Thanks to more first reviewer!! I would like to address a question asked, I'm sorry I didn't realize I didn't answer that in the first chapter!

so are like the Snakes like the Jets cause Slytherin is pureblood and the Jets were the non-foregeiners?

Ok great question I'm really not going that deep into the whole west side story guide line I was just using the fact that it was 2 gangs and one from each side liked each other. Also, I'm a more Slytherin fan so their going to be "good" in this one!!

Also I would like to say something. If you don't like the story don't review it and say how much I lack originality and yeah I know my punctuation isn't very good I'm sorry ok! This is my first story and I'm in 8th grade jeez! If it will make you all happy I will look over it more but please no more reviews telling me how much I suck!!

------------------Chapter 1(I'm going to try and do this in Hermione POV)----------------

"Hey it's fine Ron. I'm not hurt no cuts or bruises. Okay." I said trying to stop the fight that they seemed prone to starting every five seconds.

Ron looked me up and down like he was looking for one little cut on my arms so he can stay and start something with Blaise. Boys can be so stupid sometimes.

"Alright fine lets go." He said with a sigh. We turned to leave but not before he sent one last death glare at Blaise, even though Blaise could care less what Ron did. Ron always has a way of making things big then they are.

"You need to be more careful Hermione! You know those guys would do anything to hurt you because you're my friend." He reminded me for the thousandth time.

"Ron get off this idea that they are going to come in to my room at 1 in the morning and strangle me! They haven't done anything for five years! Why would they now?" I reasoned with him, but he gave me that look he always gives me. The one that says "you should know better then to argue with me" which kind of scares me so I shut up.

Ron and Ginny led me to the compartment that they and the rest of the gang occupied. We all greeted each other and sat down. I was starting to get a bit uncomfortable because Ron kept sending me glances that where REALLY noticeable.

"So Ginny how was your summer?" I asked in attempt to shake of the feeling Ron's glances where giving me.

"Oh boring as usual. I mainly practiced my flying and dueling, just incase you know." Ginny said winking at me when she said the last part.

"You're just like your brother, always trying to start a fight." I said more to myself but she heard me anyways.

"What is that suppose to mean!" she said.

"Nothing Ginny it's just I don't get why you guys want to fight so much. It's like you want to get beat up!" right when that last bit came out of my mouth I knew I would regret it.

"BEAT UP!! WE BEAT THEIR ASSES!" screamed Ron while everyone was staring angrily at me.

"Look I didn't mean it that way okay! I just meant it's like you guys like to fight, to get punched and kicked and I don't see it!"

"Because someone needs to show those Snakes where they belong!" Ron yelled which caused lots of screams of agreement from everyone else.

"But they don't do anything! You're the one that starts it all, they normally leave us alone!" Aw hell! I'm just not doing well today! Ron didn't say anything to me for a while; he just stared at me and breathed heavily.

Then he finally spoke and I sort of wish he would have stayed silent.

"Well if that's the way you feel then leave." He said in a very creepy calm and quite voice.

"What!" I yelled!

"You heard me! LEAVE!" This time it wasn't quite when he said that.

"……Okay………fine….bye." I said hoping they didn't notice the tears that were already forming in my eyes. I ran out as fast as I could, looking for an empty compartment on the way. When I couldn't find an empty one I figured I would just walk into the next one and ask if I could sit with them.

And I did, and right when I opened my mouth to ask I was interrupted by one of the occupants of the compartment.

"Has the lion lost her mommy?" Said no other than Draco Malfoy leader of the Snakes. When I looked up I saw I was surrounded by a sea of snakes…….

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Okay I hope you guys like it I know its still kinda short but I have finals tomorrow so I don't have a lot of time but they will get longer I promise!!

Lots of reviews please!!!