(A/N): Whoa, I'm back so soon? I'm really excited, that's why!

So Dranicus101 has won, named a character, and named the main character. And they were both awesome names.

So I know that this is technically only part of the first chapter in the game, but I decided to split it up instead. I'd rather have shorter chapters instead of longer chapters!

Monpoke-Um, what? Er, I'm sorry, but I don't understand...

Saraceaser-Wow, those are all pretty good names. I don't plan evolving into anything, maybe an espi or sylvi but not now...and I agree, Leafeon is the best.

Dranicus101-Correct! And thanks so much! So far the story in the game is really awesome and I'm looking forwards to it as well.

Nitro Indigo-Well, I'd usually agree with you, but in this case I'm actually referring to the plot as well. Since this is a brand-new game, unlike if I used EoS or R/BRT, some readers will think I own the plot, which I don't. I don't want to take credit for something I don't own. And so that is why sometimes it is actually OK to put up an 'I do not own" disclaimer. And as for standing out, I don't expect my story to be so popular it has 1,000,000,000,000,000 or something views per day. My best story, OoL, is barely reaching 1,000 and it's been up for half a year. As long as I'm pleasing the readers and everyone likes it, I'm OK with it not being world-famous. Also, this is the only retelling of PSMD so far (I think) so that boosts my chances :D

QOTD-In every PMD game besides this one, you are awakened from your unconsciousness at the beginning of the game by your-

(A) An unknown presence

(B) Your partner

(C) The main antagonist

(HINT-It's kind of easy, which is the most likely?)

Jeffery's name is by Dranicus101, and I give credit for Shayla's name as well.

'K, lets get into this thing!

EDIT: Shayla is now shiny! If you just started reading today never mind this edit.

Darkness. Deep, black, dizzying darkness. Nothingness. Everything was black. The world had sunk away from her reach, and everything was gone...

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Everything was still black. Still dark. Still distant. But there was a slight buzzing noise now, like a waterfall or something.

She opened her eyes a little. Everything was dark and blurry. She felt sore and weak, really dizzy, and really tired. Not to mention the terrible, pounding headache that felt like her head was split in two. She tried to swallow but her throat was too dry.

Urrrrgghh...wh-where am I...? She blinked, trying to get the dizziness to fade. She felt too disoriented to even think. I thought someone was calling me...but I'm not sure...

She shook her head, and she could make out blurs of green and some blue. Her ears were ringing to go along with the roar of the waterfall. ...What's going on...? Ugh...I-I can't remember...

...

She lay there for a few minutes, trying to get her head to clear. She was starting to get her vision back, and while everything was still really blurry, she could tell she was in a lush forest-like place. There was a waterfall pretty close to her, judging by the coolness of the earth and the buzzing roar.

She suddenly coughed weakly, still confused. The coughing seemed to rouse her. "W-where am I?" she croaked hoarsely. With a squint she made out more details of her surroundings-green grass, rich soil, trees and sunshine. "What is this place?"

She broke off, coughing again. "Ugh...my head is pounding..." She tried to think, but it made her head hurt more. Where was she? How had she even gotten here? She must have...wait, where was she last? Where was she even from? She shook her head again. Where do I come from? I can't remember! I must remember! It's me! I-wait, I don't even know what I do? Or who I am! I don't even know how old I am! I've forgotten everything!

"I can't remember anything..." She muttered, her voice still painfully rough. "N-n-not even-...-not even my name!" She gasped for air, panting a little, extremely confused. "W-what's going on here?"

...

"I'm parched." She realized. Her thirst was intense, and she could barely speak. "I-I need to find some water..."

Her cloudy gaze flickered to the roaring blue waterfall. "Oh, over there..." She groaned, pulling herself to her feet. It took a few moments to remember how to move. She couldn't really balance properly, she was too dizzy. So she ended up half crawling, half stumbling dizzily until she felt the cool wetness of mud underfoot.

She coughed again, and she leaned down and drank the water hungrily, letting the cool, delicious flow of the liquid touch her tongue.

Once she was done, she sank to the ground, eyes closed, and lay panting for awhile. Now that she had drunk, she felt much better. The headache was going away, and her senses and thinking were getting sharper.

"I-I feel alive again." She panted. "T-that was incredibly delicious. Never has water tasted...so good..."

She let out a long sigh. She felt calmer now, and she was starting to calm down. "Okay, calming down now..." She murmured, relief replacing the confusion and panic.

She opened her eyes to look down at the water, it was sparkling like diamonds, the sun shining and the whole forest reflected on its smooth surface. And there was something else reflected on it...

"Huh? What is that?" She asked, staring down with her head tilted. "I can see something reflected in the water..."

She leaned down, and ripples swarmed over the reflection, momentarily blurring the reflection. She crouched over the side of the pool patiently, watching as the ripples faded away to reveal the reflection.

Her eyes widened. Her jaw dropped. "What!? W-what's going on?! C-could it be...?!"

Staring up at her was the shocked face of a silverish eevee with startled blue eyes.

"Is it even possible...? H-have become...a-a Pokemon?"

"WHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?"

The eevee started breathing in quick, panicked gasps, turning in circles and shaking her head. "W-wh-why? I'm an eevee! A shiny eevee, for that matter!" She stopped, panting, freaking out as she looked down at her blue-gray paws. She unsheathed her claws to hold herself steady, and then started freaking out even more.

"Beheem!"

The eevee turned as three odd Pokemon floated over to her. Beheeyem, She thought dully, taking a slow step back.

"Beheem!"

Flicker flicker flicker...(The little lights on the Beheeyems' hands flashed as they seemed to communicate silently)

W-what is that? She thought in panic. She was already really panicked about being turned into an eevee, she didn't need this!

Suddenly, one of the beheem knocked her sideways with an obvious attack. "Whoa!"

Another shoved her away forcefully. "What's the deal all of a sudden?" She cried, panting. The three beheeyem surrounded her, their weird eyes oddly hostile. The eevee took a few cautionary steps backwards and ran into the woods, the three beheeyem pursuing.

She ran through the forest in terror, panting. "S-somebody help!" She called frantically, running as fast as she could. She twitched her ears and looked right. "Oh! O-over there!"

At that very moment, a nuzleaf was walking through the woods. He looked confused as the eevee skidded to a halt in front of him, gasping and panting. "HELP!" She screamed.

"Huh? What's wrong?" He asked, tilting his head. "What are you all in a fuss for?"

The eevee's head snapped up, her eyes wide. D-d-d-d-d-d-d-d-did that Pokemon just talk to me?

The nuzleaf looked alarmed. "Whoa! What did I do to you?" He asked, still sounding confused. "Sorry!"

The eevee's alarm didn't go away. She was breathing quickly, her heart pounding. HE'S TALKING.

"Err...Calm down!" the nuzleaf said, starting to get worried. "I'm Jeffery! It's all right, so just calm down now."

The eevee obeyed, swallowing a deep breath of air and letting it out in a long sigh. However, her head was still spinning with panic. Okay...I'm an eevee now, so I guess I can understand Pokemon now...

She spun around as the three beheeyem surrounded her and Jeffery.

"Huh?" Jeffery said, staring wide-eyed at the three beheeyem. "Where'd you all come from?"

Flicker Flicker Flicker...(The three beheeyem flashed their lights at each other)

The one on the right swung a full-body attack at the eevee at once, knocking her sideways. She backed away against a tree, shivering with fear.

"Whoa!" Jeffery cried. "What in the world!?"

The middle beheeyem smacked himself at the nuzleaf, knocking him back as well. "Eek!" Jefferey cried. "I'm scared!"

The two Pokemon fled from the attacking group of beheem, sprinting through the woods in terror. Suddenly Jeffery stopped as they reached a narrow path.

"Oh no...!" He cried, breathing heavily. "Ain't that one of them Mystery Dungeons up ahead? Them places are supposed to be mighty dangerous!"

"Behee! Behee!"

The two terrified victims quickly glanced back. "Ahhh!" Jeffery cried. "There ain't no other way to go! Brace yourself!"

The eevee nodded, and the two of them raced into the dungeon.

(A/N): WHOOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAOAO RANDOM STUFFFFSSSSSS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Insert Author's Note here.

Bye.

New chapter probably tomorrow.

Review. Plz. And do the QOTD.

-Static Eevee 198