A/N: OK so, I said I would post again in a week, but it really was such a short little chapter that I figured another little chapter wouldn't be a bad thing. Besides I hope to use Friday as my posting day, so this will bring it up to date. I hope you enjoy this chapter, even though it is so short.
The consequences
Tris
Chapter 2
There are the muffled sounds of footsteps beating against the stone floor. The far off sounds of yelling and shouts. What they say or mean I don't know and I can't say I really care at that point. All I know is pain and darkness, that thin line where consciousness is to be touched but not grasped but the complete darkness of death and relief will not come. I feel things going on around me, but nothing distinct until I feel someone push my shoulder to lay me on my back. I groan in pain and exhaustion. There is a loud shout and a flurry of activity. I feel as someone moves me more and the prick of a needle at my neck and it is the darkness that wins the battle again.
A/N: ok, ok, that was kind of mean, just a whiff and a teaser of what is going on. But I promise you the next chapter is much longer. Chapter three: A brother's bravery, is well over 2500 words before any added notes. I have debated for a while about which of the chapters to put as chapter two, but as the story developed it became clear that since we will not be hearing from Tris again for a while that her chapters had to be first.
I hope that you are all enjoying this most recent of fan fictions that I have written and will leave a lovely review down below. To see all the lovely hits is nice, but a review really makes my day. I am not sure how long this story will be yet, but so far it is looking to be a ten plus chapter fic as it has been developing along. So hope you all enjoy what I have written so far and let me know. Live, Laugh, Love. ~Dragons Quill