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Chapters 2 Surprise and Downfall (Part 2)
Turning Point
The flames of the sphere raging on and echo of elemental heartless warriors clashing into each other.The light energy burst out of the sphere and creating a heat wave spiral of light shooting into the sky,the city was covered in smoke some of the heartless was seriously hurt and living some died because of the might impact between the two friends of light and flames.Xemnas watching the fight and said to himself,"I want you to kill Roxas,Axel I will reward you with great power."The two warriors yells and the falls to the ground like a crashing meteor impact the earth and there bodies covered in smoke and fear they both was out of breathe and didn't give up.Axel yells and raging flames surround him and Roxas yells and light surround him teleport inside the sphere swiftly moves his body upward and slashes Roxas in the arm and cuts Axel legs, blood came pouring out and Roxas struggle to hit Axel and he kick him side of his jaw drops down leaving the hole into smoke and Axel lands and falls on the ground cough and knowing that he used so much energy,rage in his energy to keep him going.
Roxas crawl out of the hole brutal beaten by Axel and cough up saliva pulls up his keyblade and said to himself,"Come on come on give me strength"Stands up perfectly and walks over to Axel though the smoke and he was gone he gasp and swiftly blocks his attack there energy fix together into a min supernova pushes them back.Saix sense the two warriors beating each other and puts his clothes of and runs towards the fight and Xemnas watches him and smirks and vanishes in front of Saix and told him "Why you wish to help you know you don't need no help now die" He pulls out a crimson lightsaber and points it at Saix."What the hell did you do to Axel!!" Saix screams out with rage and Xemnas replies "I made Axel my little puppet that why he didn't show any sigh during the card game or some special discuss." Saix gasp and said "What the hell,you using Axel to get rid of Roxas I know your using him but why Axel."Xemnas shakes his head and said "Because I want to kill all of you and take kingdom hearts" Saix laughs and said to counter his reply "Well our surprise was to attack you head on get ready to face the wrath of a beast."
Roxas slides across the rooftop and stands strong and Axel tired to grab him and moves at light of speed and kicks Axel in his back and falls down faceplant.The ground was heating up and lava burst out of the ground and Axel weapon shots out large fire ball targeting Roxas, jumps into the air and threw his keyblade at him and runs towards him and grabs the second and fires a light beam at him and said "Axel now I know your being used against Xemnas."Axel eyes was covered in rage"Lier" He's smirks and Roxas runs at him and speed of light slashing Axel every part of his body and throws him in the air and dashes next to him,swiftly moves his keyblades strikes him until he couldn't take anymore and downwards slashes him down and crashing down like a bright meteor hitting the ground with a large shockwave. The speed of the impact ended Axel but he was still breathing and keyblades falls down and crashes down awhile.He struggles to stand up and looks at his Best Friend Axel and stands up as while and shakes his partner hand and started to know a feeling in his mind.
Roxas ans Axel finishes the fight and Axel realize something "I w...as use...d w...hy." He said sorrow and drops to the ground.Roxas smiles and he finally realize it and drops to the floor fainted the battle was over the flaming barrier broke and all of the members stand next to Saix thousands of heartless appeared next to Xemnas and charges at the members and they said together "United we stand strong."They rushed in and fought the heartless and Marluix was the only one watching the fools fall into his trap and he was working with Xemnas the whole time. They defeated them and flowers falls from the sky appears next to Xemnas there was Marluix crosses his arms and laughs "You stupid fool never learn do you I was working with the boss the whole time and now Roxas is almost died and Axel.Look my plan was sample to trick you and put your ideas in the hat I put my own idea in the hat and I blame it on Saix I red the wrong thing".Saix repeated quickly"you trick me" and Marluix said "Yes Hmph" Vexen said "That bastard and Xemnas idea was to kill Axel and Roxas."Saix grew anger and grounds cracks and roars out and said in fear and rage,"Xemnas your fucking mine!"
To Be Concluded!
Next Chapter! the members know about the secret plan Grateful Assassin and Boss made up and now
Roxas and Axel are beaten to death by each other now the beast is out of his cage the war begins between
(Organization 10 V.S Grateful Assassin And Supreme)
End and the Beginning