Hello there! I don't mind flames but please explain what's wrong with it, flame names all you want, I'd rather have nice reviews though. Dunno when Chapter 1 will be out.

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Prologue

The stars swirled into place at the Moonstone as all four medicine cats padded towards it. Cinderpool, the ThunderClan medicine cat, pressed her nose into the stone. She closed her eyes, waiting for sleep to over take her. Water dripped from the roof of Mothermouth, it made Cinderpool twitch with irritation. Dewfang, the ShadowClan medicine cat, sat up. "It's useless. They've gone."

"Ssh," whispered the WindClan medicine cat, Scorchedbranch. "Cinderpool might be sleeping."

The grey medicine cat opened her eyes, she didn't see Dewfang or any other medicine cats. She was in a foggy moor, and cats were slithering up out of the ditches. Cinderpool shivered. She was the newest medicine cat, her mentor Burdockfoot, had just been killed by the large flood that flowed through all the Clan's camps a few days ago. A large black and white tom stood tall before Cinderpool. Tailstar. The last leader of ThunderClan who had also been taken by the flood, leaving his deputy, Amberheart, to step in.

"Hello, Cinderpool," he rasped.

"Hello, Tailstar," she whispered.

"I am here to reveal a prophecy to you. Shadows and Earth with combine, and lighting will seize your roots. Do not ask what it means, Eights cats will make a journey to Shadow Mountains to save your clans, our visions of your our fading, I am afraid this is our last meeting with you until the cats return."

"Do that cats know the prophecy?" Cinderpool asked anxiously.

"They do. Goodbye, Cinderpool. May your luck change for our happiness," Tailstar whispered.

He faded into the fog and Cinderpool found herself back in the cave. Scorchedbranch's apprentice, Scarpaw, was staring at her. Dewfang chuckled and gazed at Cinderpool. "Did you hear or see anything?" she asked.

"Shadow and Earth will combine, and Lighting will seize your roots."

Scarpaw stared at her. "What does it mean?"

"StarClan does not know. What they do know is that eight cats will journey to Shadow Mountains to save the Clans, who knows how?"

"What?" Scorchedbranch mewed. "To Shadow Mountains! That's the most dangerous place ever. Our last leader perished there when he was trying to hunt for food for our Clan in Leaf-bare!"

The RiverClan Medicine cat, Pollenblaze, started indefinitely.

"They are eight, Scorchedbranch, with power of StarClan guiding them, wherever they may be, they walk with them to the top of Shadow Mountains, if danger befalls them I do not know what will happen."

Scorchedbranch nodded, his eyes troubled. "What I want to know are what cats are going. They'll need travelling herbs and all that."

Dewfang stood up. "We will do our best to find the two cats from our Clans," she mewed.

Pollenblaze and Cinderpool nodded. "Best of luck, Cinderpool," Scorchedbranch said before walking out with Scarpaw.

Pollenblaze nodded at Dewfang and Cinderpool and left. "Goodbye, Dewfang," Cinderpool murmured.

Dewfang nodded and padded out, with splashing sound as she put each paw in the rising water. Cinderpool followed her out, being smaller than most the water frightened her. Suddenly some fell to the earth behind her. She looked up, icicles sparkled on the top of Mother Mouth, glinting and sharp like daggers, thought cats did not know what they were Cinderpool started at them She knew what was happening, Leaf-Bare had begun

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Chapter 1 should be out in the new three-five days. Got A LOT on my hands. Luckily I've only got one story to focus on. It might be a bit earlier if I begin it today.