Hi I would like to thank Quogan-Loliver-Seddie for the advice and yes I will work harder on those things I would just like to say please keep reading and don't forget to R&R everybody!!
They were slowly leaning in and there lips were about to touch when..
"He…. He…broke up with meeee" cried a 13 year old Amber Montez
"what are you talking about Amber" Gabriella asked as she ad Troy quickly separated "Josh broke up with Amber for Jennifer Tisdale" said Kimberly as she helped me comfort Amber "OMG he doesn't know what he's missing out on sis don't worry there's plenty of guys" I said trying my best to help Amber "Hey I'm just going to go I'll call you later ok Gabs" Troy said as I got up and followed him to the door "yeah ok uhh call me around 5 so that gives me about an hour to get Amber calmed down she should be good by then see you later" "yeah ok bye" Troy said before walking down the driveway "ugh" I said as I sat down on the floor "what's up sis" Kim asked me as she came down the stairs "oh uh nothing lets go check on Amber" I said walking into the family room "oh she's better she is actually going to the teen club on main street and is staying at Mariah's house for a week" "oh ok" I said sitting down on the couch Kim and I just sat around for about 55 minutes and watched T.V. when we heard the song Teardrops on my guitar start playing He's the reason for the teardrops on my guitar…"hey Troy" I awnserd already knowing it was him by the ring tone "hey so how is she" "shes great actually she is going to a club tonight and is spending a week at her friend Maiahs' house" I replied as I got up and went to my bedroom "ok that's great" Troy said as Kim walked into my room "Hey Gabs can I ask you something" Kim asked shyly "sure hold on Troy" "ok" he said as I put the phone by my shoulder "yes Kimmy" I said looking at the 14 year old "well um I was wondering if I could uh stay at James's house for the week" "sure I don't see why not just don't be stupid" "thanks I won't" Kim said as she walked out of my room "ok I'm back" I said while laughing lightly "so you have the house to you're selfe this week" troy said hopefully "yes I do oh and that reminds me do u whant to go to the movies with me,Kim and Amber next Friday"
"sure why not what movie do you wanna see" "we didn't decide yet but we whant something sacary" "hahha ok I"ll look for some movies online but hey do you whant the whole gang you know Ryan,Kelsi,Sharpey,Chad,and Melissa to come over w ecan spend the week together" Troy said while I walked out of my room noticing the girls alredy left "yeah sure can you call them" I asked "yeah I will and Mel will be extremely happy you're atleast trying to be nice to her for Ryans' sake" "yeah that's the only reason I am actualy letting her come over is because she's Ryan's girlfrend" "ok well I'll call everyone and we'll be over around 6:30 ok" "yeah that's fine"
LATER THAT NIGHT AROUND 11:00
"Ok Gabs that was hilarious" Ryan said after watching the 40 year old vergin
"yeah it was so how about we play truth or dare now" I suggested
I heard a lot of "yeahs" or "ok's"
"ok that sounds fun hey gabs were are ur parents" Melissa asked looking at Gaby "uh um well she…" Gaby started crying extremely hard into Troys' chest and everyone except Melissa knew why
OK SO THAT WAS CHAPTER TWO AND LIKE I SAID I AM TRYING TO DO BETTER I HAVE A NEW SYSTEM THAT DOSE SPELL CHECK SO I AM TRYIGN TO SEE IF THAT WILL MAKE MY STORIES ANY BETTER SO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!! R&R