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Chapter 2

We took the Volvo. It was the most practical, even if it was not Edward's favourite. No longer would we all fit into the Ferrari, Porsche or the Aston Martin. Renesmee was just too big. Edward was driving, since Renesmee had been born he'd slowed his driving, slightly. Instead of the usual 100 mile an hour average he maintained, he had slowed to about 80. Today it was grey, cloudy but warm. We had decided to take our daughter out for a picnic, now that she would actually eat human food once in a while. Slowly Carlisle had managed to convince Renesmee to eat one meal of food a day, and she could have "liquid" meals for the other two.

We arrived at the park, and Edward lay down a blanket for us to sit on. The park we had chosen had amazing play area for children that Edward knew Renesmee would like. I sat on the blanket and opened up the basket, to serve Renesmee her lunch. It had shocked everyone at how naturally I had taken to becoming a mother after the event with the Voultouri after my daughter's birth. I did things subconsciously and found that I enjoyed it, much more than I ever thought I would. I cast my mind back, to Rosalie telling me why I was making the wrong decisions, and how she could never be a mother. Now, that I had this, I understood completely. I could not see a future without my daughter in it (although I was sure Alice could.)

Esme had made her grand-daughter's lunch, which my nose told me was a peanut butter and jelly sandwich. She was obviously trying to please someone, these were Renesmee's favourite food, beside blood. I put the sandwich on a plastic plate and handed it to my daughter. Edward laughed as she all but snatched the plate out of my hand. He could hear how much she wanted it. Renesmee finished her sandwich in a matter of seconds. I frowned at her; Edward looked around, presumably listening to people's thoughts to find out if they'd noticed. Renesmee reached up to touch my cheek, she showed me the park and that no-one was looking at us, they were all busy pre-occupied by themselves. Edward looked back at me and Renesmee and nodded with her assessment. Nobody had seen. I still frowned, I didn't want to risk exposure.

"Still," I said looking into those beautiful brown eyes that used to be in my reflection, "When we're out or with Grandpa Charlie, don't do anything like that, you know what will happen"

She had known to hide her special gift ever since she had first met Charlie, but she didn't like to be restrained, I knew how she felt. I was no longer, a new born but I still yearned to run as fast as I could, and not have to walk so slowly it felt I was going backwards.

"Sorry Momma," She said giving me her sweetest smile, and cutest puppy dog eyes. She only called me Momma, when she was trying to hoodwink me into buying her something or trying to get out of trouble. I melted like ice when she used the combination; I turned to Edward for support.

"Nessie," Edward said softly, "Your mother's right, you don't want to have to move away, possibly so far that you wouldn't get to see Grandpa Charlie, would you?"

She shook her head, "I'll be good Daddy, I promise," Renesmee had Edward wrapped around her little finger, she never called him Dad, always Daddy; she knew it softened him up.

After a few hours Renesmee came back running into my arms, she'd been playing on the swings. Edward sat up and looked at his daughter before assessing that nothing was wrong, as he began to lay back down he let out a small growl at the people walking past.

"What?" I asked him completely taken aback at this unprovoked action. Renesmee looked at Edward with the same curiosity. He shook his head at us both before saying to Renesmme, "Nessie, we're going to leave shortly so go and have your last go on something."

"Can't I have a go on two things Daddy?" She loudly asked as she was half way to the play park.

Edward stiffened but nodded, knowing Renesmee could see him. As soon as he entered the play park, I turned to him.

"What's up?"

"I wish people would keep their thoughts to themselves." He glowered.

"Edward, they can't. They're thoughts; they sorta are private to everyone but you. But what are they thinking that's got you all annoyed?"

"Nothing" He said a little too quickly.

I glared at him waiting for more.

"It's just people's opinions. They see us with Nessie and then are overly critical. I can hear it and it's so frustrating."

"What are they saying?" I asked, then I corrected myself. "thinking, I mean, tell me please,"

He sighed, and his tone of voice flattened so I would know he was directly repeating what he heard "Look at those two, no older than eighteen, and they have a daughter about seven. She must've been pregnant at eleven, what a whore."

He looked at me apologetically, but I shrugged.

"I don't care what people say or think, I have a beautiful husband and a beautiful daughter who I can love with all my hear heart for eternity. And they're wrong anyway, I was eighteen and you were seventeen, and Nessie's only four."

When we arrived home Jacob greeted us in wolf form, he and his pack and been adamant on maintaining patrol, even though Alice foresaw no danger. Renesmee ran straight for Jacob and hugged his neck, as best as she could manage, what with Jacob being so big. Then suddenly form inside the house there was a sharp intake of breath.

Edward ran to the house so fast, it was a strain for me to see him properly. Renesmee was sitting on Jacob's back and he ran into the house beside me, concerned. When we got into the house, the sight I saw was one that horrified me. Alice was lying on the floor writhing, whilst in a vision.

"What's wrong with her?" Emmett asked Carlisle who was examining Alice carefully.

"I don't know, if she was human, I'd suggest a stroke or epileptic fit, but she shouldn't do this," Carlisle said worried

Edward gritted his teeth, no doubt sharing Alice's vision, "It's Jane" he hissed.

Suddenly all eyes, including mine, and all of the werewolves, who had joined us by this point were on Edward.

"In Alice's vision," Edward said still staring at his sister writhing on the floor, "Jane is using her, 'gift' on Alice, and Alice can feel it."

Jasper let out a loud growl, "Let her try"

Alice sat up straight looking at Jasper, her vision apparently over. "Jazz, there's nothing you can do, Jane she's left the Voultouri."

She looked at Edward intently, and he nodded knowing what she was about to say.

"She's taking Dimitri with her, he's going to track us," and then Edward and Alice suddenly looked at me, "and for some reason Bella, you were there but weren't protecting us,"

How was that?

Chapter 3 coming as soon as I've written it