OK so the first chapter was crap, but this one will be better because I am not writing it at 11:30 after a long day.
Disclaimer: I obviously own nothing. Why would I be on this site if I did own it?
Chapter 1:Status is Stranded
Awaken
"Ugh...What the sword? This isn't my ship." I said to myself (Annoying little habit I had picked up) standing up.
It looked like a medical facility what with all the kolto tanks. But something was off. No security personal were coming to restrain like what usually happened when I woke up in a strange place, and there were dead guys floating in the other kolto tanks.
Trying to steady myself I walked shakily over to a door at the end of the room. Opening the door I walked out into a hallway that had a window to a room where a doctors should be standing and the another under a sign labeled 'morgue'.
Walking to the first room with the window, because I like many normal people didn't enjoy being in a room filled with dead people alone. In a far corner I found some medical supplies and as I walked over to a computer console I say my reflection.
I was wearing a black bra and black underwear complete with stripper boots?
"Okeeeeyyyy. So the doctors here are pervs, just what I needed." Once again talking out loud. I also noticed that brown hair was a matted mess. Briefly wondering how I didn't notice this I finished my short walk to the computer.
Options-
Medical bay functions ←
Medical bay logs
Medical bay security
After shifting through logs I found out that I was on a mining facility call Perogus (how off is that spelling? If you are reading this review and tell me...) and a lot of people where sent in from laser burns coming from malfunctioning mining droids. I then proceeded to the morgue to see if anyone was put in their by accident.
OK so pretty short I know. I would love reviews! Is this better then the first chapter?And also I will be adding songs to nearly every chapter. The exile is a music addict like me! :)
Next chapter will be coming soon. Maybe even today March 17
-Alice