Thanks for liking the first chapter of story this much..I m really excited for this story.I am hoping same support and love from ur side to allow me to write it as I want to write it.
One disclaimer I wanna give is...it is possible that at some point of time you will feel that characters are not like they are shown in CID..this is going to happen..hence plz dont feel offensive as I m not runing any character just using my favourite characters as per the plot of the story.
: One more thing, this story is based on an english movie...which I watched when I was very the base is same rest the whole movie and this story is different..u can say that idea is taken from that movie but rest all is mine.
I dont remember the name of movie as I was very small hardly in 5th or 6th class and watched it on HBO...that too only once in my lifetime...but the story had touched me that time hence I m trying it on my favourite characters.
Hope u all will enjoy it.
Thanku...now Enjoy the nxt chappy :)
Raaz: Chapter 2
Boss ke bacche kal se wapas aaya hua hai phone tak nahi kia..matlab hadd hai haan
Daya: are yaar waqt hi nahi mila wapas aa kar pta nahi kab tak sota raha..thakaan bohot jyada ho gayi thi.
Chal koi nahi..ab seedha ghar chalo raat ho chuki hai.
Daya: after you sir
Abhijeet: nautanki hai tu Daya
Daya: are yaar Abhijeet badi joron ki bhook bhi lag rahi hai chalo pehle kisi restaurant mein chalte hain..pet puja baad me kaam dooja.
Abhijeet: hmm theek hai chalo
Restaurant
Yaar maine news mein dekha..ek aur murder
Abhijeet: haan Daya aur humare hath kuch nahin lag raha hai kal ek aur naya officer bhi join karne wala hai
Daya: naya officer par kyu tumari team to hai na.
Abhijeet: haan par paanch mahinon me koi result nahi nikla hai. Headquarters ko to yahi lag raha hai ki hum kaam hi nahi kar rahe hain. Islie mai Freddy aur Wo naya officer jo kal humein join karega uske sath is case par kaam kraenge.
Daya: hmmm theek hi hai shayd koi naya pehlu hi samne aa jaye.
Abhijeet: ye sab chod tu Daya. Tu ye bata teri shooting kaisi chal rahi hai. Is baar to Olympic apna na.
Daya: kahan Boss... abi to competition door hai par is baar khaasi practice kari hai maine alg alg jagh jaakr. Aur to aur bacchon ko sikhate hue jab wo sawal poochte hain na to mujhe bhi ek nishana lagane ke aur kitne pehlu ho sakte hain wo samajh me aate hain. Kis kaam ko aur kaise kia ja sakta hai ye jab koi sawal poochta hai to aur acchi tarah samajh mein aata hai.
Abhijeet in smile: ho bhi kyun na..humare department ke best shooting coach ho tum. Par agar tum CID join karte to jyada khush hota mai.
Daya: kuch sapne sapne hi reh jate hain Abhijeet..(meaningfully) tumse behtar kaun janta hai ye baat.
Abhijeet look at him in silence..chal chod baat kahan se kahan jaa rahi hai. Ab khana peena ho gaya ho to ghar prasthan karein.
Daya: ek desert ho jaye..what say?
Abhijeet: loot le mujhe
Daya: as u say Boss..
Abhijeet glared him hard and Daya started laughing loudly.
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Next Morning:
Daya tum ready hue ya nahin.
Daya: haan Boss mai ek dum ready hoon
Abhijeet shouted: Dayaaa
Daya turned..kya hua Boss
Abhijeet hold his hand and took him to the washroom..
Daya was shocked..
in Fear: Yee..ye kya..main..mujhe pata hi nahin chala
Abhijeet: kuch nahi hua Daya..aur waise bhi thand ke din hain. Ye mausam kahan suit karta hai tumhe (in smile) bachpan se hi.
Daya too nodded his head in yes still was tensed.
Abhijeet: tum aisa karo dawai le lo phir jao hmmm.
Daya again nod his head in yes and clear his face with the help of water and wipes.
Abhijeet came out from washroom and attach his back on a wall in order to calm down his breathe.
Kaise..kaise tumhe sach bataun Daya..tujhe kaise keh doon ki ye problem shayad ek din tujhe mujhse cheen...(he closed his eyes) nahi mai mai ye hone nahin dunga..mai aaj hi Doctor se baat karta hoon. Tu..tu mujhe chod k nahi ja sakta hai Daya.
Kya apne aap se baatein kar rahe ho Abhi..chalo na
Abhijeet wipe his tears and came out in smile: chal..(placing hand on his shoulder) ab theek lag raha hai na
Daya nodded: hmm behtar
Abhijeet: good
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CID Bureau
Freddy coming to Abhijeet: sir wo jo naya officer aane waala tha abi tak aaya nahin. Na jaane kaun hai kaisa hai aur pata nahin uske aane se kuch faida hoga bhi ya nahin.
Abhijeet: ab ye to uske aane ke baad hi pata chalega.
A gentleman wearing formals, tall in height and having good height and built entered
Abhijeet looked at him and exclaimed in shock: TUM
Person smiled and hugged Abhijeet formally with kaisa laga surprise.
Abhijeet: are tu btata to
Acp sir coming out from his cabin as they separated: Abhijeet tum jante ho ise.
Abhijeet: haan ye wo
Senior Inspector Aditya Rajput, Intelligence Bureau, New Delhi (in smile) Now Mumbai.
Abhijeet: sir ye mere dost hain. Hum ek sath Police Training camp me the.
Aditya nodded in smile.
Acp sir: welcome Aditya..chalo accha hai tum Abhijeet ko jante ho ab tum dono k lie sath kam karne me koi problem nahi rahegi Hmm.
Aditya in professional tone: SIRR
Acp sir: Abhijeet inhe
Abhijeet nodded in understanding
Chalo Aditya mai tumhe case files dikhata hoon.
Aditya followed him along with Freddy.
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Hmm...to oopar se dekhne se ye lag raha hai ki humare hath me kuch nahin hai.
Abhijeet: ye sacchai hai..wakai humare hath me kuch nahin hai.
Aditya: no..nahi Abhijeet..tum ye jagah dekh rahe ho jahan murders hue jagah aise hi nahi chun lin gayin hain gunah karne ke lie. In sab places ko bohot soch samjh kar chuna gaya hai aur sabse badi baat apne prey ko is jagah tak le jaaya gaya hai.
Abhijeet: haan pr kaise..humne har raste ko check kia hai. Local taxi wale auto rickshaws sabse poochtaach ki par kuch hath nahin aaya.
Aditya: CCTV footage in sab raston par kahin to koi Toll koi booth hoga humein.
Abhijeet: kahin kuch nahin jagahon par ye khoon hue hain ya to wahan ka camera kharab hai ya fir us raste par koi toll hai hi nahin.
Aditya thinking hard: interesting matlab ye..ye aadmi jo itni bedardi se ye khoon kar raha hai uska dimag bilkul thikaane par hai aur yahi nahin uski pohnch bhi kaafi oopar tak hai jiski madad se wo jahan khoon karne wala hai wahan ka camera tak kharab karwa sakta hai...(sarcastic smile) wow..tumhe ajieeb nahin lagta.
Abhijeet: isme ajeeb kya hai
Aditya: tumhe aisa nahi lagta ki ye aadmi akele kaam nahi kar raha hai. Koi na koi is aadmi ki jaroor madad kar raha hai.
Abhijeet: haan par kaun us ek aadmi ke baare mein kaise pata lagayenge hum.
Freddy: sir pata laga lenge pehle bhi to aise kayi logon k bare mein pata lagaya hai humne.
Abhijeet angrily: Freddy 5 mahinon se hum pata hi laga rahe hain khali nahin baithe tak aaya hai kuch haath.
Aditya in stiff tone: tum itna negative kyu soch rahe ho...jitna maine Senior Inspector Abhijeet ke bare mein suna hai aur jana hai wo kabi haar nahi manta.
Abhijeet: mai haar nahin maan raha hoon par yun andheron me teer chalane se hume mujrim mil nahin jayega.
Aditya: theek keh rahe ho tum..hume ek ek jagah fir se check karni hogi.
Abhijeet nodded his head in yes and says: theek hai tum dekh lo mai tab tak ek case ki report sir ko dekar aata urgent hai..okay excuse me.
Aditya: yaa sure
Aditya to Freddy: ye tumhare Abhijeet sir aise kyu react kar rahe hain jaise wo is case par kaam hi nahin karna chahte.
Freddy defending Abhijeet: agar paanch mahinon me paanch hazaar baar aapse ek hi sawal poocha jaye ki progress kya hai aur aap abi bhi zero par hon to apka kaisa reaction hoga.
Aditya become embarassed:are Freddy aap to bura maan gaye.
Freddy : baat bura maan ne ki nahin hai sir. Baat sirf itni hai ki aapko kisi par ungli uthane se pehle khud ko uski jagah rakh kar dekh lena chiye. Aur jahan tak baat Abhijeet sir ki hai unhone aaj tak koi kaam adhoora nahin choda hai. Aap dekh lijiye aapko kya plan karna hai bula lijiyega mujhe fir..mujhe bhi kaam hai. And he left the place with straight face.
Aditya: Baap re..Abhijeet babu ki kya fan following hai yahan. Aur ho bhi kyun na Department ka A1 officer hai..maine bhi pehle hi din naraz kar dia leave it...dost hai mera mana loonga filhaal is case par dhyan dete hain. Ab aur khoon nahin hone chiye.
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Abhijeet: Hello Doctor...jee maine apko apne bhai ki reports dikhayin thin na. Aaj bhi subah achanak use nose bleeding ho rahi thi. Ye problem to badhti ja rahi hai Doctor please aap...
Doctor said something from other side and Abhijeet fumed in anger: aapse nahi ho sakta hai to mana kar dijiye mujhe apli fizool salah nahi chiye..he cut the phone and throw it on his desk hardly.
Kya baat hai Abhijeet kuch pareshan...
Abhijeet: haan to kuch lead samajh me aayi tumhe
Aditya felt embarassed with this cold attitude of his pal but he ignored and replied in professional tone: haan humein pehle crime scene par jana hai.
Abhijeet: theek hai chalo..(moving with) Freddy aa jao.
Aditya kept looking at his back and murmured: tum bohot badak gaye ho Abhijeet.
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will meet u all in MSB and AK.