Before we begin, I just want to thank BattleUnit3 for helping me get ideas for this chapter to complete or make a certain event.

Battle, if you're reading this, I just want to thank you for giving me ideas that you listed, I choose the last one that you listed but it may be a bit different and I am sorry if it upsets you but I give credit to your idea for this chapter and it's very much appreciated, so thank you

But enough is said let's get on with the story.

(eleven years later…present day)

March 17th on a Friday afternoon, 3:53 pm, we see the loud house residence front view of the parking lot where a blue van that just drove in, this particular van is known to the whole loud family as it was called vanzilla. Well oddly enough to say that the van is very old since it was passed to Lynn Sr from his father, and his father before him. Anyway in the van was driven by the oldest loud siblings name Lori and in the van were also the rest of the loud siblings (except the Lynn Sr and Rita because of work they needed to attend), upon coming home from school. the side of the door of the driver and passenger seat of vanzilla, Lincoln hopped out first with satisfaction.

Lincoln:(happy)"yes!, two day weekend of reading Ace savvy com- OUUFFFF!

Lincoln was cut off by Lynn who too jumped out of the van but she lands on Lincoln's back causing him to face first on the ground and she stands on top of Lincoln's as if he's a floor mat.

Lynn Jr:(smirk) "sorry bro, but that's gonna have to wait. I need you to be my goalie so I can practice my kicks for a big game tomorrow,(threat) and no buts!"

Lincoln:(lifts his head up from the ground and moaning in pain) "...if I say yes, will you get off me!?"

And with that, Lynn gets off from lincoln's back and proceeds to walk to the front door of the house residents and proceeds to enter, and at the same time the rest of the loud sisters also proceeds to walk out of the van and stood right next to Lincoln, as he tries to stand up from the ground covered in dirt stains, and holding his back in pain. Lincoln notice his sisters standing right next to him.

Lincoln:(holding his sore back in pain while phasing his sisters) "what?"

All the loud sister look at him with worried faces

Luna:(worried) "bro, you ok?

Leni:(worried) "yeah, linky, is your back ok?

Lincoln:(shrugging off the pain) "yeah….I'm ok, it'll fade away soon-"

Lola:(relief) "good because I need you to be my butler for my tea party after you finish with Lynn's stupid practice,(threat) or I'll have to drag you by force"

Lincoln:(shocked)"what?! But i-"

Lori:(interrupts) "and do the laundry for me because I'm about to head out on a date with Bobby boo boo bear soon"

Lucy: "and help me with my poem"

Lana: "and feed hops and the other animals I have in the cage while I go play in the mud in the back yard"

Lincoln:(irritated) "Oh come on!"

Lisa: sorry, my dear brother but you must assist us with our daily activities for today, and also their more important than your silly selfish comic reading activity.

Loud sisters except for Lynn:"yeah!"

Lisa: "Plus I also require your help to be my lab rat- I mean assistant for an important experiment I need to test."

Lincoln:(mad) "ugh!, fine!"

And with that, the loud sisters proceeds to walk away from Lincoln and enters the front door of the house, to begin with, their daily activity, leaving Lincoln in the front yard upset and crossed. He had all planned out, all of his list of actions that involve comic books, games, and a new episode of his favorite cartoon show "ace savvy", but of course his sisters have plans about their activities like Lincoln. But to drag him to theirs? It's really unfair

Lincoln :(frustrated and mutters to himself) "I hardly get to do my thing,(proceeds to head to the front of the house), but dragging me to do theirs? is hardly fair! (remembers all he did for them, but they hardly do the same) …(sigh) maybe they just see me as tool than a real brother"

As hard as to admit, but his sisters hardly care for Lincoln and what he did for them, they just use him and blame him for their own use. They blame him for clogging the toilet and he gets grounded without having to explain himself. Kicked out of the house because of a silly superstition they worry most than what he has to go through. Attacked him over a pathetic quarter he found on the sofa. And how luan manipulated him to set off the pranks around the house, by calling Ronnie Anne. Seriously a 300-pound sofa dropping from the ceiling could have caused serious injuries (ex. Broken neck if hit on the head while a concussion, suffocation, broken ribs, internal damage if possible, etc), and a raccoon? It could of have rabies!

(4 hours later…..)

We see what appeared to be Lisa and Lily's room, as Lincoln proceeds to enter with an exhausted look on his face due to the fact that Lincoln was assisting all of his sister's activities…..well "activities". As walking in he sees Lisa standing right next to a weird metallic disc with wires and circuits exposed,(almost the size of a frisbee) just sitting on the table. Lincoln knew she would make an experiment on him.

Lisa:(picks up the device and notice Lincoln) "Lincoln, you're just in time for my latest invention I've worked for many weeks"

Lincoln:(annoyed) "let's just get on with this, the sooner we get this done, the sooner I'll get a chance to watch my show on time. (Looks at the device that Lisa is holding) what is that?"

Lisa: "This is my gravitational device, its purpose is to make any person's body lose the laws of gravity and simply as you all say "float in space", like the earth and its magnetic field around it that cause us to stay on the ground, if I create an energy field around the body, an energy that is opposite to our gravity whi-"

Lincoln:(annoyed) "can we just get on with this?!"

Lisa:(unpleased) "impatient and aggressive you're acting, alright all you simply have to do is place you palm of your hand on top of the device"

(Lincoln places his Hand on the device, and Lisa begins to adjust it's energy levels to a correct amount, and the machine begins to emit a blue energy bubble surrounding the device)

Lisa: "I must warn you there's an 82% chance that you will gravity or (mutters to herself) 18% chance it will shock your body with the high amount of amps. (Proceeding to press the button)

Lincoln:(shocked to hear those last sentence) " what!" (Pulled his hand from the machine)

Lisa:(moved her finger away from the button) "Lincoln, I can assure that this is safe for you-"

Lincoln:(freaked out) "no it's not! I don't care if you say it's safe, I'm not going to do this!"(walks towards the door)

Lisa: (annoyed) "I knew this would happen, so I made a preparation to fix this situation"

Lincoln:(stops and turns his head towards Lisa) "what do you-"

Lincoln was cut off by what he saw, Lisa somehow transforms her device into a ray gun but its purpose is to make a person's body float but only with one shot. Quickly aimed it a Lincoln and with a split second he ran out of the room before she could shoot, Lisa notices this and follow Lincoln. He can't just hide in his room since he doesn't have a lock on the door since it's a closet. So instead he ran towards the hallway so he could hide in the bathroom. Lincoln ran as fast as he could but was bumped by Lori who just walked out of the stairs and enters the hallway, is due to the fact that she came back from a date from Bobby. Both Lincoln and Lori fell on the ground and in pain but also hear a glass breaking sound.

Lori:(In pain and rage) "watch where you're going tw- (looks to her left to see a glass shaped like a rose, it was a gift from Bobby from the date recently. but now it's broke), (more rage) LOOK AT WHAT YOU'VE DONE, TWERP!"

Lincoln:(on the floor and crawls slowly away from Lori) "s..s-sorry b-but I- "

Lincoln was cut off by the sound of a beep behind his head and a slight of heat…..Lincoln realize it's Lisa holding the Ray to his head. No time to think, he immediately turned around Counter clockwise and slapped the Ray off her hand quickly hit Lynn and Lucy's door and the Ray broke and started to spit out little electricity.

The rest of the loud sisters come out of their rooms see what all the yelling is about.

Lisa:(shocked but angry) "LINCOLN YOU IMBECILE, WHY CAN YOU DO THE SIMPL-"

Lisa was interrupted the huge explosion that delivered a huge amount of electricity that shocked all the loud siblings in the process since they got out of their rooms to see the situation and now leaving loud screams of agonizing pain in the process, loud enough to be heard from the kitchen where Rita and Lynn Sr were there preparing dinner, but now surprised.

Rita and Lynn Sr: (concern) what was that!

They quickly ran through the dining room, then to the living and then the stairs. To their surprise they see their daughters attacking Lincoln in a brutal way. Lincoln was lying on the floor his hands covering his face while screaming and crying in pain while each sister was either kicking his sides of the chest, punching his head, face, stomach, and throat, biting, and a hard kick to Lincoln's right leg. Lynn Sr and Rita were frightened to see this and have to put a stop to this mess.

Lynn Sr:(crossed) "Alright, that's enough!"

The loud sisters stopped fighting, got up and looked down at Lincoln with rage look on their faces. Lincoln is on the ground and rolled himself into a ball in a fetal position but in pain, his right hand around his legs and left arm around his head. The loud parents are surprised to see their daughters with their clothes and hair merely burnt then turned to Lincoln but were speechless see the same thing with Lincoln but this time with bruises, black eye, a bloody nose, and crying.

Rita:(shocked) "LINCOLN, OH MY GOD (runs to Lincoln and picked him up off the ground to stand him up)

Lincoln:(crying) (looks at Rita with pain and sorrow in his face) "m-m-(hiccup)-m-mo-mo-mom-m-"

Rita;(gets down to his level and proceeds to hug him with care) "shhh, come with me to the kitchen quickly, I'll have a first aid kit ready and fix you up."

Rita breaks the hug, stands up and grabbed lincoln's hand and walk pass Lynn Sr who has a sad and worried, then headed down the stairs.

The loud sisters look at this with disgust

Lynn Sr:(looks back to the girls with anger) (shouting) "WHAT DID YOU ALL DO, EXPLAIN YOURSELF THIS INSTANT, AND DON'T LIE!

All the loud sisters quickly leaned back with fear until Lisa walk up to his father and spoke

Lisa:(worried) "you see….

(5 minutes of explanation)

Lynn Sr:(shook but angry) "YOU ALL THINK THAT GIVES YOU THE RIGHT TO ATTACK YOUR ONLY BROTHER?!

Lola:(mad) "but look what he did to my beautiful dress!" (points to her dress, all burnt and ripped)

Lynn Jr:(also mad) "and my lucky cleats!" (points to cleats that were red, but now only to see all black crispy color and a huge hole is see where her right toe is located)

Lucy:(also mad) "and my poem bo-"

Lynn Sr:(more angrier) "ENOUGH!

All the loud sisters flinch with fear

Lynn Sr:(paused for a moment and took a huge breath to calm himself)...(calm but disappointed) ok now, you're all grounded for a week, but you Lisa two weeks. so no texting, dating, no driving anywhere unless it's for school, no fashion related stuff, no music being played in the house, no puns, no funny business work, no sports related stuff, no poems, no mud playing, no beauty pageant, and no science related experiment!"

Luan:(mad) "but that's not fair dad!"

Lynn Jr:(mad) "yeah, it's all linc-"

Lynn Sr:(mad) "no, no, no, it's not his fault, and if so, did he do all this damage on purpose, did he wanted to this, and/or wanted to make you all angry"

The loud sitters said nothing for a moment, until…

Lynn Jr: but...he's a screw-up and patheti-

Lynn Sr:(shocked but mad) "excuse me?!"

Lisa walks up to his father.

Lisa: Uh, dad, I don't think I should be grounded since (pulls out a contract that was signed on April day) you signed and agreed to this contract and it says I will never-"

Lisa was interrupted by Lynn Sr, who snatched the contract from her hands and proceeds to rip it in the process.

Lynn Sr: (mad) "No, I only agreed if any EXPLOSIONS that your experiments caused will be off the hook, but instead you were almost going to SHOOT your only brother with a dangerous ray, and you were involved in this brutal attack, so the deal's off!"

Lori: 'but- '

Lynn Sr:(mad) "no "buts", to your rooms, now!"

Before they could go to their rooms, footsteps can be heard from the stairs going, and sniffing and hiccups as well. It's Lincoln, now covered in bandages, a few band-aids and an ice pack on his head. He looks at his sisters with sympathy and tearing, but his sisters look at him with an angry look. Lincoln then walks up to his sisters

Lynn Sr:(faces Lincoln with worried) "are you ok, son?"

Lincoln: (still crying but not much than before) (faces Lynn Sr) "(hiccup)...y-yes,(sniff) im f-fine (faces to the loud sisters) l-l-look….im s-s-sorry f-f-for-"

Lynn Sr:(worried) "Lincoln, you don't have to apologize, you did-"

Lynn Jr interrupted by walking up to Lincoln face to face with anger

Lynn Jr:(rage) "YEAH, DON'T BE SORRY FOR US, IT ALL YOUR FAULT THAT NOW I HAVE TO MISS MY GAME TOMORROW, BECAUSE OF YOU BEING A SCREWUP!"

Lynn lifts her right arm all the way back with a tight fist, and proceed to punch Lincoln in the face with all of her force and energy, Lincoln flew a meter back and landed on his back on the ground. Lincoln is now in the unconscious. Lynn Sr. was shocked and ran up to Lincoln with worried and fear.

Lynn Sr:(fear) "Lincoln! (grabs lincoln's head and begins to shake a little to see if he'd wake up) come on, please be ok!

Lynn Jr:(disgust) "Oh please, he'll be fi-"

Lynn Jr stopped talking when she saw what horrified her. Blood was leaking out of his left ear, left side nostril, and his mouth.

Lynn Sr:(horrified) "LINCOLN!, RITA START THE VAN, NOW!" (picks up unconscious Lincoln and runs down stairs leaving the loud sisters with horrified look)

Meanwhile, in Lincoln's mind, we see him standing in a black void. Obviously, do to the impact of that punch that knocked him out. Lincoln is standing with his eyes closed and later open. He looks around to see nothing and begins to Confuse and scared, until upon recalling what had happened…

Lincoln:(realizing) "oh…."(hung his head down and begins to cry)

8 seconds later…

A static and glitchy noise can be heard behind Lincoln, as he lifts his head up with fresh tears and looks behind with confusion, and later was shocked to see what appeared to be a huge white, glitchy, static orb. Lincoln proceeds to walk towards to the mysterious phenomenon, but later did he knew that the glitch orb begins to glow bright and formed into a tall person. Slowly it turned into a person with his eyes closed and has long black hair, lab coat, green long sleeve shirt, black pants, brown leather boots, and brown skin color (like Ronnie Anne)... we've seen this person before but not Lincoln. Lincoln was confused but scared to ask him, until…

?- …(begins to open his eyes and looks around with confusion)...whe..where am i?...wait... aren't I dead?"

Lincoln:(scared) "….uh..uh...excuse me?"

?- (looks at Lincoln with confusion) "wha...who are you….and where are we!?"

Lincoln:(still scared) "m-my name is lincoln, lincoln loud. We are in….my dream?"

?-(surprised but also smirked) "psh, not possible, I remember being in the hospital and I blacked out the last thing I heard is my heart monitor going flat line and seeing myself with white hair and- (looks at lincoln's hair)... how did you get your hair to look like that?"

Lincoln:(now less frighten since this mysterious person started to act normal) "I was born with it, my mom and dad said that I got it from my grandpa, pop pop. now let me ask you, who are you?

?- 'unsure if the white hair is ever a normal hair color, or it could be passed on to another family offspring if it was really that rare, I never see someone that young with that kind of hair', he thought. Begins to take notice how he didn't answer lincoln's question- "oh, I'm sorry, yes, my name, of course. Let me introduce myself... im Max,... Max Torres…

To be continue

I hope you enjoy this chapter and story I've written, but of course, i do not own the loud house. The next chapter will be mostly about max and Lincoln having a conversation in Lincoln's mind, and Lynn recalling the past when Lincoln is born. Also again I wanna thank BattleUnit3 for his ideas for this chapter and I give credit to him. Battle if you're reading this, I'm sorry that is a bit different because I need it to make sense for other future chapters I've been planning in the future and I hope you are not upset, but thank you for your ideas it was very appreciating, and I hope you enjoyed. :)