A/N: Wow. Just wow. I seriously have THE best readers! I ask for 20 AT THE MOST and get 27. I seriously didn't even think I'd get past 10, which is why this update might be a day late considering how much I get done today. But seriously. Thanks. & seriously , I just said seriously, seriously 7 times. Some stuff to say though. I know that first chapter was short but, I said it was only a PREVIEW. Another thing, I am aware of the book Beastly (I've read and seen it & love them) but, this is not supposed to be like it. Yes, Fang is vain like Kyle but, how else would you modernly make the story? Plus, I made Fang like the real Beast. In Beauty and the Beast the prince IS vain and spoiled. So no. I am not copying Beastly. I'm kind of basing it off of the Disney Beauty and the Beast, and the book Beauty and the Beast.
Fang POV:
"Hey Fang" Lissa cooed, rubbing her hands up and down my chest.
"Hey babe" I leaned down and pressed my lips to hers. The kiss intensified as my tongue slipped into her mouth. Right at that moment we heard a cough. I glanced around noticing I was in my class room.
"Ahem! You know some of us would not like to see swapping saliva with that slut" I turned to the sound of the voice to see the one and only.
….."Hello, Maximum" I snarled.
"Hello Fang" she snarled back.
Maximum Ride. My enemy. She thought she was one bad ass chick when really she was just a stuck up loser.
FLASHBACK
I glanced around the lunch room and saw her. Max. The untouchable innocent girl. Her blond brown wavy hair was swept over her shoulder falling down almost to the middle stomach. Her tight black jeans only made her butt look bigger. The low cut Vans Off The Wall shirt was slipping down revealing her full breast. If a guy got her, he would be happy for the rest of his life. I sauntered over to her, the sexiest, hottest girl in the school. I propped my elbow up on her school table and leaned over. My eyes were captivated on her chest. She quickly threw her hoodie on.
"Hey sexy. How 'bout you come over late tonight and we can have some fun" I said with a wink.
She scowled and started to walk a way, her hips swaying back and forth. Daaaammmn, that ass was delicious. I grabbed her arm and quickly pulled her to me capturing her lips on mine. I knew she liked it. Her lips started moving with mine and my arm snaked around her waist. Before I knew it her head whipped around, her lips brushing my cheek and jaw, and leaving my lips. She lifted her hand a WHAP! Her palm impacted with my face, as I felt a sting.
"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR?" I yelled.
"That was for kissing me you sexist pig!" I couldn't believe my ears. She was totally kissing me back! "You better never do that again" she screamed.
"Ha, then don't kiss me back ever again" I yelled back.
"I'd rather kiss a beast!"
END OF FLASHBACK
She had moved away at the end of that year, and I hadn't talked to her since; until today. She was the only girl who has turned me down.
"Just because you can't get a guy to kiss you doesn't mean you have to be jealous of the girls that can." I told her after her "slut" comment.
"Last time I remembered, you Fang, were one of the many guys waiting in line to get a bit of me." I can't believe she was bringing that up. I decided just to brush it off with a "You wish" and then I walked away. Who was she to think that I wanted her? I wanted her innocence. Not her as a person. I scowled at the thought of her and sat down at my seat.
The day flew by and before I knew it, it was time to go home. I walked towards my buddy Alex's locker to see him and a girl pressed up against the locker; a girl with red fiery hair to be exact. I launched forward, grabbing the back of his shirt and yanking him off Lissa.
I tackled to him to the ground and started punching his face. Over and over my face made contact with his face.
"What" punch "the" punch "HELL" punch "are" punch "you" punch "doing" punch "with" punch "my" punch "freaking" punch "girlfriend!" I yelled.
I felt a tug on my shirt and then felt arms reaching around my waist pulling me off Alex. He lay there helpless, crying. What a wuss; couldn't even stand up for himself. I was being dragged away as I yelled "YEAH! You better stay away from my girl."
Once we rounded the corner, I pushed the person who was dragging me off. I heard recognized the voice before I saw their face.
"Fang! What did I tell you about your anger issues?" Screamed the principle; my father.
"Dad, he was making out with my girlfriend!" I said, trying to justify what I did.
"Fang Lennon Smith! What did I tell you about calling me dad in a work atmosphere?"
"I'm sorry sir. It was just that I didn't want him to get a way with what he was doing." I tried again.
"That is no excuse. You are to return home immediately. Stay in your bedroom. I will contact Ellizabeth and tell her that she is not to make you any dinner. You are grounded until I say so." My father said calmly.
"But si-"
"No buts, ifs or ands about it. You will learn to control your anger!"
I silently screamed in my head and walked away. Ellizabeth or Ellie as I call her, (our cook and supposed secret lover of my dad's) would not be happy to hear I got in yet another fight; my fifth in 2 weeks. I stormed into my bedroom and turned to my wall. My fist crashed into it creating a hole in my custom painted wall. Next, I grabbed my lamp and threw it onto the floor. I grabbed my pillow and tore it open, then proceeded to throw that on the floor as well. After an hour, my anger was gone, and my bedroom was destroyed. I stomped out and crossed the hall to my other bedroom. Hey, like I said. I'm filthy rich!
I flopped onto my bed and shoved my earphones into my ears blasting "Ignorance" by Paramore. My eyes started to drift shut; within minutes I was fast asleep.
LINE BREAK-LINE BREAK-LINE BREAK-LINE BREAK-LINE BREAK-LINE
I jolted up straight, awaking instantly. I felt a tap on my shoulder. Someone was in my room. I glanced around and didn't see anything. I slowly turned and saw the intruder.
A/N: I hope that's longer for you guys! I feel an enormous amount of pressure writing this because of all the wonderful review, when I don't really feel like I'm a good writer. So, some questions.
Is this too soon for Fang to be turned into the beast?
Am I moving to fastly?
Do you not like where I'm going with this?
Do I need to fix anything?
I'm willing to change anything if it would make you readers happier.
So, because of all the amazing reviews, I'm upping the expectations a little bit.
15 more reviews-I'll update whenever (aka 42 total)
20 reviews- a week (aka 47 total)
30 reviews- 3 days (aka 57 total)
Oh, and please. Only one review per person. Don't keep signing in as anonymous and review 10 times. Ok. THANKS.
Love and Kisses :)
-Roxy
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