so dis chap is shertr ten teh lass cuz i wan 2 updat mror
im sroryr iff i spelt tings rong, im nut to good spelign yet
o and i wan to revie sme revews!
cynical britton: ik! im trin to fix m writinn, pls b patienc1
quillfang: o ur from eth forum! hi! tank u fro sayng u lov it! but idk what trol is, cna yu eexpin?
storm of silence: butt im no in frist grade! mom wud b mad if i say tho so im arfadi tats a secert
hollylame: thank u! o also, ur nt lam lik ur nem says
waterrk9: weres atocorect? i cnat find t, pls tel
guest: thank u! im gld u enjoid it
ats lal for comemts, i hop you enoy te sorty!
Chepcter tyo
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Im gona taek vvoer tis clan"", bludtlon snared, bearing he sharpie redi sh fangs"Ill become bloodstar !"
Emberpaw and snowowpaw, bloodtals bull frends start cher. Sum otre warrars stepepp u & johned en, whoting and yoling ott "bllood star bloodstar!"
Aquaqpaw foded r eras beck. Howw could he?! Bludtal was sck evil fox hart!
Teh bootiful dime deciced to do smetheng bout ti. seh gazeed nto skai n cent prya 2 strawclan. give me pwoeor to defted ths evil! She akeds
suddendy ! ter wes a noofond powowr sergin g tru er aquhert culd felt soting hapenin
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Shed wsa bare!1 srtarclan hda blesed hr twith teh pow to becum hoog bolue bare with picnk gient hert shep on her undbelly. she ruse one her hend legs, rawring ta er enemas.
Blodotallon pased, orbs wide. Eh quck llepo ff of hirock n sped to etntrance. "bluclan , ful ow me" we return much strengr leter"! He wiped roun to fce his cester befra heeehe lftk "i will cum bak fro u & res of yourur mous-bill claln!" eh snerled and lft wit huf of thudClAn.
Awpawaheart retnred two cat furm ftaer tehy left. Seh urn to fatas ded boday weyes wid "es he rel dad?' shehh welked ov to mhim, bend down to snfif him.
He was…. ded. Tigrgrstar twas assinated bye hsis ow sun. aquqauaheeart held beck le terras taht treteend to cuome o her peorple orbs. Seh bakcked way frum the bod and faced the clana.
"tundeclan!" se cald, "I fell tat ti is me dootyto bcm te lead of tis Claan. I will became Aquastar and b blesed wit lall me 9 lives!"