Author's notes: Sorry I posted the last chapter and the story wasn't with
it (, I don't know what happened????????? The computer must of stuffed up
so here is the chapter WITH the story!
In this chapter we have some cars, which are racing cars, they are highly detailed so if you want to know what they look like in real life just e- mail me and I'll send you the pictures. You should really cause they're cool! Thank you guys again!! (
Ok, they're 17 years of age which mean they can't go clubbing, but what they mean by clubbing in this chapter is a dance disco place where no alcohol is sold and it only allows persons from 15 and up in.. I invented this to so if you're confused just buzz and I'll explain it better. Ok
Plus I would like to give back my opinion to some reviews: Ko-fan: I'm sorry if you feel I'm copying (, I do read her stories and they are the best! But I am not copying it and I never will I like to write my own! Every story is kinda like another but mine is different to hers, the story line is different. I'll read over her story again and see where you may get this idea. But thank you anyways for your review, and if you wanna tell me exactly what I have copied please e-mail me ^_- Oh and Koyoru update soon!!!!! Your story roxz!!!!!! And I ain't copying it!!
Disclaimer: This story has word lyrics, these belong to the writers of the songs and not me, I don't own beyblades or anything tied to it, but I do own the OC's and the crazy plot.
~~Harder To Breathe~~
Getting Ready
~*~ You drain me dry and make me wonder why I'm even here, This double vision I was seeing is finally gone, You want to stay but you know very well I want you gone, Not fit to fuckin' tread the ground I'm walking on ~*~
The rest of the day went by quickly, Lil got no visit from her brother at lunchtime, which upset her a little. But now she was standing by the school gates with Max and Kane waiting for her brother.
"Hey," a familiar voice called.
Lil spun around to see her brother walking up to her, closely followed by two guys.
"Who's this?" Lil asked, indicating to the guys.
"Bryan and Spencer, they're coming over for games and drinks."
"Hi," Lil said looking over to the two tall older guys.
They both looked cold and tough like her brother in some ways. Bryan had messy pale purple hair, which flopped around his face, kind of hiding his matching pale purple icy eyes. Spencer was very tall, at least a head taller then Lil's brother; he had spiked blonde hair and pale icy brown eyes.
"Oh," Lil turned to Max and Kane, she had forgotten to introduce them, "Max, Kane, this is my bro Ethan."
"Yo," Ethan greeted.
Lil rolled her eyes.
"So are you free tonight?" Max asked.
"Yeah, if my bro has buds over I am."
"Cool, do you wanna go clubbing with us and the group."
"She can't," Ethan butted in.
"Yeah I would love to, can you pick me up?" Lil spoke over her brother.
"I can," Max stated, "all I need is your address."
Lil smiled and pulled out a piece of paper and a pen from her bag and scratched a messy address on it, before handing it to Max.
"See you at 6 then."
Lil nodded and turned and walked off with her brother, "see ya."
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A little while later Lil, Spencer, Ethan and Bryan were walking down the street towards Lil's house, they only lived 2 blocks away from the school, so it was a really short walk.
They finally came to an average sized house, not a mansion. It had a wooden worn down front veranda, with a red brick flat front with an oak door that lead into a long corridor, which had all the rooms coming off it.
"Mum, I invited friends over," Ethan yelled when he pushed open the door.
"Oh right, bunk in the theatre, I'll bring some drinks up soon," a female voice shouted back from somewhere in the house.
Spencer and Bryan followed Ethan down the corridor to the back of the house. After they were out of view Lil's Mum appeared in the corridor with a six-pack of cola in one hand.
She was a tall, fine featured lady in her mid 40's, she had chest nut brown hair which was tied back into a messy bun, her eyes were a muddy looking brown, but they shone with happiness. She had a yellow apron on over her jeans and plain red shirt.
"Oh hi honey, where's your friends?" her bright happy voice asked.
Lil rolled her eyes.
"I'm going clubbing with them tonight."
"That's wonderful, have fun, but remember to tell your father," she stated simply.
Lil sighed, "do I have to?"
Her Mum laughed lightly; it was a bright bubbly giggle.
"You know you have to, it's been the same all your life," with that she disappeared down the hall.
Shaking her head, Lil walked down the corridor to her room. She opened the door and quietly stepped in, her room was a pale blue with wooden floor boards, there wasn't much in there apart from a king size single bed, a desk, mirror and a wardrobe which was built into one of the walls.
Max would be there in 2 hours so Lil decided to get ready, tell her dad, have dinner then wait to be picked up.
Lil walked over to her wardrobe, she opened the doors and pulled out a brown spaghetti strap top, with 'Rox This' in shimmering rainbow letters across the front, it ended just a fraction higher then her belly button. She then took out a white denim micro mini skirt, it sat really low down on her hips and the length of the skirt was shorter then a ruler.
She laid her school clothes neatly down on her bed and quickly got changed. She rummaged through her jewellery box and pulled out a pair of silver crescent moon earrings, she also slid a blue jewelled stud into her belly button piercing.
Lil stopped and looked at herself in the mirror, she looked great, the micro mini fitted her well as she was slenderly built with long legs, the top fit snugly around her bust, also the earrings shimmered and her belly button piercing glinted in the light of her room.
She smiled; she opened the door and walked across the corridor to the bathroom where she put on a light shade of shimmering blue eye shadow and black mascara, to finish off she put on super glossy lipstick.
She brushed her hair so that the few curls that sat at the front stood out, she hurried back across the hallway, then dove back into her wardrobe once more and pulled out a pair of black platform wrap ankle shoes.
She put them on and chucked her wallet and gloss into her handbag before heading back out into the corridor once more and started to walk down to her Dad's office.
She stopped out side the theatre door, she smiled cheekily before knocking lightly.
"Yes, who is it?" her brother's voice asked.
"Hey it's me, just wanted you to approve of my outfit."
She could hear 2 sniggers and her brother snort, "alright."
Lil pushed open the door and stood in front of her brother, Spencer and Bryan were sitting on the couch next to him, when they saw her their jaws dropped.
Ethan put down the game controller and stared at her, Lil did a little twirl before he spoke.
"How much?"
"What?"
"How much?" Ethan asked again trying not to laugh. "How much do you cost?" he said sarcastically before he broke into a fit of laughter.
Lil glared at him, she grabbed the closest pillow and chucked it at his head.
"Oh sorry," he replied in a baby voice, as he placed the pillow beside him.
Spencer and Bryan were chuckling. Lil rolled her eyes.
"This is what I can expect from a brother who asks his sister for fashion tips," Lil said calmly with a cheeky smirk on her face.
Bryan nearly choked on the sip of cola he just had.
Ethan glared at her, "run along tart, I think Dad needs to know his little devil is going out to play."
Lil snorted, "is that the best come back you can come up with? How lame," she laughed as she left the room, slamming the door shut behind her.
She walked the 2 metres it took to get to her Dad's office. She knocked.
"Come in," came a stern voice from behind the door.
Lil poked her head around the door, there sitting at his desk was her Dad, he was a well toned man for his age, he had short black hair that was starting to turn grey, he had piercing crystal blue eyes like Ethan.
"Hi Dad, I'm going clubbing tonight with some friends."
"Ok," he paused, "come in."
Lil hesitated before opening the door and stepping in, straight away she could she the disapproving look in his blue eyes.
"I don't think so."
Lil rolled her eyes and just to her luck the office phone rang.
"Get changed, turtle neck," he waved dismissively as he picked up the phone.
"John, just the man I need, hows the stock market going, ah, ah ha," he placed his hand over the end of the phone, "now."
Lily shook her head as she left her Dad to his work, she knew now he would be too wrapped up to even care and she knew her Mum wouldn't give a rats arse.
Lil walked into the kitchen, her Mum was slaving over the stove cooking what would turn out be their dinner.
"What's for D Mum?"
Her Mum turned her head and smiled, "fatayer."
Lil stuck out her tongue in disgust, "not again, ew I hate that stuff."
Her Mum shook her head, "if you don't want it, then you can make bazella and rice for yourself."
Lil smiled, "that's better."
Lil moved over to pantry and put on an apron, she didn't want to get food on her clothes.
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Later Lil sat at the dinner table with her Mum.
"So you're going out with your friends tonight?"
"Yep, I should be picked up in 10 minutes," Lil replied.
Lil Mum smiled cheekily, "so who's the lucky guy?"
"Mum," Lil said annoyed, it wasn't uncommon for her mum to say things like this, "it's Max but he's just a friend."
Her Mum smiled, satisfied and placed a piece of food in her mouth.
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When Lil had finished eating and was in the kitchen helping her Mum clean up, there was a loud knock on the door.
"I'll get it," Ethan called; he was on his way to the kitchen to get more drinks anyway.
Lil heard the door open, "Leilah, Max is here."
Lil turned and hugged her Mum good bye, "I won't stay out to late."
She then ran into the corridor to find Max talking to Ethan, he turned and smiled.
"You look great."
Lil smiled, "you too."
Max was wearing a pair of baggy dark denim jeans, with a loose light brown shirt with billabong written in cream coloured writing along one side. His blonde hair flopped nicely around his face, highlighting his blue eyes.
Lil was at the door and about to leave when she heard her Dad's voice thunder down the corridor.
"Leilah Barra Manika, who is this young man I see?"
"Quickly," Lil snapped as she closed the door, she grabbed Max's hand and pulled him up to his car.
It was a metallic green, Mitsubishi Lancer Evolution, with a rear spoiler that was larger than normal, it had yellow neon lights underneath and in the wheels, Max had a personalised number plate that said 'EAT DUST'.
Lil smiled, she new her cars and this was one of her favourites.
Max opened the door for her and she slid in, 'yes leather seats.'
Max got in and turned the car on, it roared to life, "ready to go?" he said revving the engine.
Lil nodded and smiled.
Max screeched out of the driveway, she screamed with excitement at the sudden jolt, she looked out the window to see her Dad standing on the veranda yelling and shaking his fist. She laughed.
"Come on let's go."
Max smiled and sped off down the street.
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"So how did you get such an awesome car?" Lil asked, staring at the interior.
Max adjusted the rear view mirror before answering.
"My Mum works for the BBA and she had some connections, so when I was old enough to own a car she gave this baby to me for my birthday as a present, but I had to add some stuff in for my personal liking, like..."
Max leaned over and turned on the radio; suddenly the car was pumping with music.
Lil laughed, "I love this song," she leaned over and turned it up and started to sing along.
Max just laughed.
~*~ Well I'm just outta school Like I'm real real cool
Gotta dance like a fool
Get the message that
I wanna be a wild one
Ooh yeah I'm a wild one
Gotta break it loose
Gotta keep it movin' wild
Gotta keep it swingin', baby
I'm a real wild child
I'm a real wild one
And I like wild fun
In a world gone crazy
Everything seems hazy
I'm a wild one
Ooh yeah I'm a wild one
Gotta break it loose
Gotta keep it movin' wild
Gotta keep it swingin', baby
I'm a real wild child ~*~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*_*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Authors notes: ok for people who don't know what food Lil's Mum was cooking I'll tell you: Fatayer = baked pastry stuffed with spinach, cheese or meat. Bazella with rice = peas and carrots with chicken in tomato sauce.
So wadda ya think of this chappie????????? It's kinda a chapter in between the beginning and the clubbing bit!!!! It's an inbetweenie _ Well give me your idea's, pointers, in a nice review okies ^-^ if you think I should add something tell me even if I should remove something ok, well until next chapter, review!
The-Red-Pheonix
In this chapter we have some cars, which are racing cars, they are highly detailed so if you want to know what they look like in real life just e- mail me and I'll send you the pictures. You should really cause they're cool! Thank you guys again!! (
Ok, they're 17 years of age which mean they can't go clubbing, but what they mean by clubbing in this chapter is a dance disco place where no alcohol is sold and it only allows persons from 15 and up in.. I invented this to so if you're confused just buzz and I'll explain it better. Ok
Plus I would like to give back my opinion to some reviews: Ko-fan: I'm sorry if you feel I'm copying (, I do read her stories and they are the best! But I am not copying it and I never will I like to write my own! Every story is kinda like another but mine is different to hers, the story line is different. I'll read over her story again and see where you may get this idea. But thank you anyways for your review, and if you wanna tell me exactly what I have copied please e-mail me ^_- Oh and Koyoru update soon!!!!! Your story roxz!!!!!! And I ain't copying it!!
Disclaimer: This story has word lyrics, these belong to the writers of the songs and not me, I don't own beyblades or anything tied to it, but I do own the OC's and the crazy plot.
~~Harder To Breathe~~
Getting Ready
~*~ You drain me dry and make me wonder why I'm even here, This double vision I was seeing is finally gone, You want to stay but you know very well I want you gone, Not fit to fuckin' tread the ground I'm walking on ~*~
The rest of the day went by quickly, Lil got no visit from her brother at lunchtime, which upset her a little. But now she was standing by the school gates with Max and Kane waiting for her brother.
"Hey," a familiar voice called.
Lil spun around to see her brother walking up to her, closely followed by two guys.
"Who's this?" Lil asked, indicating to the guys.
"Bryan and Spencer, they're coming over for games and drinks."
"Hi," Lil said looking over to the two tall older guys.
They both looked cold and tough like her brother in some ways. Bryan had messy pale purple hair, which flopped around his face, kind of hiding his matching pale purple icy eyes. Spencer was very tall, at least a head taller then Lil's brother; he had spiked blonde hair and pale icy brown eyes.
"Oh," Lil turned to Max and Kane, she had forgotten to introduce them, "Max, Kane, this is my bro Ethan."
"Yo," Ethan greeted.
Lil rolled her eyes.
"So are you free tonight?" Max asked.
"Yeah, if my bro has buds over I am."
"Cool, do you wanna go clubbing with us and the group."
"She can't," Ethan butted in.
"Yeah I would love to, can you pick me up?" Lil spoke over her brother.
"I can," Max stated, "all I need is your address."
Lil smiled and pulled out a piece of paper and a pen from her bag and scratched a messy address on it, before handing it to Max.
"See you at 6 then."
Lil nodded and turned and walked off with her brother, "see ya."
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A little while later Lil, Spencer, Ethan and Bryan were walking down the street towards Lil's house, they only lived 2 blocks away from the school, so it was a really short walk.
They finally came to an average sized house, not a mansion. It had a wooden worn down front veranda, with a red brick flat front with an oak door that lead into a long corridor, which had all the rooms coming off it.
"Mum, I invited friends over," Ethan yelled when he pushed open the door.
"Oh right, bunk in the theatre, I'll bring some drinks up soon," a female voice shouted back from somewhere in the house.
Spencer and Bryan followed Ethan down the corridor to the back of the house. After they were out of view Lil's Mum appeared in the corridor with a six-pack of cola in one hand.
She was a tall, fine featured lady in her mid 40's, she had chest nut brown hair which was tied back into a messy bun, her eyes were a muddy looking brown, but they shone with happiness. She had a yellow apron on over her jeans and plain red shirt.
"Oh hi honey, where's your friends?" her bright happy voice asked.
Lil rolled her eyes.
"I'm going clubbing with them tonight."
"That's wonderful, have fun, but remember to tell your father," she stated simply.
Lil sighed, "do I have to?"
Her Mum laughed lightly; it was a bright bubbly giggle.
"You know you have to, it's been the same all your life," with that she disappeared down the hall.
Shaking her head, Lil walked down the corridor to her room. She opened the door and quietly stepped in, her room was a pale blue with wooden floor boards, there wasn't much in there apart from a king size single bed, a desk, mirror and a wardrobe which was built into one of the walls.
Max would be there in 2 hours so Lil decided to get ready, tell her dad, have dinner then wait to be picked up.
Lil walked over to her wardrobe, she opened the doors and pulled out a brown spaghetti strap top, with 'Rox This' in shimmering rainbow letters across the front, it ended just a fraction higher then her belly button. She then took out a white denim micro mini skirt, it sat really low down on her hips and the length of the skirt was shorter then a ruler.
She laid her school clothes neatly down on her bed and quickly got changed. She rummaged through her jewellery box and pulled out a pair of silver crescent moon earrings, she also slid a blue jewelled stud into her belly button piercing.
Lil stopped and looked at herself in the mirror, she looked great, the micro mini fitted her well as she was slenderly built with long legs, the top fit snugly around her bust, also the earrings shimmered and her belly button piercing glinted in the light of her room.
She smiled; she opened the door and walked across the corridor to the bathroom where she put on a light shade of shimmering blue eye shadow and black mascara, to finish off she put on super glossy lipstick.
She brushed her hair so that the few curls that sat at the front stood out, she hurried back across the hallway, then dove back into her wardrobe once more and pulled out a pair of black platform wrap ankle shoes.
She put them on and chucked her wallet and gloss into her handbag before heading back out into the corridor once more and started to walk down to her Dad's office.
She stopped out side the theatre door, she smiled cheekily before knocking lightly.
"Yes, who is it?" her brother's voice asked.
"Hey it's me, just wanted you to approve of my outfit."
She could hear 2 sniggers and her brother snort, "alright."
Lil pushed open the door and stood in front of her brother, Spencer and Bryan were sitting on the couch next to him, when they saw her their jaws dropped.
Ethan put down the game controller and stared at her, Lil did a little twirl before he spoke.
"How much?"
"What?"
"How much?" Ethan asked again trying not to laugh. "How much do you cost?" he said sarcastically before he broke into a fit of laughter.
Lil glared at him, she grabbed the closest pillow and chucked it at his head.
"Oh sorry," he replied in a baby voice, as he placed the pillow beside him.
Spencer and Bryan were chuckling. Lil rolled her eyes.
"This is what I can expect from a brother who asks his sister for fashion tips," Lil said calmly with a cheeky smirk on her face.
Bryan nearly choked on the sip of cola he just had.
Ethan glared at her, "run along tart, I think Dad needs to know his little devil is going out to play."
Lil snorted, "is that the best come back you can come up with? How lame," she laughed as she left the room, slamming the door shut behind her.
She walked the 2 metres it took to get to her Dad's office. She knocked.
"Come in," came a stern voice from behind the door.
Lil poked her head around the door, there sitting at his desk was her Dad, he was a well toned man for his age, he had short black hair that was starting to turn grey, he had piercing crystal blue eyes like Ethan.
"Hi Dad, I'm going clubbing tonight with some friends."
"Ok," he paused, "come in."
Lil hesitated before opening the door and stepping in, straight away she could she the disapproving look in his blue eyes.
"I don't think so."
Lil rolled her eyes and just to her luck the office phone rang.
"Get changed, turtle neck," he waved dismissively as he picked up the phone.
"John, just the man I need, hows the stock market going, ah, ah ha," he placed his hand over the end of the phone, "now."
Lily shook her head as she left her Dad to his work, she knew now he would be too wrapped up to even care and she knew her Mum wouldn't give a rats arse.
Lil walked into the kitchen, her Mum was slaving over the stove cooking what would turn out be their dinner.
"What's for D Mum?"
Her Mum turned her head and smiled, "fatayer."
Lil stuck out her tongue in disgust, "not again, ew I hate that stuff."
Her Mum shook her head, "if you don't want it, then you can make bazella and rice for yourself."
Lil smiled, "that's better."
Lil moved over to pantry and put on an apron, she didn't want to get food on her clothes.
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Later Lil sat at the dinner table with her Mum.
"So you're going out with your friends tonight?"
"Yep, I should be picked up in 10 minutes," Lil replied.
Lil Mum smiled cheekily, "so who's the lucky guy?"
"Mum," Lil said annoyed, it wasn't uncommon for her mum to say things like this, "it's Max but he's just a friend."
Her Mum smiled, satisfied and placed a piece of food in her mouth.
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When Lil had finished eating and was in the kitchen helping her Mum clean up, there was a loud knock on the door.
"I'll get it," Ethan called; he was on his way to the kitchen to get more drinks anyway.
Lil heard the door open, "Leilah, Max is here."
Lil turned and hugged her Mum good bye, "I won't stay out to late."
She then ran into the corridor to find Max talking to Ethan, he turned and smiled.
"You look great."
Lil smiled, "you too."
Max was wearing a pair of baggy dark denim jeans, with a loose light brown shirt with billabong written in cream coloured writing along one side. His blonde hair flopped nicely around his face, highlighting his blue eyes.
Lil was at the door and about to leave when she heard her Dad's voice thunder down the corridor.
"Leilah Barra Manika, who is this young man I see?"
"Quickly," Lil snapped as she closed the door, she grabbed Max's hand and pulled him up to his car.
It was a metallic green, Mitsubishi Lancer Evolution, with a rear spoiler that was larger than normal, it had yellow neon lights underneath and in the wheels, Max had a personalised number plate that said 'EAT DUST'.
Lil smiled, she new her cars and this was one of her favourites.
Max opened the door for her and she slid in, 'yes leather seats.'
Max got in and turned the car on, it roared to life, "ready to go?" he said revving the engine.
Lil nodded and smiled.
Max screeched out of the driveway, she screamed with excitement at the sudden jolt, she looked out the window to see her Dad standing on the veranda yelling and shaking his fist. She laughed.
"Come on let's go."
Max smiled and sped off down the street.
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"So how did you get such an awesome car?" Lil asked, staring at the interior.
Max adjusted the rear view mirror before answering.
"My Mum works for the BBA and she had some connections, so when I was old enough to own a car she gave this baby to me for my birthday as a present, but I had to add some stuff in for my personal liking, like..."
Max leaned over and turned on the radio; suddenly the car was pumping with music.
Lil laughed, "I love this song," she leaned over and turned it up and started to sing along.
Max just laughed.
~*~ Well I'm just outta school Like I'm real real cool
Gotta dance like a fool
Get the message that
I wanna be a wild one
Ooh yeah I'm a wild one
Gotta break it loose
Gotta keep it movin' wild
Gotta keep it swingin', baby
I'm a real wild child
I'm a real wild one
And I like wild fun
In a world gone crazy
Everything seems hazy
I'm a wild one
Ooh yeah I'm a wild one
Gotta break it loose
Gotta keep it movin' wild
Gotta keep it swingin', baby
I'm a real wild child ~*~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*_*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Authors notes: ok for people who don't know what food Lil's Mum was cooking I'll tell you: Fatayer = baked pastry stuffed with spinach, cheese or meat. Bazella with rice = peas and carrots with chicken in tomato sauce.
So wadda ya think of this chappie????????? It's kinda a chapter in between the beginning and the clubbing bit!!!! It's an inbetweenie _ Well give me your idea's, pointers, in a nice review okies ^-^ if you think I should add something tell me even if I should remove something ok, well until next chapter, review!
The-Red-Pheonix