This won't effect the story, but I'm changing Amak's name to Togo(in honor of one of the dogs in the actual serum run). I'm also going to leave Boris and the bears out of this. Boris kind of like the parental figure to Balto, but since Balto's parents are actually there, there is no need for Boris. I also plan on making the White Wolf, from that really cool scene in the first move, a different entity from Aniu.
I plan on leaving Steele out too. Mostly to make tribute to Togo's real life musher( Mr. Steppla) and Gunnar Kassen( Balto's musher) which the movie failed to do by including only one sled team, and one musher.
Time skip of 3 years.
"3 mile marker!" Balto called out to his dad. Today was the end of the All Alaskan Derbi, and Togo decided it was time to show Balto what a dog sled race looked up close. Togo couldn't help but chuckle at how eager Balto was( Balto's dream was becoming a dog sled team champion). Normally Togo travels via alley way, but since Balto travels by roof top( as to not get kicked at by humans). Togo was pretty good at traveling by roof if he needed to though, so keeping up with Balto wasn't an issue.
In a woodshop nearby was a family waiting for an order to be completed. Today was a certain girl's birthday, and as a gift the parents decided to get Rosy a sled," okay you can open your eyes now," Said Rosy's father, "ohhh!" Rosy was extremely happy and was at lost for words until, "I love these runners! I love this thresh-bow! I love this sled! Jenna you're lead dog! Mush!" Yelled an excited Rosy said, "then you'll need this," said Rosy's mother as she places a musher hat on Rosy's head, "A real musher's hat!" She said as she and Jenna flew out the door, "the sled is wonderful!" Said Rosy's mother as Rosy ran in and hugged her, "Thank you!" Said Rosy as she did, "Rosy likes the sled too," commented Rosey's father as he paid the woodshop worker, "so I've gathered!" Said the worker through a chuckle, "Watch this!" Rosy yelled to her parents, "I dunno honey, maybe we should get her another doll house," said the husband as his daughter sleds off, "I think she'll learn to like it," replied the mother.
Once Balto and Togo made it to an alley way where they can see rhe finish safely they sat and waited for the team until something caught Balto's eye, a rust and cream colored, female husky. To some she seemed like another husky, but Balto knew her since he was a pup, and now he thinks she's the most beautiful sight in the world. Togo noticed Balto staring, and chuckled, Togo caught signr of Jenna's human Rosy. Togo had came to like Rosy as she was the only human in town to actually be nice to Balto, Rosy took off the sled rope off of Jenna, then started to cheer for one of the sled teams. A small gusts of wind knocked the hat out of her hand, and right in the incoming team's path. Once the team passed by Balto leapt into action, ran past the sled team, "It's that stray dog!" Yelled one from the crowed yelled, "he's going to ruin the race!" Another yelled. Balto managed to jump infront of the team, grab Rosy's hat, and jump out of the way.
Togo was impressed by his son's speed, then he came over to Balto to try and get him, "Balto what a crazy thing to do! All to show off to a pretty girl!" Said Rosy in a joking manner, "I bet Jenna would love to have you on our team!" She said as she was harnessing Balto to the sled, "Rosy! Get away from him!" Rosy's father yelled while kicking Balto away, "dad!" Rosy conplained, "me might bite ya honey, he's part wolf!" Balto's body physically cringed at what the man said.
Togo and Balto back at the boat, Balto's spirits were crushed, so both Aniu and Togo tried to chear him up, "come now Balto, there some is something we must show you,".
A cliff hanger... the most evil thing a story teller can do, so I did it. I woke up at like 5 AM and spent all the way until 8:30 writing this, so this cliff hanger's here simply so I can get a little break. I decided to release a chapter a day after the first simply to get it started. From now on I will try and spend at least a week, or at most 2 weeks to try and polish it, make the diologue better, and then make the plot way more interesting.
Until next chapter...
Cya!