushing?
Nathan: *turns bright red* I'm not blushing!
Moon: your face is all red, do you have a fever? *goes to place her hand on his fore head to check if he has a fever*
Serena: he's sick all right, sick with the lovebug ;P
Moon: hmm...maybe there is a berry or herb that cures that
Garnet: =.=" you go work on that
Topaz: ah, brings back memories of you tackling Nathan in order to make him stay long enough for you to use a Burn Heal on him
Serena: Are you serious Moon?
Moon: If he's sick, I wanna make him get better!
José: *sighs*
Serena: I mean are you serious about "is there a herb or berry that can cure that."
Moon: Yep! I'm going to go do research on it right now!
Nathan: -_-" you don't have to, really, I'm fine
Serena: It can't be cured with medicine
Misty: can we end this chapter?
Moon: you sure? I used a Full Restore on him once and it got rid of his flu ^.^
Nathan: T.T let's end the chapter before Moon tries to use a Full Restore or some other Pokemon Medicine
Celebi: ok
Serena: You go try that Moon and congratz Nathan you have the nice Moon back
Moon: Really? *takes out a Full Restore*
Nathan: T.T I forgot that the nice Moon can be a little too nice
Ash: Nathan, could you do the review reminder?
Serena: Your fault you wanted nice Moon
José: That's my sister for ya
Nathan: TT_TT true...
Me: Nathan, review reminder
Nathan: T.T fine. Please review.