Yay! Time for an update! But first, answers to the reviewers who bothered
to read, and even review my stupid piece of writing (aren't I so nice to
myself?)
Katt: Thanks, And I guess I am updating, hehheh.
StrawberrySlushi: Cute name, doesn't match what you wrote to me, kinda, though I must say I was rather. freaked out and surprised. Yay! I got a death threat type thing from someone because they wanted for me to update! Thanks, it means a lot to me! And now you don't have to come up with something to do to me since I'm updating now!
Sara-Kitten: Hehheh, you'll see,.sooner or later, thanks for reviewing!
Ookami no Kokoro: Yes, I'm glad someone out there thinks the same as I do. I am honored that you actually consider my, for lack of a better word, crappy fic. (Not that you have bad tastes or anything)
Hobie: Thanks, I tried to use you advice in this chapter. (yea, I know, I stink at English)
Blaze Coyotlhart: Yay! You said you loved, so here's the next chapter! And I'm sorry that your friends are mean to you too.
SW: Thanks! I didn't really think this would turn out to be a good fic, but apparently people like it, so thanks for the compliment and review! But hey, if Marron ended at your house, what would the other fangirls do? You'd probably have to make a fortress of your house from all the mobs of fangirls!
SilverKnight7: Okay, here's the next chapter! And he's my favorite character too! But, sorry, I don't really think there will be pairings except for the implied ones.
Wee. Thanks reviewers, I never thought I would get this many reviews, though seriously people, I remind you that this is angst, so you Marron lovers might not like the ending, but please don't kill me!
Disclaimers: Yea, yea, I don't own SH, If I did, I really wouldn't be here right now.
On to the fic!
Unwanted Chapter 2:
4 months later.( don't be impatient, you'll find out what happened in the fight later).
Marron walked silently along the dirt pathway towards the Misu sister's house. He assumed that everyone was there since he couldn't find anybody anywhere else.
He knocked on the door loudly, but not too loud. No answer. He knocked again a little louder. It was a few moments before the door opened and Tira, the younger Misu sister, could be seen. "Oh! Marron-chan!" "May I come in please?""Um, sure!" The red eyed girl was a bit nervous as she said this. She stepped aside, let him come in and yelled, "minna-san!* Marron- chan's here!"
Once they walked into the living room, he understood why Tira sounded nervous, they were having a teaparty and probably didn't even try to find him to invite him to it "not that they could've" thought Marron bitterly. "Oi! Marron! What're you doing here? Is the Library closed?" his brother joked. Everyone chuckled a bit at this until it was replaced by a bunch of women's gasps. "Eh!" "Marron!" "What a nice necklace!" "Eh, kirei desu*!" (let's just say that Tira was too nervous to notice at first). All the girls surrounded Marron to get a good look at the necklace.
"Hmph, so Marron got a piece of jewelry, so what? Geez girls!" The spiky haired boy said. And so it was, upon boy's neck and collarbone (over his shirt of course) was a simple, yet elegant necklace. It had a normal gold chain, the red jewel in the center caught the eyes of a person though. It was intricately connected to the rest of the necklace and surrounding it were other precious stones. The necklace seemed to glow.
"Marron! Can I try it on?" Chocolat asked excitedly. "Eto*, gomen nasai*, but I can't let you." Marron, who had been avoiding close contact with anyone else, stepped back a bit from the disappointed girls. Daughter was pouting and the Misu sister's looked upset. Marron was about to say something along the lines of an apology to them , when,.."Hmph! How rude" the younger Mocha said out loud. "Nani?..."the raven haired one asked, surprised. "You come barging in here, with your pretty necklace, interrupt the middle of our tea party, and won't even let us get a close look at it! Geez! Why did you even bother coming here in the first place then?!" "I.excuse me" and with that young glace walked out of the house silently, closing the door with a soft click. "Oi, Éclair, that was a bit mean and rude, you should apologize." her brother said. "Hmph! It's his fault, I'm not going to apologize." And she left it at that. There was tension in the air as the party continued, but soon dissipated and soon everyone was chatting happily again, forgetting the encounter with Marron.
Those words from the young woman stung at Marron. He bit his lip as he walked on, trying to prevent himself from breaking down. "Why did she have to say that?" he paused as he wiped a few tears that fell from his eyes. "It's not her fault, or any of them. They don't know." He decided to take a visit to the library after all.
To be continued.
That's all for now, I'm too lazy to type more, but if you do want more (cuz I know that this chapter sucked and that everyone was a jerk and stuff) please review and you'll find out WHAT "they don't know" sooner or later, so review!
Katt: Thanks, And I guess I am updating, hehheh.
StrawberrySlushi: Cute name, doesn't match what you wrote to me, kinda, though I must say I was rather. freaked out and surprised. Yay! I got a death threat type thing from someone because they wanted for me to update! Thanks, it means a lot to me! And now you don't have to come up with something to do to me since I'm updating now!
Sara-Kitten: Hehheh, you'll see,.sooner or later, thanks for reviewing!
Ookami no Kokoro: Yes, I'm glad someone out there thinks the same as I do. I am honored that you actually consider my, for lack of a better word, crappy fic. (Not that you have bad tastes or anything)
Hobie: Thanks, I tried to use you advice in this chapter. (yea, I know, I stink at English)
Blaze Coyotlhart: Yay! You said you loved, so here's the next chapter! And I'm sorry that your friends are mean to you too.
SW: Thanks! I didn't really think this would turn out to be a good fic, but apparently people like it, so thanks for the compliment and review! But hey, if Marron ended at your house, what would the other fangirls do? You'd probably have to make a fortress of your house from all the mobs of fangirls!
SilverKnight7: Okay, here's the next chapter! And he's my favorite character too! But, sorry, I don't really think there will be pairings except for the implied ones.
Wee. Thanks reviewers, I never thought I would get this many reviews, though seriously people, I remind you that this is angst, so you Marron lovers might not like the ending, but please don't kill me!
Disclaimers: Yea, yea, I don't own SH, If I did, I really wouldn't be here right now.
On to the fic!
Unwanted Chapter 2:
4 months later.( don't be impatient, you'll find out what happened in the fight later).
Marron walked silently along the dirt pathway towards the Misu sister's house. He assumed that everyone was there since he couldn't find anybody anywhere else.
He knocked on the door loudly, but not too loud. No answer. He knocked again a little louder. It was a few moments before the door opened and Tira, the younger Misu sister, could be seen. "Oh! Marron-chan!" "May I come in please?""Um, sure!" The red eyed girl was a bit nervous as she said this. She stepped aside, let him come in and yelled, "minna-san!* Marron- chan's here!"
Once they walked into the living room, he understood why Tira sounded nervous, they were having a teaparty and probably didn't even try to find him to invite him to it "not that they could've" thought Marron bitterly. "Oi! Marron! What're you doing here? Is the Library closed?" his brother joked. Everyone chuckled a bit at this until it was replaced by a bunch of women's gasps. "Eh!" "Marron!" "What a nice necklace!" "Eh, kirei desu*!" (let's just say that Tira was too nervous to notice at first). All the girls surrounded Marron to get a good look at the necklace.
"Hmph, so Marron got a piece of jewelry, so what? Geez girls!" The spiky haired boy said. And so it was, upon boy's neck and collarbone (over his shirt of course) was a simple, yet elegant necklace. It had a normal gold chain, the red jewel in the center caught the eyes of a person though. It was intricately connected to the rest of the necklace and surrounding it were other precious stones. The necklace seemed to glow.
"Marron! Can I try it on?" Chocolat asked excitedly. "Eto*, gomen nasai*, but I can't let you." Marron, who had been avoiding close contact with anyone else, stepped back a bit from the disappointed girls. Daughter was pouting and the Misu sister's looked upset. Marron was about to say something along the lines of an apology to them , when,.."Hmph! How rude" the younger Mocha said out loud. "Nani?..."the raven haired one asked, surprised. "You come barging in here, with your pretty necklace, interrupt the middle of our tea party, and won't even let us get a close look at it! Geez! Why did you even bother coming here in the first place then?!" "I.excuse me" and with that young glace walked out of the house silently, closing the door with a soft click. "Oi, Éclair, that was a bit mean and rude, you should apologize." her brother said. "Hmph! It's his fault, I'm not going to apologize." And she left it at that. There was tension in the air as the party continued, but soon dissipated and soon everyone was chatting happily again, forgetting the encounter with Marron.
Those words from the young woman stung at Marron. He bit his lip as he walked on, trying to prevent himself from breaking down. "Why did she have to say that?" he paused as he wiped a few tears that fell from his eyes. "It's not her fault, or any of them. They don't know." He decided to take a visit to the library after all.
To be continued.
That's all for now, I'm too lazy to type more, but if you do want more (cuz I know that this chapter sucked and that everyone was a jerk and stuff) please review and you'll find out WHAT "they don't know" sooner or later, so review!