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I stayed up all night planning were this would go along

And I promise any other fan fictions you've read mine will totally be different or some parts will be ideas from other fan fictions but with the mixture of my story but trust me you'll see little of that.

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Chapter 2: The wait could kill me literally

After Dimitri left I fell onto the cot which I've was so much trying to avoid. Why was my heart betraying my mind and why know

I should be focusing on my trial and how my life could be taken away not my messed up love life.

I tried to fall asleep but I couldn't so I tried to listen on conversations around my cell. I always heard the words

"Killer!"

"Murderer!"

"Guilty?" and

"Deserves to die!" Do I really?

Deserves to die do I really have to pay that price. After all that's happened this is how it will always be? After listening to thousands of conversations about me I gave up none believed I was innocent.

I went into lissa's head to hear the voices that still believed in me. I wanted to see how she was taking my arrest not that I already knew though her darkness has been consuming little by little.

She was with Christian and just knowing it would end up with clothes coming of just like in the past I was about to leave to give them there needed privacy when Abe and

OH GOD! Dimitri came in.

Looks like I'm not the only one who thought they were about to start something

But right now I wanted to know what my father was doing with my Ex boyfriend. What would a normal person think well I'm thinking like one.

Abe was probably getting straight with Dimitri bout our relationship not that it mattered to him anymore so what's the point of talking

"Well?" asked Christian

"It appears to be difficult I don't mean to be so hopeless princess" Abe said, what were they taking about?

"You've got to! Its rose last hope!" lissa yelled, I'm guessing this involved me

"Carful princess we can't let any of spirits darkness bleed into rose its not good for her" Dimitri steps in he seems so involved now but why does he still care about me?

"I know but I just can't help it Rose is being taken away from me again she always has to suffer why can't she just get what she deserves a peaceful life with no problems I should be the one to suffer!" both Christian and Dimitri looked stunned by her outburst I am

"Rose can make it through this she's the strongest person we know and I think she can handle being in the center of attention" Christian said trying to cheer her up

It didn't work she just became more obsessed on seeing me to prove that Christian was right. Great was she going to be disappointed.

"I think its best if you get some rest we'll talk in the morning" Abe said

"Why not now! We don't have a lot of time" lissa said, enough time for what?

The trial? When was it going to be anyway?

I felt some sort of spark then when I looked into Dimitri's eyes he saw something I think he felt it but what was it?

I kept looking in them going deeper and deeper my love for him just kept coming out under all I've hiding what's going on with me?

I felt peaceful looking in them I really do love him

"Well I think its better to talk when rose isn't watching us" he spoke as he continued to look into lissa's eyes but it wasn't lissa it was me.

I heard him whisper my name "roza"

I took a deep breath knowing I imagined it then I heard "I love you" was I reading him mind? I felt he could read mine

I was interrupted from looking at him and focused on lissa

SHIT!

"Rose? ROSE! Oh my god!" she could barely speak. "Rose please let me know your alright I can't bear not seeing you I need you with me!"

With that I left her head but not before seeing Christian's and Abe's surprised face. Finally something surprised Abe. Take that Zemy!

He probably had different reasons for holding of there conversation but still he was surprised Dimitri saw me

"Oh god this is shit" I muttered I was back in the cell

I laid back onto the cot and tried to fall asleep I was not going back into lissa's head for sometime not until I figure this out.

How could dimitri see me! Out of all the people why him and how could I hear him talking. Well one thing for sure I was not imagining it

Should I be happy I can sort of communicate with him

Definitely not! He didn't love me anymore!

All these questions stayed in my head but I didn't have time to figure it out because I got sucked into another Adrian dream. God the 10th one since me being locked up

"Adrian? Come out I know you're here!" I yelled

"Why hello little Dhampir nice to see you as you are also glad to see me"

He seemed calm hasn't spirit s darkness affected him he sure must have had tons of drinks but that wasn't the issue right not

"Hasn't lissa told you" I asked stupid of me because he would obvious become jealous but I was ok to risk it now

"No? Tell me what?" Adrian asked clearly getting curious

So lissa didn't tell him now how I was not going to get him mad

I took a deep breath "I was in lissa's head while she was talking to Christian, Abe, and Dimitri" I flinched saying his name but he stayed quiet

"Go on" he said

This certainly caught his attention, here goes nothing

I took a deep breath

"While I was in there dimitri saw me" I closed my eyes shut not wanting to see the look on his face

When I opened them I was back in my cell what happened? Did what I tell him stun him to end the dream that's never happened before but I was worried for him

I went back to sleep with no interruptions from Adrian. I decided I would go see lissa but if she was near Dimitri I would quickly leave.

If he could see him I didn't want him to think I was weak.

Sadly she was with Dimitri I was about to leave but something kept me in place and I'm glad it did because I saw the person who came into lissa's room

Adrian!

Oh god!

Dimitri and Adrian in a room is a fight ready to happen especially if it involved me but why would Dimitri still fight for me

Oh Wait!

He doesn't love me!

Why should he care I'm sure he's glad I have someone like Adrian

"Can you both calm down? Gezz! I don't even know why you two are mad"

Lissa said she clearly was as confused as me

"Lissa's right there is nothing to talk about" dimitri said

But he knew why Adrian was here he knew perfectly I was certainly staying till dimitri saw me which hasn't happened yet

"You know exactly what I mean belikov! Stop messing with rose! You have no right to talk to either lissa or rose you've done too much!" Adrian yelled

YUP spirits darkness was finally starting to affect him

"Adrian what are you talking about he hasn't done anything wrong! You need rest!" lissa yelled clearly wasn't going to let Adrian say what he wanted even if it's because of spirit.

"The hell I'm fine belikov wouldn't be in a min" he said then turned to dimitri

"Make up your mind or I'll make it for you" he said coldly

I've never heard him so angry

Was it my fault?

Dimitri clearly wasn't scared of Adrian yet but I was worried he'd get hurt

"And what will you choose" he said

Clearly challenging him he wasn't going to go down

Just the dimitri I knew and fell in love with

"I'll tell you again stay away from rose she's had enough you gave her up so stick to that decision" he said

Then stomped out of the room and slammed the door hard

"Dimitri? You know what he was talking about don't you?" lissa asked she was worried about him right now so was I

"I can't lie to you princess it was about what I saw last night" he said she could figure out with just that information

"What are you talking abo….wait! You mean you seeing rose! Is that it!" she yelled

"yes that's it I saw rose in you apparently rose told Adrian and now he thinks I'm confusing rose into thinking I love her" he said

With those words my heart broke those words he said earlier were a lie

He didn't love me

" Dimitri I'm sorry but I'm lost first you see rose which I still don't know why and you looked as if you truly love her but then you say you don't I'm also fed up with you. Do you really love rose" she said quietly

She knew perfectly this question made him feel uncomfortable but she needed it solved she couldn't stand seeing her best friends heart break every time he changed him mind

He took a deep breath and looked into her eyes all of a sudden they widened I knew why. He saw me but he didn't stop or say me name he spoke "Princess I…I do love rose I never stopped loving her" he said then I heard him whisper "now you know the truth my roza"

My heart stopped but for the opposite reason this time

He did love me! He never stopped!

Dimitri's POV

After Adrian left everything because clear I was doing damage to her my roza the person I would die for.

"Dimitri? You know what he was talking about don't you?" Vasilisa asked.

I tried not to make in obvious but I most certainly knew why she needed to know why.

I can't lie to the Princess Vasilisa

"I can't lie to you princess it was about what I saw last night" I said

I immediately remember seeing rose appear right before me.

Just seeing her eyes those wonderful brown eyes that seem to fill my world but they weren't as I remembered.

They were full of pain the pain I caused her if only she knew it hurt me more then just telling her I didn't love her made me want to die I just couldn't stand saying that to rose hurting her hurting my roza

I began to look at Vasilisa but spoke

Has she figured it out?

"What are you talking abo….wait! You mean you seeing rose! Is that it!" she yelled

She figured it out

I never thought otherwise she was passionate when It came to rose I know that feeling

"yes that's it I saw rose in you apparently rose told Adrian and now he thinks I'm confusing rose into thinking I love her" I said

Had I just say that I was still saying that didn't love rose what was wrong with me I truly felt like a cruel monster right now. I can understand why roza is now trusting Ivashkov she has no one left it was my fault

" Dimitri I'm sorry but I'm lost first you see rose which I still don't know why and you looked as if you truly love her but then you say you don't I'm also fed up with you. Do you really love rose" she said quietly

This question of coarse made me think more then I was supposed to I would instantly scream I LOVE ROSE! But with all was saying would it help me saying that

Vasilisa looked at me she wanted to know I wanted to know to everything could change instantly if I gave her the right answer

I looked into her eyes trying to find the courage to get of me but what I saw inspired me more

ROZA

She was right there and I felt that tug I had experienced earlier that feeling of us belong together there was no question she knew she just knew me so well, why would I ever leave her. I know what I have to say for my roza she deserves the truth

I heard her say something only a whisper but I heard it and it made me feel complete

"Tell me comrade I want to stop suffering and be in your arms" my roza she would forgive me

"Princess I…" I couldn't continue all I wanted to do is look into roses eyes the eyes of the person I would die for.

That's why I continued I continued for the both of us "I do love rose I never stopped loving her" I said it

I finally said what my hearts being wanting to say.

Rose deserves this and a hell more I'll make sure to give it to her then I heard her whisper

"Is this a lie, tell me now!" I smiled

She was the same rose I loved her so much so I spoke to her

"Rose please believe me when I say I do love you" her mouth dropped open she did believe me

"Now you know the truth my roza" I said I would kiss her if I could I knew she wanted to.

I felt her heart stop beating for some seconds

I was worried at first but I didn't need to she spoke and her words made me feel like I could live with her without ever worrying about anything else

"I love you comrade I finally have a reason to fight"

So I spoke to her trying to comfort her more "you always had a reason forgive me roza"

With that she left

and I was left with Vasilisa I smiled I had her back I had my roza back this time I would fight to keep her alive there is no way I'm letting her go

I love her too much.

My wait was over

I finally spoke with my heart for rose

My beautiful Roza

Lissa's POV

I looked up at Dimitri he was smiling I was angry at first because I thought he was lying but then I was happy because he was talking to rose she was in here.

I didn't say anything because they needed to talk they loved each other they just are too stubborn to admit it completely they were perfect for each other. They were completely different people when there apart but when there together there true colors come out

I'm glad they found each other.

Rose needs someone in her life especially now

I really wanted to talk to rose but I would have to wait

And I felt hopeful everything would turn out ok.

Rose can finally be happy I wasn't going to feel guilty anymore I just felt bad for Adrian.

Trouble starts soon get ready you two.

What did you think I read it and I think it turned out really good I wasn't planning on making it this long or having dimitri and lissa's point of view it just felt right when I finished rose's side

I'm kind of surprised how they made up but they have.

And don't blame me about my grammar I was never good at it that's why I don't write as fast. It took me almost all of Saturday to type this up

So I hope your happy please comment I need inspiration and to know I don't suck so just comment plz.

Well one chapter down plenty to come so don't rush me!

Love you all!

~Mari

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Oh I forgot because I love you guys so much I've decided to do a short Adrian point of view haven't seen that so here you go

Adrian's POV

Rose's response was totally something I couldn't expect

Belikov saw her!

What game was that jack ass playing well I'm going to end right now no way he's going to be messing up my little Dhampir.

He gave her up I wouldn't

After I ended the dream with rose I walked to lissa's room betting everything that he was with her

God can't he just stay away from both of them.

"Lissa? Its Adrian can I come in" no response

I'm coming in!

There they were lissa and Dimitri sitting on the couch acting to peaceful seeing he was so calm just made me Angier!

I knew spirit was to blame but right now I'm glad I had it to back me up

"What the fuck is your game belikov!" I yelled

They both looked confused

"Adrian what's wrong?" lissa said

Sweet sweet lissa I always liked her for being so calm but now I didn't need it

"Stay out of this lissa! This fight is for me and the jack ass sitting down" I continued to go over bored

Damn that belikov I'm going to finish you!

"What seems to be the problem Adrian? Lost something? Your mind maybe?" He said calmly the fuck with you!

'you should talk you've done nothing to help rose!" I knew that wasn't totally true but I've done more and rose doesn't see it!

"Is this what's it's about Adrian your jealous Dimitri's helping?" she said

No lissa it isn't now stay out of this!

"No lissa it's not its not that it's about belikov playing with rose's emotions!" I yelled I wasn't going to let him mess me up anymore this is for rose!

"You're crazy Ivashkov! Seriously what do I have to gain from messing rose up I'm trying to help her!" he said

Belikov finally seemed to be getting it together good makes it better when I beat the shit out of him

"Can you both calm down? Gezz! I don't even know why you two are mad" lissa was going as nuts as me now

Well maybe I went too far and you knew perfectly why I'm mad lissa don't try to calm me down!

"Lissa's right there is nothing to talk about" Dimitri said

You're such a jerk to rose! Why does she even love you!

You do something terrible to someone and your way of fixing it is forgetting it ever happened!

"You know exactly what I mean belikov! Stop messing with rose! You have no right to talk to either lissa or rose you've done too much!" I continued to yell he's done way too much I want to be rose's hero to end your stupid mistakes and I'll do it

I got make rose happy!

"Adrian what are you talking about he hasn't done anything wrong! You need rest!" lissa yelled

You truly are getting on my nerve lissa you know exactly what's he's done you just don't want to hurt him he's not delicate. He can stand up for himself or has it all been a lie is he really weak?

"The hell I'm fine belikov wouldn't be in a min" I yelled, I'm going to prove to rose everything you've hid from her! You're as good as dead!

Belikov still didn't look threatened he clearly was trying to provoke me

"And what will you choose" he said

"I'll tell you again stay away from rose she's had enough you gave her up so stick to that decision" you've been warned !

Cross my path again belikov I'll make sure you never see the light of day again.

I left its better for him to realize it before I go crazy.

Lets see it teaches him a lesson you need it

I continued down the hall to the prison area to see rose and to tell

Belikov would never bother us again, that she was free to love me and that she'd be safe from him and anybody else

I loved her she meant the world to me without her my world come crumbling down.

Rose could finally love me!

Hope this gives you clues on what I'm planning for the next chapter if it doesn't well then stay tune to find put

Please comment and tell me if I did well on Adrian's loco scene.

~Mari

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