Thank you for the review almost immediately anjon! And your right, I do need to space them better, sometimes though I get carried away with them and end up with huge paragraphs! xD
THREE YEARS AGO
FINAL DAY OF THE NEVERWAR.
The Battle was going well, the Fraction Paradox had gained the advantage and were advancing on the Time Lord army, and the whole of time and space held its breath, as the battle raged a single soilder looked solemly on, it was time for the war to end, he aimed the device, a small black object, he aimed it at the sky " I win" he said smiling as he fired the device, time, space and the sky cracked open, a rift appeared, the figure jumped into it, and just like that, the War of Pythia became the War Of The Forgotten, as time itself rewrote.
PRESENT DAY.
The Zoo was full of mysterious artifacts, from all across the universe, they had actual Mondasion Sea Devils, they had flowers From Skaro, an Eternal and even a Time War Dalek, there were even rumors that they had a Time Lord Deep within the complex, sadly it was just a rumour. The subjects been trapped in a small forcefield almost impossible to escape, they were very close to the openeing day, it would make him the richest man in the galaxy... there was just one more thing he needed, something from another universe.
" is it ready?" Ashley asked walking up and down the large warehouse in a quick fashion " it is sir, almost ready" his lacky said, they had recoverd this artifact from the ruins of Gallifrey, to the best of everyones knowledge this was a device capable of actually bringing things from another universe, with a stasis field activated they could safley capture whatever it is thats going to come out and safley add it to the zoo. " come on are we going to activate this thing or not?" Ashley asked impationtly " we are ready" the assistant said " then activate!" Ashley said with glee.
The device activated, a bright blue light eminated from the device, a small wind blew around it, suddenly a fuse blew and the devive turned colour, from blue, to black " whats going on?!" Ashley yelled " I don't know its..." the assistant never got to finish his sentence as the device thre out a being and finally closed for good.
They inspected the being carfully " he looks human" Ashley said " his armour however is not" the assistant said " this is an entirely new race " then let us add him, this will make us all rich! A being from another Time!" He said, little kmowin that the device had malfunctioned, and that this being, shouldn't even exsist anymore...