In Edward's Pov and I realized how hard that can be. I spent a full day trying to make it sound like Edward and this is the best I got. So please not to hard on the flames.
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Edward Pov:
I hope Bella isn't up set I am "hunting" this long. Well I guess you could call what I am doing hunting, even though I am shopping for the perfect engagement ring. Alice and I have looked almost all day and every ring is either too fancy or too cheap. Although I think Alice is keeping something from me. Almost every time we go into a store her mind is blocked and then she will just hurry me along to the next store, without an explanation. I want the ring to be perfect, I want Bella to love it and…
Edward knock it off we will find the perfect engagement ring for Bella. Trust me I saw you give it to her and she loved it.
"Alice, if you saw me give it to her then where did we buy it?"
"Honestly Edward I have no idea where you could have gotten it." Of all the times for Alice to be unsure of herself! I am so mad about everything taking so long that I could hit something, but I made a vow that this store will be the last. We walked into the store and everything was of high price value.
"God Alice out of all of the stores I think this is the worst one!"
"Edward please just relax and give it a try." Before I can respond Alice walks up to the store manager and starts asking about their simple engagement rings.
I didn't even have the time to look around and Alice starts yelling, "Edward hurry up and pick out a ring we have less then an hour to be back at the house to get you ready!"
"Alice, first of all I want this ring to be perfect so do not tell me to hurry. And secondly why in the world do we have to hurry home to get me ready?" Alice looks like I just asked why the earth is round.
"Silly little Edward do you really want to propose to Bella in old clothes? Rosalie and I went out shopping and we got you a variety of clothes to choose from." Alice always has to go over the top with everything. Going from store to store and listening to Alice and the sales people makes me feel like I just ran all the way around the world. I put my head down on the counter hoping everything would just stop when I open my eyes there is, the perfect ring. The ring is a simple gold band with a fair sized diamond in the middle with a topaz stone on each side. The first thing that pops into my mind is to engrave the word angel on the inside of the ring.
"Alice come here I think I found the perfect ring." Before I know it I lost all of my hearing, not only that but if I where a human I probably would have been suffocated to death.
"I am guessing you agree with me?" But before she responds she goes to the manager and from what Bella calls it "dazes" him and comes back with the ring in her hand exactly how I wanted it.
"Alice you knew about everything all along!" I felt like I could explode from anger. Alice knew where the ring was all along and still made me miss seeing Bella today.
"Yes I did Edward and I did this for your own good," Alice says very smugly. Has she gone crazy what on earth would posses her to do this to me. But before I have the chance to say anything Alice pays for the ring and drags me outside and into the car.
"Alice you know I missed Bella terribly so why did you what this long it looks like you already ordered it!" I was screaming so hard that my windows started shaking.
"Edward calm down I did it because I wanted to make sure we didn't run along any wedding rings that you liked for Bella." I was so upset that I probably could have killed Alice, even if that meant dealing with Jasper. But before I could do or say anything Alice got a vision.
"Edward, we have to hurry something bad is going to happen to Bella." And that is when she first opened her mind to me and I saw the most terrible sight.
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