Question: What do you think of the story? The Sun, the Moon and the Meteor.

Answer: The story has an interesting plot, but it is not developed deep enough. There are lots of things unexplained, some ended with a weak cover up. The romance part of the story is not that bad. It is interesting to see Gintoki being so protective of a girl. The title of the story does not seem to have many links since the Sun, Moon and Meteor are not developed in detail. Her friendship with Tama and me seemed to fade out towards the end.

By: Katsura Kotaro

"Zura has a surprisingly healthy answer," Gintoki said. "Let us get more views and comments."

"I think we should be given more screen time. Like when the two of you went to the Dragon Forest, there could have been one chapter on Shinpachi, Sadaharu and me." Kagura said a little unhappily. "This story has too much on Gin-chan and Manju that it no longer feel like Gintama."

"Also, Gintama is about Yorozuya right? But it seems that our job requested are not zoomed in. In fact, it is like the story is focusing a lot on how Manju can draw wonderfully" Shinpachi agreed with Kagura that this fanfiction sways too much from original Gintama.

"Shinsengumi do not have much play in the story too. We are the police, yet it seems that we are always late, and not of much help." Hijikata nodded as he folded his arms.

"I think the idea of Manju being not only underage, but a baby is stupid. Using the excuse as unnatural body growth to make such a mentally mature woman a baby. It feels wrong." Sogo bought out his point.

"Otae-chan seemed to be invisible all the time!" Kondo exclaimed.

"So everyone is talking about not enough screen time," Gintoki said with boredom.

"Screen time is important Gin-san!" Shinpachi defended their point. "What is Gintama made of? It is about you and the rest being stupid, hot-temper and yet cool and righteous during serious incidents. If the story is only about you and your girlfriend, then it is not Gintama anymore." He added

"You are just jealous I have a pretty and awesome girlfriend." Gintoki gave him a proud grin.

"I am not jealous!" Shinpachi felt irritated at him fooling around.

"Mochin could have given me a boyfriend too." Kagura gave the author yet another name.

"I want Otae-chan!" Kondo's desired was ignored as they moved on to next question.

Question: What do you think of the OC, Manju.

Answer: Over-powered. Maybe because she is set as a God. She master everything so soon and fight like an extremely experienced fighter. She is playful sometimes, but I admire her resolution to uphold promises and her tricks in using loopholes to bend things her way. It is good to give her the ability to leash that Sweet Tooth, or else things will get more chaotic and annoying.

By: -

"'Sweet Tooth' spelt out who wrote this already." Shinpachi sweatdrop at how Hijikata seemed to want to remain unknown by leaving his name out but it was pretty obvious.

"Manju is soft! Her skin is so soft and smooth. Her hair smells very nice too, but she is mean." Kagura recalled the two of them taking a bath together and the times Manju hit her.

"She is only mean when you two brats made her angry." Gintoki dug his nose and said.

"It is you and Kagura-chan!" Shinpachi narrowed his eyes at Gintoki. "She is always doing her own things and you two just like to disturb her. From how I see, her tolerance level is awesome already."

"I like her truthfulness. She makes a good girlfriend too, unlike those girls who silent wish for guys to ask them for date and all." Kondo said with a smile. "She cooks good, plan excellent dates and do not create a fuss even when Yorozuya said she put on weight." He added.

"She also doesn't go around bitching when I tease her with yellow jokes, but she get really stubborn over stupid things sometimes." Gintoki agreed on the good girlfriend part, but bought out a point he does not really like about her.

"I think the development of this girl is done well. From a reserve and timid girl to a strong, brave, free and playful brat. She does have a bad habit, taking on everything by herself." Hijikata talked about the development of the character. "But the reason for her change is a little abrupt, the part where she suddenly say she is going to change after she recovered some of her memories."

"Agree of that bad habit. It is shared by Gin-san too." Shinpachi voiced. "I totally hate it when she treat us like a burden."

"Agree! That Manju. Just because she is God and super powerful, she says that we are weak." Kagura said angrily.

"It is true you guys are weaker." Gintoki sided Manju. "If you two are strong enough, we will not have to be concern about letting the two of you tag along. Despite knowing your weakness, you two are just spending every day relaxing, eating and fooling around."

"You are eating, relaxing and fooling around every day too!" Shinpachi rebutted.

"I am strong, so I am fine."

"Bull shit. You need to get stronger and not just be satisfied with current state or else Manju will be the one protecting you next time." Shinpachi rolled his eyes.

"Not hearing it from the likes of you." Gintoki decided to ignore him and move on.

Question: If you can change the story, how would you want it to be like?

Answer: Manju will be my blind date partner . She falls hopelessly in love with me, causing Otae-chan to be jealous. In the end, Otae-chan finally accepted my love and we got married. Toshi and Manju became a couple.

By: Kondo Isao

"Of all people, this question is answered by that Gorilla." Gintoki sighed.

"Let's just ignore that plot and come up with a better one."

"Oi! Don't ignore my answer." Kondo exclaimed.

"I think things will be more interesting if Manju first approaches Shinsengumi instead of Yorozuya. She then got to meet Dana through one incident and they fall in love. Yorozuya and Shinsengumi can have more joint operations. Let Hijikata-san and Dana fight over one girl. Then settle it with a duel. Hijikata-san died, Dana got together with Manju and I become the Vice-Commander." Sogo bought out his version of the story.

"We should do soul switch. I will take Manju's body and kill the Sadist." Kagura suggested

"I did not know a pig like you loves Dana so much to be her girlfriend." Sogo was totally not offended.

"Who wants to be the girlfriend of that piece of shit?" Kagura rolled her eyes.

"Who are you calling a piece of shit? You are just a piece of boogie." Gintoki returned Kagura's insult.

"What did you say perm-head? Do you want to die? Huh?!" Kagura had a tick on her head as she hissed at Gintoki. She is already really angry at that Shinsengumi First Captain and Gintoki still wants to add to her fury.

"Gin-san, Kagura-chan. We are only at the third question. Can we not fight now?" Shinpachi sighed and tried to stop this meaningless argument.

"Don't budge in glasses. Or you will break." Gintoki shot out at him.

"I am not a pair of glasses!" Shinpachi yelled at him.

"Tch If this stupid argument goes on, we will never finish it today. Oi Yorozuya, move to the next question or give me the board." Hijikata held out his hand for the clipboard.

"Move onto the next question your head. I have not even say my views." Gintoki refused, holding to the clipboard tightly.

"Your views is not that important anyway. It is something like, in the end, you and Manju have sex in the love hotel and you got her pregnant, the perfect excuse to get her not to leave right? People like you think of that kind of things." Hijikata said impatiently. "Give me the board perm-head."

"Hmp... Guys think of sex from time to time. The abnormal one is you. In the presence of pretty girls, you feel nothing. Are you even a man? O wait, you are Prince Mayo, not a man. Go back to your planet mayo." Gintoki fueled more insults. That got Hijikata pissed.

"That is right mayo. Go back to Planet Mayonnaise and melt yourself into a puddle of mayonnaise mayo. Then feed yourself to dogs mayo!" Sogo joined his sadist friend in tormenting Hijikata.

"Sogo! Do you want to die?" Hijikata's brow twitched.

"Do not torture those fluffy furballs with those yellow goo." Katsura puked when he imagined cute dogs eating Mayonnaise.

"Shut up Zura/Katsura!" Everyone yelled at him.

"You people are so mean," Katsura said with a bitter expression.

A loud "BOOM!" cause all the lights to black out and all of them screaming and yelping. "What is happening? Enemies' attack?" Hijikata asked as he used his lighter as a light source.

"Ouch! Who the hell hit me!" Kagura tried to make her way around the darkness and punched at her nearest person.

"Hey! Don't punch me!" Shinpachi shouted.

"Calm down! Stop moving around." Gintoki said loudly. "Manju. Oi!" He reached out for the girl but found out that her seat is empty. "Shit! They got Manju!"

"What?!" All of them exclaimed. They tried to move towards the door, hoping to get outside for some light first.

"Don't panic, follow my lighter," Hijikata said.

Out of the blue, the floor gave way and they all fell.