HEY GUYS! I've noticed. This is MUCH more popular than the older story. I dunno if it is the picture, or the title, but the amount of reviews are great. I've read all of them, don't worry, and thanks for criticizing, I will try to stop with the commas. TRY. Anyways, SCREW the A.N., we all know you want da story. ;)

Y/N yawned, and woke up to the sound of children. It would take some time getting used to the LOUD noise. Y/N got a nice change of clothes and walked outside saying, " Well, I guess you can read the newspaper with me, I have no idea what to do. "

Y/N thought, " I should get a major slap in the face mentally… "

Once Y/N got the daily newspaper, he/she walked back in and threw it at the couch. Very responsible. Anyways, all six of the children looked at the front headline. It said, " Fazbear's Frights Opens In A Week! Nyx Brittains, and Co-Owner, Brandon Timingsworth, will be opening the attraction in a week. The building was done very fast, and all the props are set up, and ready to scare your socks off! Feel free to visit, to see what it's like! "

Y/N, and the kids squinted at the amount of commas and the fact the building was done so quickly.

Y/N said, " This is fishy. Don't you think we should check it out soon? "

Ben replied, " Yep. Also, we can give you answers to any of the questions you have about the history of the place, from 1987, up to now. I believe you are interested in this place, "

Y/N nodded and asked, " What is with the shoving people into suits thing? "

Mari spoke up as fast as he could, " Erm, it was my idea. As animatronics, we don't really know who is who, so when we got to control ourselves at night, we tried to find the killer, and do what he did to us. Of course, on your first night, our systems seemed to have been tampered with, and we got to see you as a real person. "

Y/N also asked, " That's interesting. I have one more question. What is the Bite Of 87? "

Cody shuddered, and said, " Um.. It was wh-when a white mess-up of a animatronic named Mangle bit a child, it was tampered with.. The adults were stupid, and blamed m-me.. The company scrapped the toy animatronics, as one side of people said that Mangle did it, and fixed up the old ones, AKA us, and decided to put me ' Out Of Order ' because most people said Foxy did it.. "

Y/N replied, " You don't have to worry about it now, you are just as interesting as the other kids. "

Cody yelled, " Yohoho, me maties! Let's have a sea shanty! "

Hannah slapped herself in the face, with her sweaty hand, and mumbled, " You're still the same old Foxy… "

Y/N got up from the couch, and said, " Guys, we should go to the Horror Attraction now. If you only were yourselves at night, then the killer should act the same as well. "

Jason said, " Aw, I don't want to get in that small car again… "

Freddy replied, " Shut up Jason, deal with it. "

Once everybody drove to the building of Fazbear's Frights, everybody immediately had a chill go up their spines. It felt like Freddy Fazbear's Pizza except a bit different. There was a blue haired girl outside looking at something. It looked like the golden rabbit.

Y/N got outside and walked over to her. He/she said, " Hello. I assume you are Nyx Brittains? "

She replied, " You're correct! I can't wait for this building to scare everybody, especially with all the rumors. "

Y/N replied, " Yep, but have you ever smelled the horrible mucus like smell inside it? "

Nyx said, " I smelled it, but it's probably from old age. "

Y/N glared at it, and it seemed like the head moved, looking straight towards him/her.

He/she said, " Well, how do you explain it to MOVE like that? I mean, it moved by itself. What if it's just as dangerous as the rumors say, about the old animatronics? "

Nyx replied, " No, it won't happen. I programmed it to do exactly what it is supposed to do. I always loved this character. It's from Fredbear's Family Diner. The new characters just didn't cut it for me, especially the 1987 ones. They just were too.. Plastic. "

Y/N just leaned on the wall, and said, " Do you think I will be able to work here, for the Night-Shift, or just come here at night? "

Nyx said, " There's already somebody working here, but yes, you can come at night. "

Y/N replied, " Well, I have to go now. My friends probably are getting hungry right now, and I owe them some food. "

Nyx said, " Well, prepare to be scared! Hahaha… "

Y/N went inside the car, saying to the kids, " Well, we're coming to the horror attraction at night. "

Freddy shouted, " What, are you crazy? THERE'S A KILLER LOOSE IN THAT ATTRACTION, HELLO? "

Ben replied, " Freddy, calm down. Y/N will probably find out more things at night, after all, he found many things at night. He/she has done this before, and it doesn't mean he/she can't do it again. "

Mari said, " Well, for once Freddy, I think Ben is right. "

Y/N said, " Well, let's just go back home. It will be okay, and let's just relax. "

They all agreed with him/her.

Well, chapter two of this story! I TRIED not to make a ton of commas. xD Also, a new character is revealed. But, I would like to shout out to my friend, Miz The British Pirate for reviewing, and criticizing! Nyx Brittains is actually based off of her character, she likes to roleplay with. Also, a little shout out to My OC's, or something like that, he's a cool guy! Anyways, also, Mr. Cook Dat Bacon, Miz The British Pirate burned the bacon. Sorry, but we have to move to Hamburgers, WITH BACON ON TOP! I BOUGHT SOME NEW BACON! Anyways, before I go, one more thing. Cook. Dat. BACON, AND HAMBURGER! It's a lot, but I know you can do it! - TimeToMine